REVIEW'S RESPONSE:

Guest: When I was planning how I would do this I realized it would take a while until the Peter and Jessica pairing. I now know how, but like I said it's going to take a while


St. Mary Ann Hospital

Peter Parker, Johnny Storm, Kitty Pryde, Bobby Drake, and Liz Allen are seen in a hospital room completely upset were Mary Jane Watson is seen in her hospital bed attached to some machines as she appears unresponsive. Suddenly MJ's mother, Mary Watson appeared as she saw her daughter in a hospital bed and went next to her and started crying. Peter left the hospital room and stood in the hallway upset, just as his Aunt May and Gwen appeared as they saw him appearing bruised. Peter looked back stunned and pale as he sees his Aunt May and Gwen for the first time after a long time since his return from the void

Peter Parker: …Aunt May…Gwen…

May Parker: Peter!

Gwen Stacy: Oh my god, Pete

May and Gwen rushed to Peter and gave him a tight embrace in relief, with Peter hugging them back

Peter Parker: Aunt May! Gwen!

May Parker: Oh Peter you're alright!

Gwen Stacy: Holy crap Peter you're okay…and you've gotten an inch taller…with muscles all of a sudden

May Parker: My goodness she's right, what happen Peter?

Peter Parker: Oh…That…is a long story….but I rather not talk about it now…Not while…

Gwen Stacy: …How is she?

Peter Parker: MJ's out of danger, but she suffered a massive damage in the. She's in a coma now

May Parker: A coma? Oh Mary Jane

Gwen Stacy: Did they say if she can wake up?

Peter Parker: Hard to say, her brain functions shown to be unresponsive, and depending on her injuries it maybe weeks or months until she opens her eyes

Gwen Stacy: Damn. MJ

May Parker: Are you alright Peter?

Peter Parker:

While in his thoughts with the Soul Gem still hidden in his pocket SHIELD Agent Johnson appeared as she approached him

Peter Parker: You

Jessie Johnson: Good evening and I take it you must be Mrs. Parker

May Parker: I am, and you are?

Jessie Johnson: My name is-

Peter Parker: Agent Jessie Johnson of SHIELD and assistant to Carol Danvers, the current Director of SHIELD

Jessie Johnson: Impressive intel you have Mr. Parker, but I am surprised that you know of Director Danvers like that

Peter Parker: She's also the one that kept Norman Osborn alive all this time

Gwen Stacy: Say what?

May Parker: Excuse me?

Peter Parker: Norman Osborn was kept alive after he killed his own son. I was there when Danvers shot him in the head, but today I found out that not only did the Oz formula allowed Norman to survive the shot but he was in a coma for seven months and you people kept him alive without even a thought of finding a way to depower him or know this was going to happen!

Jessie Johnson: …I admit…We did not expect this would happen and we assume he can't change

Peter Parker: Mary Jane Watson is in a hospital bed because of you people! You didn't even bother relocating him somewhere that doesn't involve him knowing where my house is!

May Parker: How, how did you let this happen?

Jessie Johnson: …Look…I-

Peter Parker: Where is she, where is Carol Danvers, and what the hell's going on right now!?

Jessie Johnson: …That's classified…

Gwen Stacy: Excuse me!? My friend's in a coma because of you, and the only thing you have to say "That's classified"!?

Jessie Johnson: I understand that and the family will be compensated

May Parker: That still isn't enough, Osborn was under your watch and you let this happen!?

Jessie Johnson: I apologize, but there's nothing I could do or know…This…it out of my jurisdiction

Still unhappy with her reply Peter took out the Soul Gem from his pocket, while keeping it hidden from everyone else, and used it on Johnson to force her to tell him. Johnson is now under the effect of the Soul Gem as Peter manipulated her to answer his questions

Peter Parker: You are going to tell me Johnson…You will tell me…

Jessie Johnson:

Peter Parker: What's…going…on!?

Jessie Johnson: …This is classified…but there was a break-in from one of Stark's labs which contains super-soldier program, and while we don't know so far the evidence itself so far believed that Nick Fury was going to sell the information to the Russians and Chinese for a possible invasion

Peter Parker: What?

Gwen Stacy: No way

Jessie Johnson: He's under SHIELD custody right now as we speak

Peter Parker: …I don't believe it

Jessie Johnson: Pardon?

Peter Parker: Fury maybe many things, but this is not how he does things. That's just not him!

Jessie Johnson: I'm sorry you feel that way, but the evidence-

Peter Parker: What about Carol Danvers?

Jessie Johnson: She's currently in a secret SHIELD Hospital

Peter Parker:

May Parker: Peter

Gwen Stacy: What are gonna do Pete?

Peter Parker: …The Ultimates, where are they now!?

Jessie Johnson: They're recuperating and in Tony Stark's Penthouse

Peter Parker: And that's where I'm going

Jessie Johnson: Pardon?

Gwen Stacy: Wait, you're just gonna barge yourself into the Ultimates like that!?

Peter Parker: That's the idea

May Parker: But Peter, what about Mary Jane?

Peter Parker: The guys are here if anything happens, just make sure you called me if anything goes wrong!

Jessie Johnson: Wait, what are you planning to do?

Peter Parker: Don't know…I'm still thinking about it. I'll make something up on the way

Peter hid the Soul Gem back in his pocket and heads off to go to see the Ultimates, leaving May, Gwen and Johnson wondering what he plans to do


Washington DC

The White House: Outside

After meeting with the President, Gregory Stark went inside a military chopper as it flew off. While in the air Gregory took out his phone and gave the call

Gregory Stark: This is Gregory Stark, phase 2 is now complete. Initiate Phase 3, and send in the Spider

Gregory hangs up his phone and talked to the pilot

Gregory Stark: Pilot!

SHIELD Chopper Pilot: Yes sir

Gregory Stark: Send the word to the Triskelion in New York; bring Nick Fury to the USS Jimmy Carter. I want to have a word with that traitor in person

SHIELD Chopper Pilot: Understood sir

With everything going as planned Gregory displayed a smile on his face


Outside Tony Stark's Penthouse

Spider-Man is seen swinging towards the Penthous, with his costume still barley torn while bandages are seen visibly and covered in blood from his fight with Green Goblin, while still thinking about what he did in the hospital with the Soul Gem

Spider-Man: (What am I doing? Hell, what did I do? Did I really use that Gem on her? I wouldn't even think of doing that…The old me wouldn't, but now this. Fury a traitor? What happen since I've been gone, a part of me would have thought of using the Gem on…him…The other Spider-Man…Man, to think there was another me, another clone posing as me for the past seven months while I ended in the Void, what did I miss since them? I should have asked him, or perhaps used the Gem…on him…but I can't because he did the bravest thing he could have done. Hell that should have been taking the bullet instead of him. Who knows what would happen, but he deserved better then what he got. He took a bullet for Cap, then an explosion happened, and now his organs were showing and he was bleeding to death!? Hell was he left there to die, and nobody came back for him!? Would that happen if it was me!? My god what would happen to Aunt May if I die!? And to Gwen, to MJ, to Johnny and the others, and even…Jessica…Jessica Drew. Still can't believe it…Hell I still can't believe that Arachne is her, and I still can't get over it or the fact that she was the only person I've ever traveled with and trusted. It never once left my mind after finding out that Arachne was Jessica Drew this whole time, and she died for me. She actually died for me, the one person I've grown to care for, and what's worse is finding out that in another life we were together…I mean romantically together…I mean how the hell did that happened!? How did any of it happen!? She's my clone for crying out loud, it would be like I'm in a relationship with myself, so yeah okay we do have the same taste in things and yeah we both left in good terms, but is that really a reason for us to be together!? Was there a point for something like this to happen!? But if it really happened then could the other me didn't think of her as a clone but more of a woman, was that it!? Did the other me think like that? If it's true then would I see her as…holy crap…Holy crap am I actually thinking about it!? Oh gross! Oh nuts just snap out of it Parker! Just snap out of it okay! Ignore that for a moment and just focus on now!)

Spider-Man reached the building and climbed up towards the penthouse as he sees a window open, only to hear a vomit sound coming from it

(HURK!)

Spider-Man: Huh?

Tony Stark's Penthouse: Bathroom

Steve Rogers: You sure you're okay, Tony?

Tony Stark: Honestly, I'm great. A lifetime of alcohol abuse has been perfect training for my oral chemotherapy. Throwing up has always been a big part of my morning routine

Steve Rogers: Can I at least get you a glass of water?

Tony Stark: No, if you just give me a hands up, I'll be fine, Cap. My legs are a little shaky, but I'm otherwise as good as I've ever been

Spider-Man: Are you kidding me, you look terrible

Both Steve and Tony were shocked and surprised that Spider-Man appeared from the bathroom window, with his costume badly damaged and covered in bandages, as he entered and landed on the floor

Steve Rogers: Spider-Man!?

Tony Stark: Kid!?

Spider-Man: At least that mustache of yours wasn't messed up, part of the Tony Stark trademark deal

Steve then approached Spider-Man and placed his hand on his shoulder as Spider-Man removed his mask

Tony Stark: Kid, you look like crap…and muscular all of a sudden

Steve Rogers: Spider-Man! My god you're alright!?

Peter Parker: Never been better, although I still need some

Tony Stark: Seriously when did get muscles all of a sudden…and taller. Did you take steroids all of a sudden?

Peter Parker: …Rather not talk about it, and believe me the night I have right now I don't wanna say another word

Steve Rogers: I heard about what happen at downtown Manhattan, what happened?

Peter Parker: Norman Osborn happened

Steve Rogers: Osborn!?

Tony Stark: Wait, that guy is alive, how!?

Peter Parker: Carol Danvers

Steve Rogers:

Tony Stark: …Oh…So what happened?

Peter Parker: He's dead, and if you wanna know how I killed him

Steve Rogers: You killed him?

Tony Stark: Wait, you killed Norman Osborn

Peter Parker: Seriously, what the hell is going on you guys? I just heard Fury became a traitor and now he's in jail!?

Tony Stark: Wait, how did you know that?

Steve Rogers: This is something you shouldn't be part of soldier, not in your condition at least

Peter Parker: Well guess what Cap, I'm recovering and I'm already a part of it, because tonight people got hurt and maybe killed when I fought Osborn and his guys, and not only that I just came from a hospital leaving behind the very people I'm suppose to protect, who is now in a coma! So as of now I'm at the point of no return and I'm sticking with it, so you guys better be honest with me because I can't deal with me not knowing. What the hell is going on!?

Steve Rogers:

Tony Stark:

Tony Stark's Penthouse: Living Quarters

Tony and Steve appeared were Monica, Namor and Thor are seen sitting on the couch and watching TV, but were surprised by the unexpected appearance of Peter with them

Thor: Spider-Man?

Peter Parker: Hey Thor

Monica Chang: Wait, is that him?

Namor: Well, so the child lives. Impressive since I've heard word you were shot saving the life of Captain America. How did that work out for you?

Steve Rogers: Namor

Peter Parker: Wait, I've seen you before, at Midtown a couple months back. You were fighting the Fantastic Four

Namor: Indeed, and I'm please that you would remember me. I am Namor, and I expect some manners from you child

Peter Parker: The last time I saw you, nearly all of New York was about to be drowned. What is he doing here?

Tony Stark: Fury made a deal with Namor. I don't know what it is, but he got Atlantis back, now he's ruling the place with his iron fins

Namor: And yet I have Susan Storm at my company, incase you need reminding

Peter Parker: Susan Storm!? How the hell did that happen!?

Tony Stark: Don't ask. Seriously don't ask

Peter Parker: And who's she. I've never seen her before

Monica Chang: The name's Monica Chang kid, and shouldn't it be past your curfew?

Tony Stark: She's also Fury's ex-wife

Peter Parker: Fury was married?

Monica Chang: Was, now I suggest you go home and think about masturbating while thinking about a girl or something because here there's no place for a kid here

Peter Parker: …Okay I just like met you like 8 seconds ago and already I don't like you

Monica Chang: It's not part of the job to be liked kid

Steve Rogers: Enough Chang. Peter took a bullet for me tonight and for that he earned his place to be here

Monica Chang: And yet you're not even in a hospital bed, what gives?

Peter Parker: I was fighting for my life against someone who was suppose to be dead and a friend of mine is in a coma

Monica Chang: And yet you're here and not there

Peter Parker:

Thor: Spider

Tony Stark: Speaking of, you want anything kid. A soda pop

Peter Parker: I'm good thanks

Tony Stark: Suit yourself

Monica Chang: You know what you need, some alcohol. Don't kids your age get drunk and have sex with girls

Peter Parker: I don't drink. It serves a bad example

Monica Chang: You wuss

Tony picked up his glass of Martini

Tony Stark: Okay drop it Chang. He's here for Carol, so let's not make things worse for him

Monica Chang: Speak for yourself. Are you really sure you're fit for all of this?

Tony Stark: Oh, for god's sake. Would everyone please stop treating me like an invalid?

Peter Parker: Why, what happened with him

Tony Stark: You don't need to know kid

Monica Chang: He had a brain tumor. Just got it removed today

Peter Parker: Wait, what?

Tony Stark: Seriously Chang?

Monica Chang: You told him I was married to that one-eyed bastard, so that makes us even

Peter Parker: You had a brain tumor?

Tony Stark: …Um…yeah?

Peter Parker: …You had a brain tumor, got it removed today, and now here you are drinking, is that a martini? You're drinking a martini after you barf on your own toilet?

Namor: The child has you there Stark

Tony Stark: Hey, it helps relief the stress kid

Peter Parker: Is alcohol the only thing that relieved you of your stress, besides water, while you just barf on your own toilet just moments ago, and you're drinking martinis while your bathroom smells like vomit?

Monica Chang: That's a good point

Peter Parker: But seriously if some dude with a camera sees this then you know what the kids are gonna call you? Sir Iron-Barf-A-lot!

Tony Stark: Excuse me?

Peter Parker: Sir Iron-Barf-A-lot! You know because you're in this big metal suit, you blast people with it, and then you threw up a lot because of your alcohol problem. Hell you might vomit on some random bad guy's face, and some of it ends up in their mouth if you keep this up or they'll vomit in your big fat iron shoes

Namor: Hah, the child is amusing

Monica Chang: Okay, I admit that's kind of funny

Tony Stark: I just got my tumor removed and you're already making vomit jokes?

Peter Parker: Helps relief the stress, and after what happened tonight I need some

Thor: Let the boy be Stark, and I must say you've earned yourself a fine battle scar

Peter Parker: Thank. Why aren't you speaking in your regular voice?

Thor: Stark started an online petition that he would give away $10 million dollars if I speak like a normal person

Tony Stark: Don't get me wrong Thor, but I just can't stand the Norse God speech pattern of yours

Thor: Well I find it insulting

Peter Parker: I actually like the accent, its more foreign, which adds abit of culture

Monica Chang: At least someone here didn't mind abit of culture into their lives

Tony Stark: What, I'm not a man of culture?

Monica Chang: Keep being a loud-mouth drunk and I might consider it, Sir Iron-Barf-A-lot

Tony Stark: Really Chang?

Namor: That is what we will call you from now on. Sir Iron-Barf-A-lot

Tony Stark: You too, Namor?

Peter Parker: Wait; is that the Triskelion, in Iran?

Peter sees on TV the Triskelion currently in Iran

Monica Chang: That's right. We had a Vampire infestation and someone had the bright idea of bringing it to the Middle-East were it still has sun

Steve Rogers: It was the only part of the world that still has sun

Tony Stark: You believed in vampire's kid? Because they were fun

Peter Parker: You believe I was bitten by one, because that was fun too

The group were surprised to hear that Peter not only encounter a vampire but was bitten by one too

Monica Chang: Seriously?

Peter Parker: Yeah

Namor: You've encountered these beings?

Peter Parker: I've fought them

Tony Stark: …How did that work out for you?

Peter Parker: ...Not so good…

Steve Rogers: …Why are you really here Peter?

Peter Parker: ...Is it true, that Fury turned traitor?

Tony Stark: Afraid so kid. He's been smuggling raw material to the Russians and the Chinese for the past 15 years

Peter Parker: I don't believe it. Nick Fury maybe many thing, and him being a complete jackass is one of them, but I know for certain he can't do something like this unless there's a reason for it

Tony Stark: Sorry to disappoint, but we got evidence that says otherwise

Monica Chang: I actually agree with the kid, it doesn't add up

Tony Stark: What, you too?

Steve Rogers: In what way?

Monica Chang: I know my ex-husband maybe the biggest piece of scum on earth, but I still don't think he would do something like this

Peter Parker: You think he's set up?

Monica Chang: I'm certain of it


SHIELD Heli-Carrier: USS Jimmy Carter

A restrained Nick Fury is seen with Gregory Stark, who is revealed to be the one who set Fury up

Nick Fury: It's you, isn't it? You're the guy who set me up

Gregory Stark: Of course it's me. Who else could it be? I'm the man behind the curtain, Nick. The wizard who makes all the magic happen. I've got my fingers into SHIELD's entire computer network. It wasn't hard to have you and Danvers at each other's throats. Isn't that how villains used to demolish teams in all the old comic books? By falsifying evidence and pitting them against each other? Divide and conquer. It works every time

Nick Fury: But why would you want to run SHIELD? You're one of the richest guys in the world

Gregory Stark: Because Tony and I are playing a far grander game then you could ever understand: He designs a car, so I design a rocket. He becomes a millionaire, so I became a billionaire. He buys his way into the super-hero community and so I have to be the man who tells the super-heroes what to do. It's been that way from the moment we were born. Tony and I just like making things interesting for one another

Nick Fury: By doing what? Arming your country's enemies

Gregory Stark: Oh, Nick. You just don't get it, do you? I want the world at my finger tips, I'm going to reorganize the world as I see fit, I'm going to smuggle armed forces into rogue states, and it all begins with a bomb

Nick Fury: What?

Gregory Stark: Believe it or not Nick; I actually had a different idea before I changed it, and the thought of it still got me curious and interested. It was a year ago since the idea came to pass, and I still can't figure out how this idea came to be. I sometimes get the feeling someone implanted an idea in my head, but as I got to think about it the idea itself was interesting. The world itself is a very complicated place, and it needs careful handling to avoid suspicions. I may have SHIELD, but I realize something more radical needs to happen if I were to keep it permanent, something that will see the world change in just one day, and the world will bow down to me. That's were something interesting along the way has happened

Nick Fury: Interesting in what way?

Gregory Stark: Remember Miss Romanov? We've injected her with nanites just incase something like the Liberator attack were to happen, but what if I get to use those nanites for a different purpose, what if I get to use them and rewrite the minds of others to fit my agenda, and that's where it gets interesting. What if I get to inject every politician around the world into playing nice with each other, something that will make things easier for us

Nick Fury: If that were true then people will easily suspect something has gone wrong, because they won't believe politicians would play nice just like that. Hell even our own government won't buy into it

Gregory Stark: And that's where my next part of the plan goes. It involves a bomb

Nick Fury: Excuse me?

Gregory Stark: Tell me, what is it about the Middle-East that got our politicians so interested in it? Influence, Zionism, and Oil. Those are the three things are what we get from that region if it involves completer submission, but when countries reject submission becomes an enemy of the state. So we performed assassination and coups against those regimes and we installed in a friendly regime that suits us, but later on there will be protest and revolutions against those regimes we've place and the whole things starts up again. My idea however requires certain pieces to be involved and certain pieces to fall, that's were the bomb comes in. I'm going to blow-up the Middle-East

Nick Fury: What!?

Gregory Stark: I already have access to every chemical and nuclear plant in the region. All I have to do is set it to explodes, and once it's done I can move into my next phase of the plan, I've already smuggled a large number of aid to the rebels against the wretched dictators and corrupt kings. And when they're gone the ones under my influence will be put in power. An old piece fall a new one takes its place, those that becomes an embarrassment or a threat must be wiped out, creating new pieces in place

Nick Fury: Every rogue state under your umbrella, with every Triskelion in the nation's capital. I wouldn't lie if I say that I like what you think, but what does this have to do with you blowing up the Middle-East knowing what the effect will be?

Gregory Stark: That's where my long-term plans come ahead. The effect this will have shall impact Oil prices to a record high, putting the world economy at risk of inflation and collapse, but once it's been done I get to show the world a much lighter side of SHIELD, introducing it as a humanitarian play for the people to see, and when it's done the politics change and I get the influence I need. Stark wanted to build weapons that can destroy, I on the other hand want to build something that will create. A technology that will free the world of Oil itself, create a world free of Oil and you create a world free of war. My Eco-friendly technology will not only save the world money, but will also help advance humanity even further

Nick Fury: I see where you're going with this, but would our government accept such an idea?

Gregory Stark: Again, you didn't pay attention, Nick. I inject the nanites into every politician around the world into playing nice with each other, and that includes the entire United States government

Nick Fury: What

Gregory Stark: I already have a lobbying firm in Washington that has bought a number of politicians into my finger tips, but there are some that refuse to play ball, some that are incompetently stupid, and some that have outlived its usefulness. I already have John McCain in my list, and that sad old pathetic prune of a vegetable will be left in the streets with no one to care for, and with all of them gone my lobbying firm will place everyone in my payroll in power, putting the entire US government in my control

Nick Fury: A coup. You're plotting a coup against your own government.

Gregory Stark: Indeed, and this is something that requires the public's knowledge. Throughout history we've been known to support terrorist organization that would one day backfire, well I've found one that would suit my purpose. The Iranian paramilitary insurgent group, the People's Liberation & Resistance, or PLR for short. That organization is already listed as a terrorist group and many within Washington backs them already. I've already given them the tools needed, but only to overthrow their government, because once that's done SHIELD will intervene and bring them down.

Nick Fury: What

Gregory Stark: I'm a man who knows how politics work, and I know a flaw when I see one. Before this operation I've already gotten myself a man inside the Iranian government. Once they get dealt with, my man inside the Iranian government gets a seat as the new President, and the politicians in Washington that supported the group will be exposed and removed from power. Leaving only the ones in my payroll running things from now on

Nick Fury: You would have not only the rogue states, but you would have the United States Government in your control, while you set members of government up for this. Together with SHIELD, you would use the nanites to control the remaining government of the world. A world government under your own thumb with SHIELD as its military forces along with every Triskelion on all countries, with each countries own army running each section of the region, while you profit from your technologies that would free the world of Oil and other resources. A create-and-destroy money making scheme while the people see you as their savior of the free world

Gregory Stark: Now you get it. Iran won't be the first as I already got plans for many others, with Saudi Arabia, Russia and China to follow next as I got a man inside ready and waiting. A defected Saudi prince who gave me everything I need and he will have his seat in the House of Saud. Every energy corporations will be excluded, leaving only me as the only organization left, as I alone will control the regions resources plus Oil supplies, which will have me controlling the world's economy in the process, and I will go down in history as the best they ever had

Nick Fury: I have to admit, Doctor, while this idea of yours is radical, I can actually see the advantage and benefits that will come of it, and Doctor, I like were you're going with this

Gregory Stark: I had a feeling you'd appreciated it. It is a shame that you would have to be removed from the picture. Don't take this personally, Nick, I always found your company to be quite entertaining, but this is business as usual

Nick Fury: Comes with the top job right?

Gregory Stark: Indeed

Nick Fury: Well I hope you realize you're not the only one who likes to make a grand scheme. I'm actually quite the plotter myself

Gregory Stark: In the old days maybe…

(BRRKKT) (BRATTT) (BRTTT)

Gregory Stark: …But now I'm afraid you've just been outclassed

The SHIELD Soldiers opened fire at Fury as he falls and left bloodied on the floor

Gregory Stark: Clean up this mess, would you, boys?

All SHIELD Soldiers: Yes, sir


AUTHOR'S NOTE: I've taken some elements from "Ultimate Avengers vs New Ultimates issue 4", but added my own twist from my other story involving Nanites

Anyhow here we have Spider-Man now with the Ultimates until he confronts Carol Danvers, but also here we have him using the Soul Gem on that SHIELD. The Gem will play a part in a later story, but this is the fist taste of what Peter will it for

I'll try to get the Peter and Jessica pairing soon as I can, so bare with me until it happens

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