So obviously I didn't start back up with this
To anyone who may have actually read this, sorry. I will be starting a new story to take the suggestion I was given. I think this is better, I hope the writing is better, I'm working on it.
So expect a twilight story called Fornever or Never or Forever or something. Um here's a little sample of it I guess:
"She sighed in a defeat and restlessness and laid back on the grass. I too laid down and stared at the stars and the clouds that, after photography, seemed to be flat, like someone had smoothed them out to 2D. I looked over to see that Bella had fallen asleep, no doubt with a song in her head. I laughed to myself and shook her shoulder gently. I helped her up and supported the majority of her weight on the walk home. "