How I Broke Her

by FactionMixer

This starts as an INSURGENT rewrite.(How often do you see those)It is also a rewrite of the ending of Allegiant. It may even proceed further! **Tris is stuck in Erudite headquarters with Tobias. Her execution has been planned out and she is on the table. But this time Peter isn't around. Will she survive? Yes. How? Find out. This is why Veronica Roth had Peter save Tris in Erudite.

14. Just need help, fanfic deprivation, AN

This is not an update... Yes... I know... *dodges butterknives* (but you probably don't care about my stories that much)

I am inching along with the writing... detail by detail, sentence by sentence... What I really need (now you guys are really gonna hate me) are recommendations for good stories. Nice, long ones. I honestly have not read a unique Divergent story in ages. I really want one that is not just your usual Fourtris fluff, but I also love reading TOD. *shrugs shoulders sheepishly*

If you guys could help, that would be great! I have read tons of Divergent fanfics and I am getting really bored with the usual Divergent after-war and Divergent HS. I swear, the quality of writing on this site is going down. Not that all fanfics don't need improvement, but most of the time when I suggest improvements, I get many swears thrown my way. I hope I am not being a hypocrite.

Now, if there was a story that was different, I would be happy to read it. Also, feel free to comment your own story, even if it is "the ush". I just NEED TO READ SOMETHING! I AM GOING THROUGH FANFICTION DEPRIVATION! Yes, I know I should be writing, but I don't generally do that late at night when I am tired... PLEASE RECOMMEND! I will give shoutouts and thank-you's to those who recommend satisfying stories.

Peace,

I will update soon, PROMISE!

FactionMixer