Hello all
Re read this today because I wanted to do an extra long kinda final 2 chapters even tho nobody really reads this genre of FanFiction much anymore, kinda to do it as closure for me but reading back I've realised the books kinda wack man idk how some of you kept up with the plot holes and the terrible grammar, I was fourteen/fifteen and thought I was the sickest writer (obviously not my brains just damned broke). You're all troopers so thank you for that. I would redo all the chapters and replace them but I don't think let's you do that unless you delete the whole thing??? Unless that's just me because I don't understand technology
So still don't know if anyone will even read this but sorry for how CRAP it was!! I mean some bits were cool not to sound up myself but the rest was TRASH!! The storyline was meant to be something around trying to support Ana by dropping college and uni to get a job full time instead (my dumbass didn't realise there's a restriction on hours she can work) so she meets jack and he helps her find out that she needs to love herself before she can fully like him blah blah, beats her past which was gonna stay a mystery until she tells jack was it was fully (I mean I deadass hinted at it SO MANY times that it's not even and damned secret) (I still know exactly what it was but it just seems so DUMB now) like I didn't even know I kept him as actual Jack Frost until reading it back? WHAT was I THINKING it literally makes ZERO sense? Was I okay?? Based of Stiles???? What??!!
Someone send her a therapist because idk her anymore?? My writing style hasn't changed but I would have written it so much less ignorant and cheesy because some parts like the intrusive thoughts are much more complicated than a simple "fat" or "cunt" also wtf why just the word "cunt"?? That's not even that BAD I may have just been bored. Like my humour has changed so much and parts where I was trying to be funny are just embARRISING please send her help!!
But anyway thank you for reading this BULLshit I will pay for all the hospital bills you guys gather from bleaching your eyes out
Deuces xx