Yet another random note from Mystified Ice:
Hey guys, I know I just sent out a note like two or three days ago, but I have some other stuff I just want to hammer out because I don't want to mention them in the future.
First off, I do not own Twilight or LOST, obviously.
Second, critique my writing! Or just point out a flaw or two in my plot or chapter. :)
I think that the suspense is warring down for now and it makes the story slightly monotonous, but that is why I put in some of those 'Edward/Bella' moments as well as ''Jacob/Bella' if you don't like those tell me how to improve them or something. But expect lots of action in future chapters. Don't forget 'The Others' as well as the 'Monster' and so many other little fun things. :
Thirdly, I had a story that I wanted to create, but sadly majority of the good ideas were taken and I REFUSED to make the Cullens human mainly because they are meant to be Vampires. So, I found/find myself at an impasse for a good romancy/comedic story that involves the Cullens remaining human and Bella still being her little human self. –Takes a sip of chocolate milk- MOM STOCKED UP ON MILK! :)!! Random…Anyways..Yeah if anyone has an idea that they wouldn't mind me 'borrowing' (See how loosely I use the word 'borrow' lol) then please let me know because the little well in my head if dry.
Original Ideas
Finding Emmett – Where a clown fish ,Bella, embarks on a mission to find her son, Emmett and meets Edward the forgetful vampiric fish as well as many other fishy/corky characters such as the loose sea turtle Alice and the sharks; Erik, Mike, and Tyler.
Polar Bears – 'The Cullens' a band of vampires who believe they are ten year old rock stars attempt to save the polar bears as well as the Earth from global warming with the help of Isabella Swan a spunky violinist and the power of SONG!
Bella and Friends – Bella the purple dinosaur plays with the teenagers of Forks in an attempt to raise their spirits. Can our magical dinosaur cheer up Edward Cullen?
Cullen Idol – A panel of judges; Edward, Alice, and Emmett sit through terrifyingly horrible auditions of people singing until they can find America's next favorite singer just because they can.
No, these are not my ideas, lol. If you did not realize that after 'Polar Bears' then maybe a trip to the optometrist is a good ole' idea. But yes, I had a few ideas that were decent, but I was kind of confused whether anyone would read them or if they would stay true to the characters. One of my real ideas was actually to mix The Taming of the Shrew/10 Things I Hate About You with Twilight, but then it would come out kind of funky. That is what I thought atleast. Anyways, help is much appreciated! :)
This ends my tedious note for the day, expect chapter 13 of "Find Me" either later tonight or tomorrow.
- Mystified Ice