The Betrayed Rises

by LegionZ

Ash has been defeated in the Kalos Finals. As a result, most of his closest friends and Pokemon turn their backs on him. He leaves for five years, training for the tournament of a lifetime, and comes back with one goal. Gain revenge on those who betrayed him. But he doesn't do it alone. STORY COMPLETE! PLZ Review, Follow, Favorite, ETC.

14. MY NEXT STORY IS

Hey Guys, this is NOT the new story, as everyone can probably already tell. I am only posting this to give you all an update. I spent the week taking in the general consensus of what you all want and what I got was very, very clear. You all do NOT want to see the Betrayed Rises sequel. But… at the same time, you all don't want to see the Harry Potter fanfiction either.

You all voted by an overwhelming majority to see an entirely new fanfiction. And I mean it wasn't even CLOSE. I got like two votes for Harry Potter, and none for the betrayed rises sequel. I got like over 25 PM's and reviews supporting a new fanfiction (Pokémon Betrayal). So of course, now that means I may not even type the LOS chronicles sequel within the year. I left this decision up to the popular decision of you all and I am going through with your opinion.

So, that leaves a lot of unanswered questions. If I'm doing the Pokémon betrayal fanfiction, I'll establish this now. It's definitely going to be at least a month, maybe more before anything is ready. Anything more than that is also possible. This is finals time for me in college so any time I get to type is really a blessing for me. Ash is, obviously, going to be the main character. This brings me into this conversation: I am possibly looking for someone to help me with this story.

I am pretty sure I'll be able to stand up and keep up with the story, but anything is possible after all. I may just end up not doing anything with anyone else anyway, but the door is open right now. PM me if you're interested in helping me with this story.

These are other things that must be decided before I start typing:

1. Ash is the main character; do I include an OC as one of the main characters as well like I did in the LOS chronicles?

2. Who is Ash's pairing in this story? (What Female from Pokémon should I choose to be his mate?)

3. How would the traitors betray Ash, and would they take his Pokémon?

4. WHO would betray Ash?

5. Chapter Length: (3-4k Chapters or 5-8k Chapters Length-wise)

6. Should I keep the plot secret for extra drama, or should I relay the plot with everyone else beforehand so I get popular opinion?

These are just some of the many things that I must consider before I begin typing. It would mean a lot to me if you all reviewed and PM'ed me to let me know what you believe is the best course of action for me. I will respond back to everyone who gives me their feedback. I will be giving an update on the story by next Friday, possibly earlier.

Thanks guys, see you all soon! Thanks for reading this update!

LegionZ