So…. As I was rereading this story, from when I was like a prebuscent teen practically, I realize how slightly out of date it is in terms of grammar and vocab and omg who am I kidding, its just so cheesy… now I can fix it, or I can make a whole new story entirely. Ill make another chapter soon and you can see the difference I guess in the way I write, let me know what you guys think okay. I recently graduated college and im not as busy as I was before. SO okay y'all we will see okaaaaaayyyy…. But im really kinda leaning towards a different story with a whole new plot all together…..