Hey Guys,
the first thing I wanted to talk about was the chapter before the last when Jael told Joe she got raped.
i think some of you forgot that it was mentioned in chapter 7, so you can check it out there if you want.
basically it was by Josh, Jael's 'father' but it's not really her father if you remember that she found out Luke was.
And the second thing,
I've been re-reading Camp Rock, the first story to Her Life and I'm editing it and reposting it. I'm not asking you guys to reread the whole story but I'm just telling you.
I realized that after Jael's mother died, I didn't make her seem as depressed as I thought I did. I'm trying to fix that as best as I can but it's kind of hard because it's a lot to type.
and I want to change something else. I hate having to keep changing my mind, and i'm sorry if this is annoying, but it's nothing too drastic.
basically, what i've led on was that Jael was born in Ireland until she was I think 4 and lived in Canada till she was 14 then moved to New York after that. But while she was in New York and Canada, she moved a lot.
So I'm going to change the years a little so that she was born and stayed in ireland till she was 4, lived in Canada till she was 11, then moved to New York and that's where she went to school and met Evan, Matt, Jesse, and basically where everything happened.
and last, and hopefully this is it.
basically by now, this story has stopped being a 'Camp Rock' story. And now, it's just Jael's life, pretty much. I have a loooot planned and i'm hoping you'll like it. If anybody has ideas, please speak up.
and if you don't like anything i'm doing, speak up as well. i accept criticism, and i've said it before.
thank you.