This is just an update on this story and a response to a recent review.

I am planning on rewriting all the fanfiction I have written so far, so the next time the story updates anyone who has read this will have to start at the beginning. This story was written a few years ago and I have improved as a writer. The plot and the characters will be the same but certain events will change.

Here is the most recent review on this story:

"Okay so. In stories, I like the grasp of a characters personality. What I just finished reading, wasn't that. I get what you were trying to make readers understand, however everything was just wrong. I know how young you are, I understand, but if you want my advice is, don't stray too far, or you'll lose readers interest. Grammar is important, and so is structure. Also don't give a known character, another personality, it flips me off. And understanding your own writing style is key."

The first thing I have to say is that when I write fanfiction I start at a certain point in the story and diverge from that point to create a new story. This allows me to control the events that effect the characters, and how those events will change the character's personality. I do this because I did not create the story or the characters, so I can not consistently write for their character, so I need to change it in some way. The story is meant to transform a character into someone else. I normally choose character's who aren't very nice and make them nicer. I know some people may hate those characters so I try to make them more likable. An example of this is in my The Melancholly of Haruhi Suzumiya story(Do not read that until I update it, it has terrible storytelling) I got spam messages from someone called Haruhi Haters, who at first was happy that I made her almost die and was upset that she survived. I have seen hate for characters(though not as bad as Haruhi Haters). I actually like the characters because I see past the mean personality and see the good person inside and I want to make that side of them more obvious. I am working on trying to make the development of the characters seem more logical. It will be a while but it will be better when I get it done.

Also I will write up to the point I left off, plus one chapter, before updating the story