Here is my rough draft for part 10.
If you are confused, check out the authors notes on part 9, the rough draft for part 9, and part 10.
Love you all so so much!
Then Blaine is shaken awake, it's the same nurse from earlier (the big dude that picked up Kurt last chapter), speaking softly, saying he's here to move kurt to an overnight room. He seems nice, blaine remembers being mildly terrified of the bulking man earlier- Oh my god, idea: make them friends. Yes. Yes, and more yes. Pick a cute name for him, he's a new character. Anyway, Blaine steps away from the bed as he watches the big dude (call him by name now,) slowly and gently lift Kurt out of the bed and into a wheelchair—kurt stays asleep. Make this part really adorable, plz. Pls. Anyway, blaine then follows big dude out as nurses come in to reset the room, (don't forget blaine's jacket, please!) Blaine pushes Kurt and the big guy pushes the IVs (after seeing big dude pushing both, Blaine offered) make convo. Cute convo. About what? I don't fucking no. Just make cute convo as they head to the elevator and then to level 4.
Big guy puts Kurt in the bed, blaine picks a new seat and pulls it to Kurt's bed. Big guy leaves (oh hell yes he will come back later, though. I haven't even written any dialogue on this guy yet and I already love him) Blaine checks his emails, (make some filler paragraphs here about random emails,) then falls asleep again, (remember when I gave you two options of his sleep position earlier? Pick the one you didn't pick the first time. Mix it up. )
NOTE: make sure its clear that big guy is a nurse. Don't just hope they remember from the last chapter, I don't want it to seem like theres a weird guy derping around the hospital picking up people and moving them.
Now lets do some adorable Kurt/blaine dialogue. Kurt wakes up Blaine, figure out a reason. Was he too cold? Too hot? In pain? Confused? Not tired anymore? Was it morning? Decide. End this dialogue in Kurt asking Blaine to get in bed with him for some super- duper freaking adorable cudling in a hospital bed stuff 3 (no sexual stuff yet, silly, get your head out of the gutter! Maybe later. Note to readers in case I do end up posting this: like I've said before, this is my first time writing fanfictions. I giggle everytime I attempt the M rated stuff, but I will try before the story is over, rest assured.) They both doze off again . (man, this is a shit ton of sleeping. Try to make it seem natural. Or maybe they don't sleep? Maybe kurt gets checked up on a few times during the night? I mean, they are keeping him for a reason, they are not just going to ignore him all evening… )
A few medical paragraphs here are 150% necisarry. Meet kurt's over night doctor, have the oral surgeon check on him, nurses, keep it legit. At least 500 words that are actual medicaly oriented, plz.
sleepytime for Klaine as soon as the medical stuff is done! :)