A/N: HEY THERE PEOPLES! LOL! Anyway, a few things, 1: CHECK OUT MA NEW STORY! It's now uploaded, yada yada yada…..2: ENJOY CHAPTER 14!!!!

DISCLAIMER: Stephenie Meyer owns twilight and is smart, unfortunately for me, I'm not smart, so I don't own Twilight…

CHAPTER 14

BPOV

Edward kissed me.

Edward actually kissed me.

Edward gave me a peck on the cheek.

I was stunned when he did that. Stunned because I never expected it. But when I realized what happened, I smiled and placed my hand over my cheek. I smiled a goofy grin and still had my hand on my cheek. Edward gave me a peck on the cheek. Edward was smiling when he walked out. Edward kissed me on the cheek.

If I wasn't stunned at his action then I probably would have jumped him then and there. I would've demanded him to take me and go to the nearest closet, or drive back home…

But I didn't. I didn't mind that. It probably would've been embarrassing but now that I thought about it, I was glad I didn't.

I continued smiling and faced the computer. I tried to edit the story but my mind wandered back to Edward and his actions before he left. The way he held me when I fell, the way he kept close to my face when he looked at my computer….everything!

I finally finished editing when I got an email from Angela. It said that once I was done with this story, I could leave since it was slow today. I smiled and quickly left. I hopped in my truck and drove back to the apartments. I quickly got into the elevator, and when the doors opened, I bolted out. I was excited. Probably to tell Alice and Rose about my experience. Who knew a simple peck could have such a result.

I opened the door and threw my stuff in the corner.

"Rose! Alice! I'm back!" I shouted. I looked over to see Rose on the floor picking up…glass? I heard her muttering to herself.

"Stupid, no good, perverted Emmett."

"Rose?" I called out. She looked up at me.

"Oh hey. You're here early." She pointed out.

"My boss let me out early." I explained. I looked at the floor to see parts of the vase we had spilled everywhere.

"Rose, what happened?" I asked curiously.

"Emmett decided to come over. Idiot tripped and knocked it over." She told me. I smiled at her and raised one eyebrow.

"Oh, so Emmett came over today?" I asked her. She rolled her eyes, then narrowed them.

"No, we did not do that. Which reminds me, did you and Edward-" I interrupted her.

"No! We didn't!" I shouted in frustration, and she laughed.

"So tell me what happened. And give me more than just 'he came over and broke the vase'" I quoted.

"Fine. I guess I forgot to lock the door. I was watching TV when I saw him. I asked what he was doing here and he said 'to see you'" She mocked his voice and I laughed. "He grabbed me from behind when I tried to tell him to put me down, he silenced me." She explained, then blushed.

"Wait, wait, wait. When you say silenced me, do you mean that he kissed you to silence you, or put a finger to your lips?" I asked her.

"Number one?"

"Oh my god! Rose! Are you serious? He kissed you?" I started squealing.

"Yes." I squealed again.

"And what did you think?" I asked. She laughed.

"I think that you've been hanging out with Alice too much." She hinted and laughed. I glared at her.

"Well? What did you think?" I pressed.

"We didn't go deep, he just kissed me. When he tried to deepen it, I started to claw his face like I learned when I took those self defense classes." She explained and I laughed. Poor Emmett…

"He finally let go and that's when he knocked over the vase. I started yelling at him and I threw him out." She said triumphantly. I smiled.

"Glad you had a good time." I told her.

"Your turn. How was work." I remembered Edward's kiss and blushed.

"You did something Bells. What did you do? What happened? Did Edward do something to you?" She gasped. "You two did have sex! You liar!" She accused.

"No, no, no!" We didn't! I swear! Besides, if we did, I would've told you so that I could get out of this stupid bet." I told her.

"Okay, well then, tell me what happened!" She demanded and I giggled.

"Edward gave me a kiss on the cheek." I blushed the deepest shade of red and Rose gasped.

"He did? Oh my god Bella! I'm so happy for you! How cute. Start from the beginning, and don't just say, 'he kissed me', 'cause that won't work." She said my earlier quote and I laughed.

"He came to my office to hang out, but he scared me while I was trying to put something on my shelf and he caught me-" I was interrupted by Rose 'aww'ing. "in his arms. He set me down after a few seconds and came with me to my desk. While I worked, he stared at the computer, or so I thought. He was right next to my face, and every time he talked his sweet breath fanned my face. After a few minutes he said that he needed to go, and he kissed my cheek." I explained. Rose was squealing.

"Wait 'till Alice hears about this! Oh my god! You two would make such a cute couple. But you have to tell me. Was it a quick peck? Or did it last five seconds?" She asked me.

"It lasted six seconds." Rose smiled at me and I blushed. "Not that I was counting…."

"Aw, he likes you." She cooed.

"No, he-" But Rose interrupted me.

"Yes! He does! Otherwise, he wouldn't have kissed you on the cheek that long. Only guys that like someone do that. I should know." Rose told me. I sighed.

"Maybe you're right…." I though out loud.

"Which is exactly why Alice made the bet. She desperately wants you two to be together." Rose explained to me.

"Yeah, well, having sex for a first date isn't a very good idea…." I pointed out. She rolled her eyes.

"Oh come one Bella. Me and Alice have done that all the tim-"

"Okay, too much info there Rose! I did not need to know that." I shuddered and she laughed.

"But seriously though! You've been cooped up in this apartment almost all your life! You need to get out there." Rose explained to me.

"Last time I tried to go on a date I either ran away or almost killed myself." I told her.

"Yeah, well I'm not talking about dates." Suddenly, she beamed, I could've sworn I saw a light bulb go off over her head. She got up and pulled out her cell phone.

"Rose" I asked cautiously. "What are you doing…"

"Calling Alice. I have an idea." She ran off into her room and locked it. I put my ear against it to try and make out the words but nothing came out. But I did hear her footsteps coming over to the door. I quickly ran over to the couch and crossed my legs and looked at the TV. She came out with a beaming smile.

I narrowed my eyes. "You're smiling that smile. When you smile that smile that means you two are planning something. What are you planning?" I interrogated.

"You'll see. Alice is on her way over." Rose told me. For the next ten minutes I was fidgeting. I was nervous as hell.

"Oh stop fidgeting Bella, its not that bad. It'll actually be really fun!" She told me enthusiastically.

"Key word. Not that bad." I told her. She rolled her eyes and the door was yanked open by an enthusiastic Alice.

"Yay! I'm so excited! We're going to have so much fun!" Alice clapped excitedly.

"Oh my god Rose! We haven't done this in ages." Alice droned on.

"Where are we going!" I demanded. Rose and Alice smiled at me.

"We, are going clubbing!" Alice told me excitedly. "Aren't you excited?"

"Um, to tell you the truth, I'm not a big fan of clu-"

"Oh hush. Come on! We have to fix you up and everything! This is gonna be so much fun!" Alice was squealing and I shook my head. I didn't move and Alice and Rose dragged me by the arm into the bathroom.

"You will not move. You will not fidget. And you most certainly not complain. Got it?" Alice asked me fiercely. I quickly nodded my head.

"Okay then! Lets get started!" Alice said enthusiastically.

"Alice. It's two o'clock. Don't you think it's a bit early?" I laughed.

"Time equals beauty. Besides, I have to fix myself up and Rose has to fix herself up too." She told me. I sighed but nodded. Alice grabbed all sorts of torture devices from the cabinets and piled them in front of me.

"Geez, Alice. Don't torture me." I told her and she rolled her eyes.

"Whatever Bella. Just don't fidget."

*_*

"Stop moving!" Alice ordered. She had me on this chair for hours now and she wasn't done.

"You poked my eye with that stupid eyeliner!" I told her.

"Because you moved!" Alice defended.

"God Alice! Are you done yet?" I asked. She rolled her eyes.

"Maybe if you weren't fidgetingthen we would've been done earlier!" She explained and I huffed.

"Are you done now?" I asked in a nicer tone. She smiled.

"Just let me get your dress!" She told me excitedly.

"You got me a dress? When?" I asked her.

"Yesterday. I was shopping and saw the most perfect dress for you. So I bought it." She explained to me.

"Oh, thanks." I told her. Then I remembered something. "By the way, where were you earlier today?"

"Your welcome! And that's not important right now!" She darted out of the bathroom and I followed her.

"Um, Alice? Aren't you supposed to put on the dress before you apply the makeup?" I asked her. I really didn't want to start over.

"Not with this one. It's strapless so it's easier." She explained. She held out a strapless, blue dress, that I then I noticed was really short.

"It's kinda short, don't you think?" I asked her. She shook her head.

"For clubbing, it's perfect." She explained and pushed me into my room with the dress and closed the door. I sighed but put it on. I looked into the mirror and I had to admit. It was really pretty and fit me well. I smiled and walked out the door. Alice was clapping and Rose whistled.

"Didn't I tell you it would fit her perfectly?" She asked Rose.

"Yeah, Bella? You're gonna make all the guys' there beg for you to take them." Rose told me and I blushed.

"I completely doubt it." I said and Rose snorted.

"Okay, while you two bicker, I'm going to get dressed." Alice told us. Rose was ready and so was I. I rolled my eyes.

"They will though." Rose argued.

"No they won't" I said.

"Yes they will."

"No, they won't."

"Yes, they will."

"Rose!" I shouted.

"What?"

"Stop it!" I ordered.

"I'm not doing anything." Rose claimed.

"You're annoying me!"

"No I'm not." Rose smiled and I rolled my eyes.

"Fine, you're not annoying me." I told her.

"You two fight like old ladies!" Alice shouted from her room. Me and Rose burst out laughing.

"Bella! You better not smear your make up!" Alice shouted at me.

"Don't worry Alice, I won't!" I shouted back. Alice finally came out in a black cocktail dress that fit her perfectly.

"Wow, Alice-" I started to say but she interrupted me.

"It's not about me tonight. We're focused on you tonight." Alice told me.

"Oh gee Alice. That's just bound to make me feel better." I told her sarcastically. Alice and Rose both laughed.

"Are we going to, wherever we're going or what!" I shouted. Their laughter died down.

"Yeah, we're going now. Don't worry." Rose told me. "I thought you didn't want to go?" Rose asked me suspiciously. I rolled my eyes.

"I don't. But I might as well go now before I embarrass myself even further." I explained.

"Sure Bells, lets go then." Alice opened the door and we walked out. I was stumbling the first few paces because of the giant high heels she forced me into.

"Hurry up Bella!" Rose told me.

"I can't walk in these!" I shouted.

"Here, just wait for us on the curb. We'll go get the car and come by so that you can hop in, okay?" Alice asked. I nodded and they walked off. I stood there for a few minutes. I looked around the eerie parking lot and started to get scared. It was already dark out.

"Alice. Rose. Hurry up." I whispered. I looked around and saw a figure and recognized Edward near his car. He was staring at me with his eyes bulging. I blushed but didn't look away. I saw him slowly grin that beautiful crooked smile and he made his way over to me.

"Going somewhere special?" he asked me, still smiling.

"Yeah, I'm going on a date." I joked. His smiled immediately vanished.

"Oh" He told me sadly. I laughed.

"Kidding!" I told him as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. He looked thoughtful for a second and smiled again.

"Oh." He brightly said.

"Then where are you going?" He asked me. "You seemed dressed up for a special occasion." He hinted. He stared at me and there were a few downward glances, which made me blush.

"I'm, uh, Alice, she uh, is dragging me to go clubbing." I stuttered. His gaze never left me and he was staring straight into my eyes. He slowly smiled.

"Mind if I join you?" He asked.

"I should ask Alice…." I trailed off.

"Oh, I'm sure they won't mind. In fact, I'll bring Emmett and Jasper." Edward pressed on.

Then Alice's Porsche came in front of me.

"Hey Edward! Come on Bella!" She shouted. Edward went to the drivers' seat.

"Hey Alice. Do you mind if I accompany you? I'll bring Emmett and Jasper and I'll meet you at the club in a few minutes." Edward persuaded.

"Sure Edward! It's at this place called The Foxx, meet us at the bar, okay?" Alice instructed. Edward nodded.

"Bye girls." He turned around to face me and smiled. "Bye Bella." He walked away and jumped in the backseat. Alice and Rose turned around and smiled at me, I rolled my eyes.

"Don't get any ideas." I warned them.

"Whatever Bella."

"Is 'whatever' your word of the day or something?" I asked Alice, she shrugged and sped off.

*_*

The club was packed. The music almost made me deaf and the lights almost made me blind. Other people seemed to not notice it, but I've never gone clubbing before so….

"I'm gonna go deaf and blind Alice!" I shouted at her, she rolled her eyes.

"Don't exaggerate Bella." She told me.

"What!" I shouted again.

"I said, don't exaggerate!" She yelled.

"What?" I asked again. I couldn't hear a thing, but I could hear Alice's growls.

"Lets just go to the bar now." She dragged me over to the bar with a giggling Rose behind us. I sat down on the stool and a bartender came up to us.

"What can I do for you ladies?" He asked us.

"Can we have some tequila shots?" Alice asked him. My eyes bulged as I turned to face her.

"Alice!"

"What?" She asked innocently.

"I can't drink! I have work tomorrow!" I shouted. She rolled her eyes.

"Come on Bella, can't you ever loosen up?" She asked me. I scrunched up my face when the bartender came with our drinks.

"Here you go ladies, and don't forget, if you ever need anything, just ring me up." He told us, and when he turned to walk away, he winked at me. I shuddered.

"On the count of three okay?" Alice told us. I nervously grabbed my shot glass.

"One, two, three!" I chucked my shot into my mouth and swallowed. It burned and I started waving my hands in my mouth.

"It burns." I choked out. They laughed.

"You two don't feel it?" I asked them.

"We do, but we're used to it now." Alice told me.

"I'd think…." The bartender came back with three more shot glasses.

"I thought you might want more. This one's on me." He winked at me again and walked away.

"Okay, and….now!" Alice and Rose drank there's and I did too, but was a little late.

"Woo! Lets go again!" Rose said. I smiled at them. I trusted them, and they would never let me do something stupid. So I nodded and bought another. And another. And another. And another. I lost count after seven.

EPOV

"Emmett! Hurry up!" I shouted at him. He was still in his bedroom.

"I'm almost done!" He shouted back. Me and Jasper were done an hour ago and he still wasn't done. He came out and swiped his shirt.

"Finally." I muttered.

"Shut up. I had to look good. Especially to Rose." Emmett told me, I rolled my eyes.

"Come on. Lets go. We'll take my car." I told them. We went inside my car and drove off.

"How do they look?" Emmett asked me.

"Bella looks amazing." I told them.

"I mean Rose." Emmett asked me.

"Oh, I don't know. And I don't know about Alice either Jazz." I told him before he could ask. I drove over to The Fox, and Emmett was bouncing in his seat.

"Emmett, I appreciate you not whining, but why are you bouncing?" I asked him.

"I wanna see how Rose will look. She must look sexy, huh?" He asked me.

"Again. I don't know." I told him, again.

"Fine. Well, what's this place called?" He asked me.

"The Fox."

"Oh. New place. Yeah, I drove by it when it was under construction. The place is huge." Emmett told me.

"I think it has a weird name though." I pointed out.

"Yeah, it does but I think it's supposed to say something. Maybe it's supposed to stand for foxxy or something." Emmett explained. I parked my car and saw that it had two 'x's…..oh.

"Nice place." Jasper said. We went inside.

"Alice told me to meet them at the bar." I told them.

"Which one? There's like, ten." Emmett told us. There were. I looked for the one closest to the entrance, and saw them. They were laughing by the bar with empty shot glasses near them. I smiled.

"There over there." I pointed at the bar. They snapped their heads in the direction. I swear, if their eyes went any bigger, it would probably fall out.

"Holy shit." Emmett gasped. I chuckled and made my way over to them.

"Hello." I said. They turned around and smiled at me.

"Oh, hey Edward!" Alice said.

"The guys will be over in a second. I think they're still recovering." I pointed behind me and she giggled.

"I want another shot." I heard a familiar voice. I turned to see Bella waving her glass in the air. Her words were slurred together. Was she drunk already?

"Is she drunk?" I asked Rose. She shook her head.

"Um…..yeah, pretty much. It wasn't my fault though. You guys took forever." She told me.

"Emmett was taking forever." I explained.

"How many shots did she have?" I asked her.

"Umm…I lost count after about, oh ten? Rose told me. I sighed. Then, Bella snapped her head in my direction.

"Hey Edward." Her voice was slurred, but it was also seductive. Rose giggled.

"You two have fun. I'm gonna go dance." Alice hopped off the stool and went into the dance floor with Rose following. Bella got up and stumbled towards me. She tripped and I grabbed her. She leaned against me and smiled. She slowly leaned in to my ear and whispered, "Hello, Edward." I froze.

She pulled away to look at me. I could smell the tequila in her breath and it was really strong. How many shots has she had exactly?

"Bella? How many shots have you had?" I asked cautiously. Her finger trailed up and down my chest, and I gulped.

"That doesn't matter now, does it?" Her words were slurred together, but I could still hear the seductiveness in her voice. She leaned in until she was what seemed, like a centimeter from my lips. My breathing got ragged and I was breathing heavier. I grabbed her shoulders and pushed her back.

"Bella! You're drunk!" I told her.

"I'm fine." Her voice was still slurred. I looked at the dance floor and saw Alice and Rose dancing together, and Emmett and Jasper watching them, and talking. I felt a hand on my chest.

"I want to leave." Bella whispered in my ear. Her breath cause chills to go through my spine. Not in the scared way….

"Bella, you're drunk. I think you should go home." I suggested. She shook her head.

"I think we should dance." She told me. I looked behind to see Emmett and Rose dancing. I turned back to her. Her breath was still heavy with alcohol, but I nodded. She smiled seductively at me and my breathing hitched.

We were soon dancing to the music, grinding against each other and swaying our hips. I've never seen this side of her. It was probably because she was drunk, which isn't a good thing to be when you have work tomorrow.

She turned around so that her back was to me and I wrapped me hands around her hips. She put her hand on my cheek to quickly caress it. She looked so….sexy tonight. Especially the way she was dancing. Suddenly, she turned around and grabbed my arm and pushed me against the wall.

"I want you. Right here, right now." She whispered in my ear. I felt myself harden and before I knew what was happening, she crushed her lips against mine. I was stunned at first, but the feeling was amazing. Her lips were so soft, so full. They felt so right on mine. So perfect. Like they were made to be put together.

She caressed my bottom lip with her tongue, asking permission, which I quickly granted. I darted mine out and we massaged each others tongues. I took her bottom lip between mine and sucked on it. She moaned and did the same thing with my top lip. I pulled away to breath. I was panting and she moved down to my neck, and sucked on it. I let out a small groan and she smiled.

I opened my eyes and remembered what I was doing so I quickly pushed her away.

"Bella, you're drunk. You don't know what you're doing." I told her.

"I know what I'm doing. I'm not drunk. So I had a few shots. Doesn't mean anything." She whispered in my ear again. She nibbled my ear and I groaned.

"You like that?" She asked me seductively. I pushed her back again.

"You're drunk. If you want. I'll drive you home." I suggested. Without letting her answer. I took her by the and dragged her to Alice, who was sitting on a table with a martini.

"Hey Edward! Having fun?" Alice asked me while raising an eyebrow.

"Oh shut up. I'm pretty sure you don't want to leave yet so I'm taking her back okay?" I asked her. She nodded. Bella wrapped her arms around my waist from behind.

"I don't wanna leave. Unless, I can sleepover at your house." Bella suggested in my ear seductively. It took everything I had to not grab her and drive to the apartments. I gulped.

"Bella. I'm taking you home now. Okay?" I felt like I was talking to a five year old. Bella winked at me and nodded. I walked over to my car with Bella stumbling. I wrapped my arm around her waist so that she wouldn't trip. She put her hand on my chest and I got goose bumps.

I opened the door for her and helped her in. I walked over to my side and got inside, but when I turned around to tell her something, instead of meeting her face, I met her lips. She cupped my face and darted her tongue in. I just couldn't resist. We made out and she pulled me against her. Then, she pushed me over the gear shift, into the backseat. She was on top of me and tangled her hands in my hair. I moaned and flipped us over.

She pulled away to breath and I moved down to her neck. I sucked on a spot and a purple, bruise like formation appeared. I created a mark. I stopped and stared at it. I'd better stop before I go further.

I pulled her up and set her down in the passenger seat and buckled the seat belt for her. I had the taste of her tequila still in my mouth. It was a mix of the alcohol and……well, her scent. Bella scent. Absolutely intoxicating.

"Don't you want me?" She asked me sadly, yet seductively.

"I do want you. I always have. I want you right now-"

"Then take me." She pouted.

"I can't. You're drunk. People don't think when they're drunk."

"I'm not drunk. I know what I'm doing." She tried to move but I grabbed her shoulders.

"You're drunk." I said in a voice that signaled the end of this conversation. I drove to the apartments and it was silent. I glanced at Bella and she burped, I chuckled. She was moving her head like she had a headache. I parked my car and helped her out. I was about to ask her for the key, when she started to look green.

"Edwa-I think-I'm gonna-throw up." She told me. Holding it back. I panicked and just took out my key and opened my door. I grabbed her and carried her to the bathroom. She leaned over the toilet and vomited. I held her hair while she let it all out. I would have normally been disgusted by this, but I was only worried about her.

She was finally done and leaned back against the wall. I rubbed her back in a soothing way. She leaned back over the toilet, and went again. She did this a few times during the night, and I grabbed a spare tooth brush and toothpaste when she was done. I let her clean her mouth while I went over to my bed.

"Bella?" I asked her while she was brushing her teeth. She looked so tired, so dead.

"Hmm?" She mumbled.

"Where is you key? So that I can open the door and you can sleep." I asked her. She spit out her toothpaste.

"Hmm, Alice has it. I gave it to her since I, didn't have a purse." Bella explained to me. She was still drunk, but she looked really tired.

"Oh. When will they come back? Do you know?" I asked her. She shook her head.

"Knowing them. They won't, be back until, probably three in the, morning." She told me.

"What's your cell phone number?" I asked her, pulling out mine. She groaned but told me the numbers. I waited. Right when I was about to hang up, she answered.

"Hello!" Alice shouted. I could hear the music in the background, mixed in with other peoples voices.

"Alice? Alice! It's me, Edward!" I told her.

"Oh hey Edward! Why'd you call? Need a spare condom? Sorry, I don't have any." I could hear Rose giggling in the background.

"No, that's not why I called. Bella-"

"Is she alive?" Alice asked me in a concerned voice. I chuckled.

"Yes, she's alive. I just wanted to know what I should do with her 'cause her key is with you right?" I asked.

"Yup!"

"So, I wanted to know what I should do." I asked. I glanced at the bathroom. Bella was still brushing her teeth.

"Let her sleepover! She wanted to anyway." This time Alice giggled and I could hear Rose laughing.

"Alice! This is serious!"

"Gotta go! Bye!" And she hung up. I closed my phone and put it back on my nightstand. I sat down on my bed and pinched the bridge of my nose. I wanted so badly to accept her. But I couldn't, she was drunk and would regret it. This was so frustrating, and the way she was tempting me was not helping.

I heard light footsteps. And when I looked up, Bella walking over. I looked up at her. She kneeled down on her knees, and kissed me.

Of course, I kissed her back. I just couldn't resist. She got up and put her legs around my waist to straddle me. She kissed me with so much passion, so much lust. I couldn't, but I had to. I laid us down so that I was on top of her. Her breath still had a hint of tequila, but it was now, sort of minty. She moaned when I sucked on her lip.

I tried to find it in me to stop, but every time I tried, she did something that made me go crazy. No. I told myself when she started to unbutton my shirt. I can't let her make a mistake, if this is one. But when I was about to push her away, she kissed my chest, and kept unbuttoning it. She kissed and sucked my chest. I moaned at her touch.

No, this has to stop! I can't let her make a drunken mistake! She wants to now, but when she wakes up, she'll be furious. She might not ever want to see me again. I tried to find the restraint inside of me. I tried to find it in me to stop her. But she kept going. I finally stopped and pulled away and looked down at her, into her eyes.

They were full of lust, full of passion. I was lost in them, but I knew she was drunk. She was. She doesn't know what she's doing. She will wake up in the morning, and yell at me. Ask me why I didn't stop her and say that she never wants to see me again. I can't let that happen. I opened my mouth to speak, but nothing came out. She came up and kissed me again.

One little kiss won't hurt.

A/N: OOOOO!!!!!!! HAHA! LOL!! Did they do it? Or did they not? Did Edward resist? Or did he just 'go with the flow'. You'll find out in the next chapter! LOL!!!! By the way, the club THE FOXX, I GOT THAT NAME OUT OF THE MOVIE, 21. I COUDNT THINK OF ANOTHER NAME, SO I JUST TOOK THAT! Anyway, MY NEW STORY IS OUT! YAY!! TAKE A LOOK, N IF U LIKE IT, THEN REVIEW!!!

I think this is the longest chapter so far in this story…Hmm……it's 17 pages soooo, yeah!

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