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CALEBS POV

We ran up to my parents house and knocked on the door.

"Who's there?" asked my father through the door.

I took a deep breath. "It's Caleb," I said.

"Oh," said my father, but didn't open the door.

"Okay, Caleb, let me handle this," said Stella.

"No! No!" I whispered.

"OPEN THE DOOR, PRIOR, OR I WILL LITERALLY BREAK IT DOWN!" yelled Stella.

"Did you just call his dad Prior?" asked Meg, her eyes wide.

"Yes, I did," said Stella. The door opened. My father stood there. He looked tired and thinner. 'You did this' said a voice in my head.

"Who are you people?" he asked.

"It doesn't matter! Erudite is going to attack Abnegation! You need to hide! You need to go into safe houses!" said Stella, urgently.

"How do I know that you're not spies for Erudite?" asked my father. I was a little hurt.

"Why would we warn you that Abnegation was going to be attacked?" asked Daniel. My father looked like he had been won over.

"Where would we hide?" he asked.

"In basements of houses. Secure places," said Sunny.

"Go tell other people," said my dad. We all nodded and ran to other houses. Before I left, my father pulled me back.

"Caleb," he said. "Thank you." I smiled. I had my father back.

Stella and I went to the initiates dorms. As I told the boys in the dorms, what was happening, some didn't believe me.

"We need to move quickly, people!" said Charity, coming out of the dorms. My old neighbor, Susan said, "We need to get all the little kids."

Stella and Charity nodded and ran off. I showed the initiates who believed us to different safe houses. We collected people and showed them safe houses where they could hide.


"So are you children Caleb's friends from Erudite?" asked my mother as we ate dinner. We were still laying in wait for the attack every day.

"Yeah," said Sunny.

"Why did you come here?" she asked. We all explained what had happened. We omitted the part where Jeanine forced us to track down Divergents.

My parents nodded slowly, taking it all in.

"How long until the attacks? Do you know?" asked my father.

"They might do it the day of the initiation ceremony. Nobody will suspect anything will happen that day," said Stella.

"We need to keep watching," said my mother. "We can't let Erudite do this."


After a few days of watching for them, we heard the Dauntless footsteps and ran. We saw other people running to safe houses. The Dauntless caught people and shot them. Every time a gunshot went off, Stella jumped and had a crazy look in her eyes. I noticed that my mother was running in a different direction. I was sure that she was going to help people escape the Dauntless. My selfless mother. Then, we heard a scream.

I looked over and saw Sunny clutching her arm.

"Run faster! Get to the safe house and we'll be able to help you!" yelled Stella. Sunny nodded, a tear trailing down her face.

We finally got to the safe house. There were some of my old Faction members and my friends. There were also Susan, my old neighbor and Charity, Stella's sister.

"Sunny, hold Daniels hand," commanded Stella. "This will most definitely hurt, so brace yourself." Sunny nodded.

Stella dug her knife into Sunny's arm. Sunny screamed and squeezed Daniels hand until it turned white. Stella winced as she dug around, like she could feel what Sunny was feeling.

"Got it!" she said. and dropped the knife and bullet. She had a why-did-I-do-this face.

All of us sat there, listening to the Dauntless footsteps outside.

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