a/n: Guess what? You'll neeeever guess. Well, anyway, I finally asked out the "one", and he said yes! Isn't that spiffy? -grins and dances around happily- Soo, I might be busy for a li'l while. Yay! Life really doesn't suck! Or maybe it does. Who knows? (laughs) At the moment, anyways, it doesn't. Without further ado, heeeere's…something I will never, ever, share with anyone but the internet. (no, really, no one in real life EVER reads my stories) Also, when did facebook hit this crazy peak of high? Sorry. Random. I'll get on with it now. Ah, me. Songs for this chapter: "Who's that Girl" (Hilary Duff) and "She Said" (Brie Larson).

p.s. MAY 5. Drew ("the one") did the sweetest thing for me, btw., and burned me a CD—I think my favorite was "Far Away" by Nickelback. That was tres deep Oh, and "My Life Would Suck Without You" was pretty cute too. Anyway. In case you haven't noticed, I have no spellcheck on my computer. (sobs) I turned it off, can't turn it back on again. And I'm too lazy to click the button when I'm done.

p.p.s. AM I using the same plot again and again? Doesn't seem like it to MOI, but whatevs. Oh, crap, I'm getting self-concious. And is "eachother" really two words? Really? Wow.

For "the one" (although I don't think he'd approve of this story…that, or he'd laugh his head off; actually, yeah, he'd have a heart attack afer the laughing fit.) Oh, and for Calm and MMP III, both who I am beginning to appreciate tres much.

I feel much better, thanks for noticing! (grins) Y'all can also visit me on Dream9100 for non-Nanoha related stuff!

"I feel like crap," were predictably the first words out of Nanoha's mouth as she sat up in the fancy hotel room and stared around.

"You slept for around forty minutes," commented Arisa. "Vivio-chan was out of her mind,"

"Oneechan, oneechan, oneechan, oneechan!" screeched Vivio, throwing herself at Nanoha and pushing her back onto the pillows. "I was scared, oneechan,"

"Sorry, Vivio-chan, I sorta had a tough day," shrugged Nanoha. "And now…I need to call the police,"

"Who, wait, WHAT?" asked Arisa, her eyes widening.

Suzuka, who had been very engaged in a book called "A Midsummer Night's Dream", looked up and frowned. "Did Nanoha-chan just announce she was going to call the police?"

"Mhm," Nanoha answered vaguely. "See, Jail used to be a criminal for human cloning… he has my mom, see…and…"

"Whoa, wait, what?" Arisa repeated.

"HE HAS MY MOM! AND FATE!" yelled Nanoha, her infamous temper getting the better of her. "SO NOW I HAVE TO GET THEM SOMEHOW!"

"And you think the police are gonna help you?"

"Um…" Nanoha bit her lip. "Maybe?"

"This isn't our hometown; this is a big city, and I'm sure the police officers have much better things to do than help us out with our little criminal case,"

"But he has Fate and my mom!"
"I know that, Nanoha, I'm not stupid. But my point is, the police won't listen to us. We'll have to do something to get proof—and we'll have to do something big," a rather evil grin crept across Arisa's face, and she cracked her knuckles ominously. "Which is just the way I like it,"

"Um…"

"Nanoha,"

Suzuka snapped her book shut, her eyes narrowing. "Well, I'm not going!"

"I didn't think you were," Arisa shot back. "Vivio and you are out; I don't think you could punch a fly, and Vivio's too little,"

"There are an awful lot of them…" Suzuka fretted.

"I doubt they can lift a finger," Arisa brushed off the worry.

"Arisa…what are we doing?"

"We're gonna go in there, punch their lights out, rescue Fate and your mom, then go to the police and demand they get arrested; if they refuse, we've still got Fate and your mom, so they've got no hostages to torture,"

"Uh…"

"WHAT is the problem now, Nanoha?"

"Are you really sure about this?"

"Please. Have you seen my punches? They're BEYOND epic,"

"Are you sure that's a plan?"

"YES!"

"It's a good idea," Vivio piped up.

"Shut up, what do you know?" snapped Nanoha, then put a hand over her mouth. "Oops, sorry, Vivio-chan,"

Vivio sniffed angrily and crossed her arms, looking about ten times her age.

"Are you sure we should go?"

"Um, yes? Isn't this for your mom?"

"But…"

Arisa rolled her eyes. "Oh, shut up,"

"Hey!"

"Let's go, we're leaving. Jeez!"

"Whaa? But, we've gotta do something…we can't just barge in like that…"

"Look, Nanoha, do you want to save your mom or not?"

"Yes, but I think you're being a little…quick to violence,"

"That's the way I am," Arisa grinned, like it was something to be proud of, and crossed her arms with a self-satisfied expression.

"Well…we could be arrested,"

"And then the problem would be solved, 'cause Jail would be accused first,"

"Still…"

"Stop procrastinating! Let's go!"

"N-now?" squeaked Nanoha.

"YES! What if Jail does something bad in the meantime? Then what'll happen?"

"Um…"

Arisa rolled her eyes as Nanoha bit her lip, looking nervous. Then blue eyes hardened, and Nanoha nodded.

Arisa clapped her hands like a kid on a TV show during Christmas, and smiled. "Let's go, then! Come on! See you guys later!"

"Or not," muttered Nanoha.

000

Fate sat at the front of the class, as always, right beside Jail. The entire while he stroked her hair or touched her cheek, trying to distract her.

She just ignored him; but she didn't like the way he touched her.

Like she was a doll to be admired and played with, or something inhuman, without feelings.

What was worse was the fact that he actually seemed to believe it.

"I'm singing to the end, just for you Songs that I want you to hear I want to sing more But that's just too much to wish for This is where we part All my feelings disappear into thin air,"

"That's good…" his voice too, as if he was speaking to a doll.

"…turning to 0s and 1s,"

000

A/N: OH my gosh, I had a dream about MGLN last night! Should I write about it? Unlike the others, it was not AU…and Precia killed Fate. (sobs) And ran Yuuno over with…something metal. Well?

For chkim218, that was sort of foreshadowing; very vague, I know. Anyway, what I meant was that Fate didn't want Nanoha captured like Momoko was. And Jail said he wouldn't take an ENTIRE family hostage.

Anyway. I think my writing in this chapter might have been a bit off…I was listening to Vocaloid. Fate's song is The Disappearance of Hatsune Miku –DEAD END-

Lots of love! Review? Please? I'll give you a trillion neopoints! (shyeah, I played neopets. Three years ago)

Drew: "Omg u totally shoould, cuz ema is awesome."

Me: GET A DICTIONARY! (throws heavy book at him)

I KNOW, IT WAS OBSCENLY SHORT, I APOLOGIZE…NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE OVER 2000 WORDS!