I guess this doubles as my rant area – lol. If you all remember in the last chapter, I was talking about a fellow writer here on FanFic. After sending that message, I received this one:
"I don't know if you've noticed yet, but I'm NOT a professional. I make a lot of errors and I know it. This site is for supporting people, not telling them to suck it up because they're not good at grammar.
I'm fourteen and I'll be as damn immature towards people who give me BAD REVIEWS rather than HELFULL FEEDBACK as I like.
So take a stick and shove it where the sun don't shine."
Doesn't FanFic have something called "Community Etiquette?" I think it's been lost…
A faint cry ran in the lighted room. Shuichi had tears running down his face, falling to the hospital gown he wore. Eiri kissed his sweat covered temple.
Hiro smiled as he held the bundle of blankets. "Congratulations on your baby girl, Shuichi."
Eiri took the baby girl, holding her to face Shuichi. Both parents smiled, looking at the now sleeping child. "She's beautiful," Shuichi smiled. "She has your beauty," he laughed.
"You're wrong." Shuichi blinked a few times. "She looks like her mother; adorable. But I warn you now, she cries in the middle of the night, than she's your problem."
Hiro laughed. "I'll have the surgery timed for tomorrow afternoon. That gives you some time to rest." Shuichi nodded, taking the baby girl. "But you two still need a name for her."
"Hiro, stop acting like a doctor; you are here as my friend and her god-father." His eyes almost popped out of his head. "And Suguru is to be her god-mother-ish."
The novelist nodded. "You should go tell him," Eiri smiled a rare smile.
"Yeah, thanks," Hiro said as he walked out of the room.
"Are you ready for the surgery tomorrow?" Eiri asked his lithe lover. Shuichi nodded, holding the baby girl close. "We need a name for her, Shu." Shuichi nodded, kissing the babies cheek. "Aimi, Asami, Eri…."
Shuichi began laughing. "Name the little girl after you, honey?" Eiri smiled. "I like Aimi…Loves beauty…she is proof of that."
"Aimi Uesugi. You did wonderful, Shu. She is absolutely adorable. Thank you Shu," he said as tears fell from his eyes.
He was surprised. "Eiri, you're crying!"
"Stuff it brat."
"You have to give me something to stuff it with, Eiri-kun." Eiri took Aimi from Shuichi and stood.
"Go to sleep, pervert."
"Hey! Give me my daughter back!"
"Did you already forget? We have to play it off as if she is Aiylia's daughter. You are in the hospital for something completely different and unrelated." Shuichi lay back in his bed. "I love you, Shuichi," he said as he kissed his singers lips.
"Love you too, Eiri. I'll see you tomorrow," he said as he pulled the blankets up to his shoulders.
A nurse walked in and smiled. "Sir, may I take her information?"
Eiri turned to her. "Let's walk and talk so Shuichi can sleep," he said as he held the baby close.
Shuichi closed his eyes as the door shut, dreaming of a past encounter with his two friends.
(Flash back)
Shuichi munched on a fry as the three laughed. Though he had been back for a few months, he and the rest of bad luck had yet to talk it over. That's to say, talking over the future of Bad Luck.
"So, how long have you two been dating?" he asked.
Suguru leaned on Hiro. "Five years," he said as he took a drink from the straw.
"I said dating, not having sex." Suguru choked on the drink.
Hiro quickly wrapped his arm around Suguru and kissed his lips. "You taste like chocolate," he commented.
Suguru blushed as he looked down. "Aw don't be ashamed. There's nothing wrong with showing your love for Hiro."
"It's not that…I just don't like sharing Hiro, or talking about our love life…."
Both Shuichi and Hiro laughed harder. "It's alright Suguru; you don't have to share me with anyone. I'm all yours."
"Damn, that knocked me out of the running, didn't it?"
Suguru looked at his food. "Na Hiro, can you let Shuichi and I talk?"
Hiro stared at his lover for a moment. "Sure," he said as he stood.
Shuichi looked at Suguru confused. In the past, before he went missing, the two barely got along. So now that the younger adult chose to talk to him alone was a surprise. "What's wrong, Fujisaki?"
"Hiro and I have been together for a while now…not as long as you and Yuki-san, but still a while…" he began to fettle with the hem of his shirt. "I want a child with him, but I know he doesn't want one."
There was silence between the two of them. "Poor Suguru…if you want, once the baby is born I'm sure you two can take it every so often."
Suguru's green eyes almost popped. "Shuichi…thanks!" At hearing his excitement, Hiro walked back up to the two. "Hi Hiro…."
"Better Hun?" he asked as he sat back down.
"Hiro…I love you," he said as he kissed his lover.
Everyone was silent for a bit as they ate.
"You know…working three days a week is going to be a pain. We might not meet our deadlines."
Hiro sighed. "Yeah, but we can still do it. K will make sure we are on track." Shuichi grabbed his stomach, closing his eyes. "Shu you alright?"
"I'm fine…just a stomach ache."
With a sigh, Hiro reached up and took the cup containing Shuichi's strawberry shake. "No more of this."
"Hey!"
"You need to control your diet. Some things the baby won't want to eat," Hiro said as he set the drink down. "Remember Shu, the baby eats what you eat. So that means no swallowing things a baby shouldn't eat either."
Again Suguru choked on his straw. "Hiro! That's disgusting!" He yelled, noticing everyone starting at him.
Laughing, Hiro replied "oh please. Both you and Shuichi are the girls in the relationship, so it's normal for you two to swallow –"
"Hiro!"
(End Flashback)
Suguru was hesitant to take the child from Shuichi. He would hold his hands out to take Aimi, but then bring them back to his side.
Giving up, Hiro moved his hands around Suguru's sides, and reached for the baby. Shuichi happily gave him the little girl, who soon rested on Suguru's chest. "Now, take her before I drop her on accident." Suguru nodded, taking the baby.
She moved in his arms a bit, and then looked up at him with questionable gray eyes. "Shuichi, she's beautiful."
Shuichi lay back in the bed, wrapping himself in the blanket. "Can you two take her tonight? Eiri said he wants to stay with my tonight after my surgery, and I don't think Aiydan and Aiylia want to baby sit a new born."
"Can we Hiro?" Suguru blurted out.
"Of course," he said as he kissed his lovers neck. "My princess, we should go play before we have a kid at home."
Shuichi laughed as he warmed up. "The surgery is in less than an hour. You two better hurry up," he said as he reached out for Aimi. "You two can use the bathroom if you want."
The green eyes in Suguru's head went wide as could be. "That's disgusting."
"Sounds fun to me…you can startle the toilet while holding onto the back, and I'll press my d…."
"Hiroshi! I'm not doing that you pervert," he yelled as he set the little girl on the bed. Once she was down, tears began rolling from her eyes and screams from her mouth.
Quickly Shuichi sat up, pulling the child close. "My baby," he whispered, kissing her head. "You're alright."
"Maybe she is hungry…" Suguru questioned.
"Suguru, could you go ask a nurse for a bottle? She ate the four I had already." The younger adult nodded and pulled from his lover. He ran out, looking for the closest nurse.
Hiro placed a kiss on Shuichi's forehead. Said person looked up confused. "You made him happy by making him a god-parent. I haven't seen him that happy in a while."
"Cool, now can we make her happy? My head spins when she cries." Hiro laughed and picked up the baby.
"Hi beautiful; don't worry, when you are older, you will have plenty of luck getting a guy. And, Daddy and Uncle Hiro will fight off the bad ones." The little girl looked up at him with swollen eyes. Finally she stopped crying so she should show off her eyes. "Her eyes are strange…didn't know purple and amber would make gray."
"Maybe her eyes wanted to turn amber but were going to become blue," Eiri said as he walked in, followed by their three children.
"Mommy," Tiril called out as he ran to the bed.
"Hi baby." Eiri smiled as he set a vase of roses at the foot of Shuichi's bed.
Passing the baby to Aiylia, he thought a moment. "Maybe the girl who you got your "parts" from was from a country where gray eyes were common. Finland, Russia, and the Baltic States are common for them."
Shuichi's eyes went wide. "Marfa…." Both adults looked at him. "She was a girl who Ma…Raji killed before my surgery. She disobeyed him, bit him, and we never saw her again. She was from Russia. And it always seemed the surgeries were set for after when a girl was killed."
At that moment, Suguru walked back him. "Oh, Yuki-san, you're here; Aiylia and Aiydan too."
"Uncle Suguru!" Tiril smiled as he waved. Suguru waved back, holding the four bottles close.
Smiling seductively, Hiro took the bottles from his lover and set them on the table. "Come on, Suguru. Let's leave this happy family and go work on our own." Suguru blushed as Hiro lead him back. Eiri pointed at the two and looked at Shuichi who just shook his head.
"Mommy, when will you come home?" Shuichi smiled as he pulled Tiril up onto the bed.
"Mommy has one more thing he needs to do. I should be home in a few days," he said as he wrapped his arms around the little boy.
"Can I hold baby sister?" he asked softly. Aiylia brought the baby to the bed, setting the baby girl in his arms. "She's pretty mommy."
"This is your little sister, Aimi. She's still small, so you have to be very careful with her," Shuichi said as he rubbed his hand up and down Tiril's back. "Eiri, are you going to stay for the surgery? It's in about fifty minutes."
"Well, I think your doctor went awol."
Shuichi laughed as Aiylia and Aiydan signed back and forth. "I'm going to be taken into the prep thirty minutes before."
Eiri walked over to Shuichi and crawled onto the bed. Turning red, Shuichi crawled back in the bed a bit. "Kids, why don't you all go find the surgery waiting room," Eiri said as he got closer to his lover.
Aiydan started laughing as he signed it for Aiylia. "Tiril," she said as she held her hands out for the baby. Tiril held Aimi for a hug before she was taken. Aiydan then walked up and picked up Tiril. "Bye Mom, Dad," she voiced.
Even before they were out, Eiri had already begun kissing Shuichi. "Eiri…"
"Shut up," he growled, forcing Shuichi down. "I love to kiss you," he mumbled before biting his lover's neck.
"Eiri…gaw…."
"Hey Shuichi," Hiro said as he flung the door open. He stared at Eiri and Shuichi who were starting foreplay on the bed. "Alright, stop it you too." Eiri looked over at him and growled. "I'm serious, no sex before the operation. I don't want to explain why Shuichi is leaking anything."
Shuichi sighed, knowing he was safe for the minute. "Sorry Eiri, you heard my doctor," he smiled. It wasn't that he didn't want to play with his husband; he just wanted to wait until after he was home.
"Whatever," Eiri said as he got off the bed. "When we get home, you're mine."
Shuichi sat up with a sigh. "If you want, Yuki-san, Suguru is in the next room resting. If Shuichi doesn't care, you can go relive yourself in there. Just don't touch him." Shuichi's jaw dropped.
"I'll just use the bathroom…" Eiri said with a shudder down his spine. Anyone related to Tohma wasn't someone he wanted to masturbate to.
Once the door was shut, Shuichi stared at Hiro. "What was with that offer? Eiri is mine."
"I was joking, Shu. I know Yuki-san won't do anything to break your heart, idiot." Hiro pulled out his chart and smiled. "Plus Suguru is just asleep. He practically passed out after I kissed him," he laughed. Shuichi nodded blankly at him. "So anyways, let's get you moving to prep so we can get this over with. And so you nor Yuki-san have to worry, I'm just in there as an aid. I won't be doing more than assisting the surgen," he said as he sat in a chair.
After a minute Eiri walked back out as if nothing had happened. Shuichi smiled as a waiting nurse smiled. "Honey, I'll see you in a while," Shuichi whispered. Eiri quickly pressed their lips together before they wheeled him away in a wheel chair.
Bleh – few more things…I have one surprise for an upcoming chapter.