Chapter 14 is here! The children will finally go into the factory.

"Today is the day." Charlie thought.

"Are you a bit nervous?" asked an Oompa Loompa.

"Ya, a bit." said Charlie.

"OK, we have practiced every song." said another Oompa Loompa.

"OK, I will see if they are ready." said Charlie.

In fact, they were ready!

Joshua Mccool was wearing Red T-Shirt, jeans, and black tennis shoes. His father was wearing a suit and tie, jeans, and black tennis shoes. He also brought ski's with him.

"Dad, do you think there will be skiing?" asked Joshua.

"Eh, I heard there was a fudge mountain late in the factory." replied his father.

"Well I'm not waiting for that! I will find somewhere to ski!" said Joshua.

"You do that then." said his father.

Next to Joshua was Bruce Lyre, and he was wearing a green shirt that read "Prankster Master", and had shorts and blue shoes, while his uncle had an orange shirt, jeans, and blue shoes.

"We can do some pranks in the tour, right?" asked Bruce.

"Of course we can!" said his Uncle.

"Good, because most of everyone here seems like losers!" said Bruce.

"You can't be more right!" said his Uncle.

Next to Bruce was Samantha Moran. She was wearing a pink skirt and shirt, with high heels on. Her father was wearing a suit and tie.

"That girl who was sad with cancer is just funny! Well I guess her ugly face is cancer enough!" said Samantha.

"Eh, just don't be bad." said her father.

Next to Samantha was Abigail Lee, who was wearing a blue dress with black high heels. Her mother had a red dress and high heels.

"Mother, do I smell good?" asked Abigail.

"Yes, honey! The other kids are horrid!" said her mother.

"Tell me something I don't know!" said Abigail.

Next to Abigail was Allen Ripe, who wore a blue shirt and basketball shorts, and his father had a green shirt and basketball shorts.

"I will not share my Wonka Bars with the other dumb kids!" said Allen.

"You shouldn't!" said his father.

Next to Allen was Lance Ryan, wearing a grey shirt with shorts, while his father wore a grey shirt with jeans.

"Can I be fatter?" asked Lance.

"I hope you pop." Muttered his dad to himself.

"What was that?" asked Lance.

"Eh, nothing much." said his father.

Next to Lance was Celene Rose, who was wearing an orange shirt with shorts. Her mother had a blue shirt with shorts.

"Do you think there will be any races or something?" asked Celene.

"I don't know, but hopefully you will win!" said Celene's mom.

Next to Celene was Amanda Reese, who wore a yellow shirt with pants, and her mother wore a light jacket that was black, and jeans.

They didn't talk to each other.

Next to Amanda was Devin Lake, who was wearing jeans and a green shirt, and his father wore a suit and tie.

"Now I see the chocolate is stupid! I don't want to be here, I kind of just wanted the attention!" said Devin.

"We spent money to come!" said his father.

Next to Devin was Alexander Murst, who wore a brown shirt with shorts. His mother wore a blue dress that she got from her sister.

"I am so excited to be here!" said Alexander.

"I know! So am I!" said his mother.

The gates opened, without a creepy song and puppet show this tour.

They all walked to the door before Charlie opened it.

"Hello everyone! I am Charlie Bucket!" said Charlie

All the kids looked in awe. Charlie was a lot paler then he used to be.

"Please enter one at a time!" said Charlie.

Samantha came rushing in passing Charlie.

"OK then." said Charlie.

Amanda did the same thing.

"Wow." said Charlie.

"Ha! I was first!" said Samantha.

"Who cares?" asked Amanda.

"I do! And it is funny that your mother slapped you!" said Samantha.

Amanda then slapped Samantha.

"OW!" said Samantha.

Amanda just kept a smirk on her face.

Bruce came rushing in, as did Joshua, ignoring Charlie's existence.

"High five!" said Bruce.

"Ok!" said Joshua as he high fived him.

"Ha! Sticky glue!" said Bruce.

Joshua tried to shove it in his mouth.

"Hey! That could kill me!" said Bruce.

"I know!" said Joshua.

Celene and Abigail were the next to run past Charlie.

"Hi Celene." said Abigail.

Abigail then sniffed, and found the bad smell coming from Celene.

"Ew!" said Abigail.

"It is called doing something with your life!" said Celene.

Then Lance and Devin ran past Charlie.

"Smarty pants." said Lance.

"Stupid pants." said Devin.

Then Allen ran past Charlie.

"Hi Charlie Bucket!" said Alexander.

"Hello, thanks for greeting me!" said Charlie.

"Your welcome!" said Alexander.

"You are Alexander's hero!" said his mother.

"Thank you, now we must start the tour." said Charlie.

Everyone went behind Charlie.

"So kids, let's begin!" said Charlie.

They walked down the hall and all of the 4 rivals were annoying or pushing or shoving each other. Allen was walking, talking to his father about how annoying the other kids were, and Alexander was talking to his mother.

"Why is it so hot in here?" asked Amanda.

"And why is the door so small?" asked Devin.

"Well, one, because the workers can't stand the cold-" Charlie said before being interrupted.

"Who are the workers?" asked Joshua.

"All will be answered in short time!" said Charlie.

"And again I ask why the door is so small?" Devin asked again.

"Well little boy, it is to keep all of the chocolate flavor in here!" said Charlie.

"Oh." was his reply.

"Now, kids take a look!" said Charlie, as he opened the door to the chocolate room.

All of them looked in awe.

That's all of Chapter 1!

Questions:

Who should go first?

Who do you think go first?

Any prediction order?