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Title:Adventure of the little sabers
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The South's Best-Yay, new reader! *High Fives!* Thanks for ya review! I can not reveal any secrets about the cub but you will find out more in this chapter! Well actually, I can't quite answer any of those questions! Keep reviwing and I'll keep updating, deal? ;D
shiralover-Your so kind! People like you make me want to carry on with my writing and not just leave my stories hanging for more than a few days. I think if you started writing a finfiction for anything you would end up being surprized at just what you can do. Take little baby steps and decide wether you want to plan out chapter by chapter, the whole story or just wing it! To be honest, winging it isn't as bad as you may think! Since your dyslexic I think you should start reading books with fewer pages. In my school libary there is special books that are just for dyslexic people. Reading helps alot and I was hopeless at writing and reading when I was little but eventually ended up like I am today! My nose is always in a book now and people at school are learning from me (as weird as it may sound) one girl decided to start reading the hunger games because I nagged her so mucch to start reading and another has started to read a big book to! It turns out I'm quite inspartinal xD P.S. Most of my spelling is wrong so try not to copy most my spelling xD!
artisticgurl-I really hope I've not disapointed anyone with that little twist! Some storries your just waiting and waiting for the big surprize and it ends up being such a disapointment. Peaches was soooooo cute in Ice Age 3 when she was born and I love her in Ice Age 4. I love how her and the other mammoths speak as well. I thought it was great how Sid's family came back, even if it was just for a few minutes. I liked how Louis was all brave and cute at the end when he saved Peaches! He as awesome!
(Luna's P.O.V)
"Onami! Luna!" Mummy quickly picked up the cub by the scruff of it's neck and ran over to us. Onami left me and ran towards Mummy. They embraced each other in a quick hug before Mummy was inviting me to join.
"Luna my baby girl! Come to me my sweetheart!"
"Obviously I'm not your baby girl," I growled. "What. Is. That?"
Mummy hesitatied before answering. I saw a flash of doubt in her blue eyes.
"This is your sister. She was born a few days after Soto's pack attacked." Mummy explained.
"It's been weeks and you never thought of returning home?!" I shouted.
"I was planning to but Soto's sabers were-"
"Save it! You can go replace me but I don't care! Have your little baby but she will never be my sister. Ever!"
I ran out of the cave, slipping under the gap. I heard Onami running after me but not Mummy. She didn't want to leave her precious little cub behind. I knew this was coming. I had seen it in my vision but I never thought it would be such a horrible surprize. I thought I could tell myself I was wrong but deep down I knew it was coming. Onami didn't seem to mind anywhere as near as I did. Maybe if the cub was a boy then it would have been different. Maybe he would have been running away instead of me.
I stumbled down the mountain trail carelessly. Onami wasn't following me now. Probably because he had a brand new sister instead of me. The cub was jet black. No, she was darker. The darkest shade of black for her pelt, not a speck of any other colour anywhere. Her green eyes were like emerald orbs. Such a rich shade of green and much nicer than my pale green. Suddenly, I was falling.
Down and down and down and BANG!
Pain shot through my body. I felt blood trickling over my body. I groaned loudly, hopeing for someone to hear. And they did.
But it was the wrong someone.
"Lookie what we got here."
"It's that cub again."
"She belongs to that saber we're lookin' for."
"What we do with it?"
I slowly opened my eyes to see who the unpleasent voices belonged to. Soto's pack.
"Get away from me or else!" I roared. I failed to raise screams of terror. The sabers were laughing at me.
"Now, now. You wouldn't want to do anything... drastic. We have sabers everywhere and if you do anything to us, little one, they will kill everyone you care about."
"What. Do. You. Want. WITH ME!" My temper was flamming. How dare they threaten me! I've killed a whole pack before with two words and they thought they could threaten me?!
"We've been tracking your mother on the mountain. Just a hour ago I was going up the trail looking for her with two other sabers. If we have you, she'll come out of hiding."
"Yeah right."
"What's that supposed to mean?"
"Just something..."
"What?"
"A thing..."
"What thing?"
"Something..."
"What thing that's something are you talking about?!"
"If I tell you, you won't believe me."
"Tell me!"
"Alright," I grin smugly. "It's a thing that's something that's somewhere."
"YOU LITTLE -"
"That's what you get from me when you want to hurt my family!" I yell before spitting in his face. My spit landed right in his eye. Bullseye. While I had my chance I started running wildly. I laughed as I ran, proud that I had out smarted a saber that was a decade older than me, if not more. I had a talent with words, noone in the herd ever took me on in a argument.
I found myself running the way home. I heard sabers catching up with me so I started running faster. I wasn't gifted in physical things, unlike Onami. I ran in a zig zap pattern around the trees, it seemed like it was helping me loose the other sabers. Soon I was certain I had lost them but that didn't stop me running. I had to be sure. Before I knewn it, I had bumped into something. It was small and made me loose my balance. I just about crushed the little weasle.
"L-Luna!"
I stumbled onto my feet and looked at the weasle that knew my name. Buck!
"Buck? What are you doing out here by yourself?"
"Actually, I'm with Ro."
"Rose is out here too?"
"Yep. We all are."
"Why?!"
"Looking for you and ya brother of course!"
"B-but..."
"Rose! Look what just almost curshed me!"
"If it was that antelope again then I'll beat th-" Rose grumbled as she made her way through the bushes. She was about to carry on before she looked up and saw me. "My golly! It's lil' Luna!"
"Ugh... yeah." I mumbled.
"Where's Onami?"
"T-there was some trouble..."
Yay! I uploaded today and that means no funeral! Anyway, tell me what ya thinkin' and what ya want next! Reviews are appreciated but it's not the end of the world if you don't review. Thanks to my loyal readers and reviewers and I wish you all the luck in any projects you guys are working on! See you in chapter 15!
