Here is Chapter 14, Pregnant, Blank Stare, an Angry Brother, a Dead Boyfriend and a Special Deal.
I added some Comedy to this chapter, well, its funny to me, but i dont know it will be funny, with Melody staring into space, and then Link yelling, and then towards the last part, you will see what i mean. I love this Chapter!!!! There is a lot more information at the end where you have to review, please Review this story! Its the only thing that keeps us authors going!
"Melody, I'm afraid to say this, but you are pregnant." With that word, Melody froze.
"Melody? Melody?" Tracy said while waving her hand in front of her face.
"Oh dear." The doctor said while looking at the young girl.
"What's going? Why is she staring in a blank?"
"Well, hearing a big news like that, it puts the girls into, I don't know, their minds just goes blank." Dr. Monroe said while flashing the light in front of Melody's eyes.
"Okay, and is that normal?"
"Sometimes, like this, it is."
"Its normal for her to go blank like that?" Tracy said while raising an eyebrow.
"Yes, for young girls it is, but when they are older than a young girl like me, it isn't normal." The doctor said, and then looking down at her watch. "five, four, three, two, one…"
"PREGNANT!!! HOW CAN I BE!!!" Melody screamed while standing up and started pacing.
"Melody, just breath."
"I'm breathing! I found out that I am going to be a parent! With Max being the dad! Oh no, Link." Melody said while sitting on the bed.
"I can take care of your brother."
"SHE'S WHAT!"
"See, I told that I would able to take care of it."
"Yeah, I think his blood pressure is up too." Melody mumbled to herself.
"She is pregnant, Link."
"WHOS THE FATHER!!!!! I WANT TO BREAK HIS NECK IN FIVE PLACES! OR EVEN HUNT HIM DOWN AND KILL HIM!"
"I am liking the new Link." Melody said while looking at her fingernails.
"The father is Max." Tracy said putting her hands on his shoulders.
"Oh, well. If it was Evan, that would be a different story."
"So, you wont kill Max?" Melody raised her eyebrow.
"No? why?"
"He is here, by the way." Tracy said while hiding behind Melody.
"Hey! Don't hide behind the pregnant chick." Melody said while hiding behind Tracy.
"FORGET THAT! HE IS DEAD MEAT!" Link said while opening up the door and running towards Max's car.
"Run! Max! Run! Link's mad! Run! A different direction not towards him!" Melody said while putting her head into her hands.
"Yeah, he is a totally a keeper Melody." Tracy said while patting her on her shoulder.
"I know." Melody said while smiling. "do you want something to eat?"
"Yeah, sure, where to?"
"I'm craving chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream. How about you?"
"That's sounds really good, actually."
"Lets go." Melody said while grabbing her coat and Tracy's coat. Once they got there, Brad and Fender was there. "oh god."
"Hi Melody."
"Where's big brother?"
"You are looking hot." Fender said while looking Melody over.
"Down, Dog, Down." Amber said while hugging Melody and Tracy. After the pageant, Amber changed her tune, she started to see one of Seaweed's best friends and moved out of her mom's house.
"Thanks Ambs." Melody said while hugging Amber back.
"No Prob." Amber said while sitting down at a booth and waved Melody and Tracy over. "so, where's the boyfriends?" By that time, they saw Max running from something, and Link was running after Max. "oh."
"Yeah, Max is dead." Melody said while looking at her boyfriend running for his life..
"Why?"
"See, I'm-"
"Sick." Tracy said before Melody could say it.
"I'm pregnant." Melody whispered it.
"Oh dear." Amber said while covering her mouth and having her eyes wide.
"Excuse me, sorry for interrupting your conversation, but my little daughter loves you. And I was wondering if I could get your autograph?" A lady said.
"Who are you talking to?" Melody asked while having a smile on her face.
"Actually, all of you girls." the lady said.
"Sure, I would love to." Melody said while grabbing a pen out of her coat pocket. "what's her name?"
"Amanda. She is in the hospital fighting for her life to cancer."
"Okay." Melody said while writing on her picture. "Dear Amanda, Wish you all the luck you need to beat cancer's behind, and maybe one day you can visit us on the set of The Corny Collins Show and have a tour of it..
Love: Melody Larkin, Tracy Turnblad, and Amber Von Tussle."
"There you go. If you don't mind me asking, what room is she in?" Melody asked while looking at the mom.
"She is on the second floor. Ask the nurse for Amanda Blakeman."
"When is her birthday?" Melody asked while writing down this information.
"Last November, on the 9th."
"Hey, that's mine and Tracy's birthday!" Melody said while smiling.
"Yeah, but she was in the hospital for her 15th birthday."
"Aww." Amber said, who hasn't said anything. " that's sad."
"Yeah, Me and my brother lost our mother when i was six, and him, seven." Melody said while frowning.
"Then you know how important it is to keep her alive then?" The mother said.
"Yes." Melody said while looking at the mother. "I have an idea."
"What?"
"We can do a special show for Amanda, and other cancer patients." Melody said while seeing the mother smiling.
"Can you do that?" The mother asked.
"Corny will love it." Melody said while smiling. "you have a deal, Mrs.?"
"Actually, Ms. Blakeman. My boyfriend died before we could get married. So after I had Amanda, i stayed Blakeman, not his last name."
"Aww, I am sorry." Tracy said while putting an hand on Ms. Blakemen's arm.
"Don't be sorry Tracy."
"How did you know that I'm Tracy?"
"Because of that twinkle in your eye, every time you smile, you have twinkle."
"Thanks for that comment." Tracy said while smiling.
So, how was this chapter? Good? Bad? In the Between? And Can someone please tell me why, if i went to the movies and then clicked on Hairspray, i can't see my story? I mean, i will change the rating again, to T, maybe that's why....i don't know................someone help me? Still new to this site, not new on quizilla or on myspace....so yeah, if you guys have any reviews, let me know, because whenever i get reviews, i get all jolly inside, the warm fuzzy felling. Sorry, I'm tired and tomorrow is Christmas Eve, and its where i can open my presents, instead of Christmas day, which is busy for my family....sorry, typing like crazy, i know. But i get to see my huge family again tomorrow night and on Thursday! So, ByeByeBye
~Amanda (and no, i didnt name the little girl Amanda because of my name, its the first name that popped into my head, so dont be hating me because i used my own name....like i said, it just popped into my head, sorry)