Chapter 14

Hey guys! I just want to say, this is all planned, so if you ask for changes, they might not be taken into consideration. However, you 5,000 people who have seen this, only 15 have reviewed. -_-

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Tobias' POV

Today, I'll ask Tris on a date, I think. Dinner? I think that will do. I have just woken up. I put on a tight tee-shirt, and my hoodie. I eat breakfast, and climb into my fiesta, before heading to school. There I see the gang under our usual tree. I creep up behind Tris, motioning at those who have seen me to be quiet. I trip Tris up, and catch her in my arms.

"Wow, I saved your life!" I say. She raises and eyebrow, and I grin, kissing her on the cheek.

"Keep telling yourself that, Toby," she whispers into my ear. I laugh.

"You know, when you whisper, you are sexy, Tris," I whisper back into her ear, putting her back on her feet. She is now blushing.

"What did you say to Tris?" Says Christina, suspicious. I just laugh, and head to my locker for my books.

Now, finally, school has finished! I walk out the doors, and spot Tris getting into her car. I run up to her.

"Tris! Hey, I was just wondering, do you wanna go on a date tonight? 'Bout eight?" she gets out her phone, checking her calendar.

"It looks like I'm good for that, see you then," She smiles at me. Pull her out of the car and kiss her. She smiles into the kiss, and I feel the usual addictive jolt of electricity going through my body. She pulls away, and gets in her car. I pout, and she waves goodbye. I then head over to my ford, unlock it, and as I'm getting in, I hear Molly, on the other side of the car.

"Hey Four," She says.

"Hi," I say, slightly uncertain.

"So, I was just wondering, when were you gonna dump that piece of trash girl and go out with a real woman?" She asks, batting her eyelashes. I frown. That made me angry.

"Molly, don't you ever say something like that. I will never go out with you, if I'm dating Tris or not." She stalks around the car, and grabs my shoulder.

"Well, then Tris might find herself a little surprise, a little painful surprise." She grins, and tries to kiss me, but I step back. She narrows her eyes, and stalks off.

I have just finished getting ready for mine and Tris' date. I get into my car, and drive over to hers. I get out, and go to knock on the door. Caleb answers. Oh dear...

"Why are you here? I thought I told Beatrice to dump you," I smirk.

"Well, guess she isn't as obedient as you thought," says Tris, walking out the door to my car. Caleb growls. I laugh, and head to the car with her.

"YOU LITTLE ASSHAT!" He shouts at me. I just laugh again, and pull away. I am taking her to a diner where we get some food. It was delicious and Tris agreed. We walked out, and got into my car. I took her to the woods for our secret place. I open the door, and rush around the car to open Tris' door. She smiles.

"hey, you just go ahead, I have to do something quick," I say to her. She nods, frowning, and heads into the forest. I go to the boot of the car, get some wine and two glasses. I also grab a bouquet of flowers I bought earlier. I go to our secret place, heading off the track for only a little bit. There I find Tris, beautiful hair flowing down her shoulders. Today she wears a gorgeous dress of red which goes to above her knees. It hugs her in the right places, and makes her look even better. I sit beside her, and pour wine into two glasses. She looks at me, and smiles. I keep the flowers hidden.

"Tris: To us, to you, your happiness and our relationship," I say. She smiles, and blushes shyly. She's frikkin adorable. Our glasses meet with a clink and we each take a sip. We lie down, watching the stars. We point out constellations, gazing at the winking islands of light in the endless blackness. Now is the moment.

"Tris, I might be in love with you." I smile at her "I'm waiting until I'm sure to tell you, though,"

"That's sensible of you," she replies "we should find some paper so you can make a chart or list or something." I laugh, and snuggle closer to her. She nuzzles her head into my shoulder.

"Maybe I'm already sure. And I just don't want to frighten you," I say.

"Then you should know better." I laugh a little more at her reply.

"Fine. I love you." She rolls on top of me, looking into my eyes.

Tris' POV

He just said it! Do I love him too? His quirks, his looks, his sense of humour. I do love him, don't I? I do! With my realisation, I feel warm and fuzzy, and happy in his love for me and my love for him. I kiss him and look into his eyes, so blue, yet so soft and loving.

"I love you too, Tobias," I whisper. He just smiles

Slightly short, but still. LOVE! Four admitted it! Fantasmical, moving on. Thanks for all the support, please review, if you don't review it's like being told to ride a bike and trying, but not knowing how. Toodle pip!

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