Hello everyone...actually I was thinking to take break from ff bcz of health issues...but a guest forced me to write n answer her...
Guest tumhare reviews Maine delete kiye bcz main aisi cheese avoid krti hu yeh soch k jiska jitna dmag utna lga lega but tum chahte ho k tumhare dmag ki jhlk yahan dikhni chahiye toh lo still I saved ur reviews bcz main story end pe post krti yeh aur answer tumhe khud milta...but u forced me k tumhe abhi jwab du tumhari hi language mein toh lo... Yeh rhe tumhare reviews sbko pdhne doh
1.Okay, I'll be honest over here. I love the story with all my heart but I've been noticing one thing that even when Sachin is wrong you make Angel asking for forgiveness from him and in this Sachin's mentality is so cheap! I mean, if she talks to her male best friend, he is jealous, I mean c'mon this is not love, this is just something very idiotic which cannot be called love cause a girl can never live with a man who never respects her nor her family (i.e his behaviour with Kuki). I hope you improve your mentality cause nowadays women are not weak, they are strong and can never stay with a man who keeps on feeling insecure even about the slightest thing! So please woman stop thinking that women are a weaker sex. It's the 21st century for Gods sake so please and btw, they way you've shown how Sachin always wants have s** with her clearly indicates how well you know the meaning of love. Love is not ending up in bed! It is to understand each other's emotions, to love each other and
it's definitely not going against their partners will so please first understand the meaning of love and then write a love story :) With this cheap knowledge which you have about love (which is not love), you can write a story about a one night stand or something :)
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You deleted my comment? Didn't you? Oh yes you obviously did cause you're a coward and you don't have words to answer me! Seriously, firstly you disrespect women and then you dare to delete my comment cause you know that I was right in the first place! You've shown that Angel is a modem and an educated girl and then you've shown that Sachin is dominating her?! I mean seriously, go and shower your old mentality somewhere else. He is forcing himself on Angel against her will! I wrote a lot in that comment and you read it so I hope you get a lesson from that!
So yeh rhe tumhare reviews...ab khush sb tumhare reviews pdhenge aur andaza lga lenge k kitne pani mein ho tum...first of all coward main nhi tum ho...bcz Jo apna naam tk nhi likha ska ya ski usse aur kya umeed rkhu...secondy who are you k mujhe pyar ka mtlb btao...i think tum apni love life se frustrated ho k dusron ko ulta sidha bol rhi ho...n thirdly agr maine story likhi ha toh definitely koi end plan kiya hoga...toh how dare are you to judge me n my story ...its better for you k story aur characters ko iske cover se judge na kro...agr zyada prblm ha its better to skip story but I knw tum pdhogi bhi ulte sidhe review bhi krogi bina naam k agr naam likha bhi toh Kisi aur ka hi hoga...am I right na...yahan tk mera swal ha ffians know me,my name n my face very well...aur haan ek baat mujhe kaise story likhni ha kaisi nhi none of ur business...jo ideas mujhe diye himmat ha khud hi likho... Main pdh k acha review krungi bcz mujhe dusron ki mehnt pe lecturbazi kr k unhe preshan krna nhi ata.. N main apne frnzz ko bhi bolungi pdhke review krenge pkka...okay m ready for your next bhasahn wala review... N to all stories ko real life se na jode... These are juzz imagination...
Okay move to story now...
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CID BUREAU
Kuki is working at her desk meanwhile Rajat Sachin n Kavin entered...Kuki smiled
Good morning Sachin sir
But he glared her n left without reply
Kuki sighed:good morning Kavin sir...ab kaise ha aap...
Kavin rudely:zinda hu vrna kasar toh koi nhi chhodi tumne
Kuki felt bad n looked Rajat abt to greet but take steps back but Rajat saw her sad n smilingly
Good morning Kuki
Kuki replied with sad smile:Good morning sir
Rajat:acha mujhe Kavin k case ki Puri details chahiye
Sorry Rajat yeh bht hi confidential ha hum tumhe nhi de skte,Purvi replied while entering with file
Rajat shockedly:kyun
Purvi:hmein hmare leading officer k orders ha Jo is case pe kaam kr rhe ha bs unko hi details di jaye...so we are sorry
Rajat nodded
Purvi moved to Dushyant n handed over a file
Dushyant:yeh kya ha Purvi
Purvi:Sir yeh high authorities k order ha ab se aap is case pe kaam nhi krenge blki aap ek drug smuggling case pe kaam krenge Rajat sir k sath mil k
Dushyant nodded but thinking
Mujhe kyun htaya gya is case se...
Meanwhile Shruti moved to Kuki n asked
Kuki mam main yeh lead follow kr rhi hu according to that hmein aur alert hona pdega...iske attack k baad yeh clear ho gya k koi toh ha Jo Kavin sir ko marna chahta ha Kisi bhi qeemat pr...
Kuki:haan Shruti but ab kya kru...Kavin toh baat bhi nhi krta mujhse...
"Ek idea ha",Purvi joining them
"Kya",both asked confusedly
"Bureau k baad Angel k yahan milte ha Vo toh hogi nhi as event mein 5 hi din ha toh discuss kr lenge",Purvi said with smirk
Both nodded...n still talking about case...but all distracted by voice
Good morning everyone
A guy with fair complexion evergreen smile n naughtiness in eyes entered bureau
All attention turned toward him
Shruti making weird face:yeh yahan bhi...
He stood in centre:hello btw aap log soch rhe honge ye handsome Sa smart Sa super cool Sa rajkumaro jaise ldka kon ha
Shruti mumbled:raj Kumar my foot
Kuki smiled at her...
Vivek continues:main hu inspector Vivek aaj se yhi aap logo k sath kaam krunga...hai na mze ki baat...btw aap sb bhi toh introduce kro khud ko
He moved to Purvi n held her hand:hi pretty lady...nacheez ko Vivek kehte ha aur aapki tareef
Purvi smiled:hmari tareef hmein pyar se purvi bulate ha
Vivek:nyc to meet you
Purvi:same here
Rajat seeing this with anger n start coughing fakely
Purvi ran to him n start patting his back:Rajat kya Hua...Sachin pani doh...
He gave water n Rajat drank...but he felt something in her touch as he know this touch
He jerked her n moved to his desk leaving her confused...
Here Vivek turned to Kuki n both hugged tightly...
Vivek:Kaisi ho madam
Kuki:tumhare samne
"btw I missed u sweety",Vivek said while kissing her forehead
"tum nhi sudhroge",Kuki said while hitting his head playfully
"No chance babes",Vivek said naughtily
Kavin who's seeing this corner of eye n fuming in anger...he moved to them n start shouting
Koi kaam nhi ha...yeh apna pyar knhu Bahr ja ke dikhana yahan iski zrurt nhi ha... Bureau ha yeh tumhara ghr nhi... Smjhe tum dono
Vivek smiled:arrey yeh smel kahan se a rhi ha... Dekho
Shruti:tumhara naak khraab ho gya ha koi smell nhi ha
Vivek:arrey Jane Jigar Jan tammana a rhi ha Kisi k jlne ki...He said while laughing loud
Which made Kavin mad n he held Kuki arm tightly
Dekho yahan pe tum meri junior hi apne is bf ko smjha lo...n u Kuki bht shonk ha ldko se dosti bdhane ka kitno ko bevkoof bnaogi kbhi main fir Dushyant aur ab yeh Vivek...wah tumhe toh gold medal milna chahiye
Kuki anger raised with this n she slapped him: Ainda bkwas krne se pehle yeh thappad yaad rkhna
N she ran out... Kavin still stood hurted n in anger
Purvi in anger: U deserved that... Vivek mera cousin ha kuki aur yeh London mein sath the aur tum chi...kavin yeh ha tumhari soch... Kash aunty hoti toh kmse km achhi soch de pati Vo tumhe
Rajat shouts:Purvi naam mt lo uska
Purvi confused:Rajat
Sachin pressed his shoulder:Rajat no
Rajat:I mean Kuki how dare she
Sachin:no Rajat...Kavin ko sch pta chl jayega(he almosts whispered)
Rajat glared him n moved to his desk angrily
Sachin:officers back to work ...
All nodded n engrossed in work...Kavin moved outside n went to cafeteria...But his feet stopped at door seeing Kuki crying while placing her head on Dushyant shoulder...n he's consoling her n patting her head...
"Kuki tum janti ho use fir kyun itna ro rhi ho... N kya zrurt thi uspe hath uthane ki bolo", Dushyant said while wiping her tears
"Kya krti use lgta ha k main vivek aur tumhe,yr why",She replied with moist eyes
"Dekho kuki this tym tumhe apne mission pe dhyan Dena ha...na ki in sb baaton pe",Dushyant replied
"I knw but Kavin he always hurt me n main uski ankhon mein"She stopped with Dushyant glare
"Don't forget tum London chhod k yahan kyu ayi ho...got it",Dushyant said angrily
"I knw...aur ab mera dhyan sirf mere mission pe hoga",Kuki replied wiping her tears
Dushyant smiled:that's like my khooni atma
Kuki smiled n hugged him:Thank you honey .
Kavin saw them n his anger raised up n start clapping
Wah kuki Wah...andr Vivek yahan Dushyant kya baat ha...tum toh bht hoshyiar nikli
Kuki held Dushyant hand:chlo honey
Kavin:haan le jao ise bhi...aur kucch toh ata nhi ha but yeh ldko ko ungliyo pe nchana ata ha
Dushyant jerked kuki hand n held Kavin from collars
Tum kya smjhte ho khud ko...Jo mn mein aya bologe...main Sachin ya Rajat nhi tumhara pagalpan shunga..
Kavin:chhod
Dushyant:tu apne aap ko smbhal le vrna mujhse bura koi nhi hoga
Kavin:kya krega bol
Dushyant abt to punch him but Kuki nodded as no...He left him n moved out hurriedly...
She abt to move but Kavin held her hand n pulled close...n looked straight into her moist eyes...he rubbed her tears with thumb
tum lakh koshish kro muhabbt ko mitane ki
pr mujhe tumhi se muhabbt ha aur tumhise rhegi hmesha
Both were lost in each other eyes but came out of trance with peon voice
Kuki mam aapke liye parcel aya ha
Both came out of trance...
Kuki took the parcel n Kavin left immediately... she opened parcel n shock to read...n ran to bureau instantly...She collided with Purvi at door...Kuki dragged her again outside...both were scared n sweating badly...
"Purvi",the only word Kuki said
"tumhe bhi",Purvi said
Kuki nodded n show her a letter written with words cut from paper...Purvi too showed her same...both were worried...
Purvi tensed:ab hmein aaj raat
Kuki:haan Purvi we must do that
Both hugged each other with moist eyes n said
Hum unhe kucch nhi hone denge but kre kya...sch toh bta nhi skte ab
"Ek idea ha",Shruti said while coming
"Kya",both exclaimed in shock...
Shruti tell them something n a satisfactory grin appeared on their faces
Purvi:done
Shruti:di chle ab
Both nodded n left...
Day passed like this...
EVENING
All were leaving for home...Shruti reached parking lot n hid herself behind car n sat leaning back to tyre...n she is scared n nervous...Meanwhile Vivrk came n sat beside her n whispers
Yahan kya kr rhi ho
Shruti put finger on his lips:shshsh...dhire
Vivek lost in her eyes...she too lost bit...
Khamoshiyan aawaaz hain
Tum sun'ne to aao kabhi
Chhukar tumhe khill jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..
Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan
both still sat in same position but separated by sounds of foot steps...both were embarrassed...n looked in different directions...Vivek abt to stood but she held his wrist n made him sat n nodded as no..he was confused but nodded
Kuki abt to start her car but it didn't...then she got down n checking tyres...her eyes fell on shruti n Vivek...Kuki signalled Shruti she show her thumbs up...she smiled
Kuki kicked her car n shouts irritated
Oh no...tyre puncture ab kya kru...
She said while seeing Kavin with corner of eye...She moved toward Kavin who's abt to start his car
"Kavin sir",She almost shouts
Kavin looking at her:haan
"Vo meri car khraab ho gyi ha kya aap mujhe drop kr denge...ek informer se Milne Jana ha",She said with a hope
"okay",he replied
She get inside very nxt moment n said
Pune Mumbai highway ki trf lijiye
Kavin shouts:are you mad tum vahan akele jaogi...main bhi jaunga...no arguments
Kuki nodded.
Rajat n Sachin abt to get in car but Kavin stopped them
Main aur Kuki informer se Milne ja rhe ha ..aap log
But cut by Purvi:Main aur Rajat sath ja rhe kucch kaam ha...
Rajat raising eyebrows:kahan
Purvi holding his hand:zruri kaam ha
Kavin nodded n left...n Purvi dragged Rajat toward bike n left...
Sachin walked out n looking for taxi...
Vivek stood up n asked
Car puncture kaise hui
Shruti stood with naughty grin n showing him nail in hand
Vivek shocked:tumne kiya yeh
Shruti:kuki di aur Kavin sir ko sath bhejne k liye.
Vivek:ohh Jodi maker ab hum bhi chle...sb ha chuke
Shruti nodded n he start bike...she settled behind him n drove to home...
Sachin still walking on road in search of taxi...but a jeep stood front of him...He turned n a smile crept over his lips n jumped on to passenger seat...
"Angel Tum yahan",He hugged her excitedly
"Haan,aapko lene ayi thi...pta chla aap chke gye.. Phn kyun nhi uthaya"Angel hugging him back
Sachin:pta nhi chla
Angel:chliye aapke liye surprise ha
"surprise",Sachin excitedly
"Haan",she said n drove away
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A/N:so done with chap...nxt chap surely contain rajvi n ishyant...with some drama...
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mithi...