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Jack's POV

I crawled back to the corner Kim still was hiding.
in her eyes I could see the horror I just went through.
Tears rolled over her cheeks and her eyes are full with them.
I could also spot a bit of hate against the guys who have done this!
"Kim, let it rest."I said painful. "How could they do this! I want to kill those guys! I….I…I…"
"If you do that, then they do the same to you! And I won't allow that!" I told her, moving close to her.
Al my bones are jelling to me to stop but i still keep on going.
I cuddled into Kim's arms and she helped me clean the wounds with our shirts.
"You know." a voice said. "this is the first time he does this. It is an evil man but this I did not expect."
I looked around and behind a door with a window I could see a face.
Kim has also seen it and apparently recognized her. "Old lady?" how did you end up here?"
I looked at Kim. Old lady? "You mean, this is the hermit from the forest?" kim nodded.
"I knew you didn't leaved us behind!" the old lady started laughing. Well as far as you can call It laughing.
"Why would I? just when I started to like you two." After those sentence I passed out.

Kim's POV

"Ow no. not again." I shocked. "What's wrong dear?" the hermit say's. this always panics me.
"Jack fainted once again…" I said. "well good." the hermit now said.
"now you can nurse his wounds with this." And she throws me a little bottle with purple stuff in it.
"ehhh… what is this?" I asked. "is is a medicine the ancient Japanners used to heal their wounds.
But is hurts a lot when you're awake so you have to put the medicine on quick."
So once again I began nursing him. That jerk Fergini has made a few nasty wounds to Jack, and he has been lucky if he don't get scars.
"so how did you end up in that mans arms anyway?" the hermit asked me. So I told the whole story.
From the snake bite to the part were captured by his men.
"so, if I am right, they are all the time after you, and not the book I took from you earlier?"
I nodded. "But why has he still took it from me then?" that moment Fergini appeared. "because I also knew about the spell."
An evil grin took over his face. But then disappeared. "but I don't know any Japanese so I can't translate it."
Then something caught my eye. The two guards beside fergini both wear a gun but neither was filled with bullets.
only Fergini himself was fully armed. Next time is our chance.

soon after fergini left Jack woke up.
i told him the plan i made and he insist. "but only if there are only guards."
i nodded and we kept on waiting.
the first chance to overpower the guards came sooner that we might hoped for.
one guard came in and walked to the prison door from the hermit and opened it to bring some food.
just when he wanted to close the door we strike. Jack threw the poor man a kick right in the face, then i made a slice and the man felt on the ground.
but our goal was to make him faint so he won't remember anything!
the guard pulled a knife and thought to master the situation again. but he was wrong.
jack had trained for this situation a long time and with a simple move he dodged all attacks the man did.
suddenly Jack stroke! he pulled the arm with the knife in a stone-grip and punched the poor man right in the stomach!
the guard flew threw the prison if it was a feather. but Jack didn't show any pity and immediately attacked with the form he had practiced in the forest.
Like a tiger he attacked and the man was defenseless! suddenly, and i don't know what he did, Jack touched a spot and the man fainted.
no time to waste, i run to the door from the hermit and opened it. she came out and we started running.
but when we came upstairs, Jack holds me back. "What is it?" i asked him. he pointed to a little tower at the wall of the villa.
"that is an sniper tower. we have to be careful with that. i bet they really have bullets and are loaded!" i nodded in agreement.

Jerry's POV

"euhhhh nothing Rudy." Milton said.
"we aren't making any plan's or something." Eddie followed.
"and we didn't heard that kim and Jack are still alive but captured by some guy's with guns who want's the two of them to make way." i told him.
but the moment i said that i realized what kind of dumbass i was.
"What? they are captured?" rudy was freaking out. just like milton predicted. "oh boy here we go." Milton said.
"Listen we've got a plan to save them, but it isn't easy."Eddie explained.
a stressed out rudy looked at us before walking in circles again. "well what is the plan of yours?"
i couldn't stand his behaviour. "Ow will you please relax? this is stressing us out as well dude."
"Ow yeah i will sit down, despite my two students are captured by some maniac and we have no clue where they are, will i sit down and relax."
rudy continues. "Of course i'm not sitting down and relax yo, IM FREAKING OUT!" milton began talking.
"way to go Jerry, i told you he was gonna freak out and if he heard the plan he never let us do it!"
"Just tell the plan okay?" rudy said. so Milton did tell the plan.

"thank you sir."rudy ended the call. "the man we are looking for is someone called Fergini and appeared to live a little while outside Tokio."
i didn't understand it. "why do they know all of that but isn't he arrested jet?" rudy told me he was from great importance for the Japanese army.
"it appears he is an legal weapon dealer. but the police thinks he has killed people so they kept watch and now that i have told our story to them, they are almost certain."
milton became happy and asked if they are gonna help us. "yes. they are."

hope you liked it. i think this i a great one if i say so myself.
+ i'm already writing the next one but i want it to make it the longest one jet, so be prepared hahaha
ow yeah, ideas are most welcome ^.^