Hi yas! Before anyone be's mean to me, I did say a week at latest. It has been 6 days. Narrowly dodged that bullet huh?
Also, YES! I found out I average around 100 hits overall per chapter posted (what I mean is: 13 chapters and I have 1300-ish total hits). WOOT!
And now to answer reviews:
vampire-wizard-with-wings - Yes, tis is very funny chapter compared to others. I made Gazzy a little dumber than usual, but it was only for laughs. And technically, I am an author (dat's what they call you on this site). And plz don't cry. I like my limbs intact.
And now for the creepiest chapter yet! In my opinion that is, 'cuz Angel scares me a lot near the end.
14
I stopped my running once I realized that the whole dang thing was a labyrinth… and also taking half an hour passing the place that we started… 4 times. So I decided to be a little more careful. I still wonder how Angel was able to keep up with me the whole time.
Actually, I didn't, Angel admitted. All I did was stand here and watch you go around… and around… and ar-
"I get it Angel," I said aloud, on accident. Oops! I sure hope no one (or more specifically, nothing) was around and was able to hear that, or I'd be in serious trouble. I mean, we're still tired because of the last fight.
But apparently, God is still onto me for breaking a few of his commandments… Okay! A lot of his commandments, because here were a whole battalion of the new robots coming our way. In fact, they rounded the corner and looked at me face to face.
Oh-
Don't even think it!
Oh yeah. Sorry Ange.
She forgave me and looked at the robot thingy-mabobbers that we have yet to name. (A/N: HINT! HINT!)
There was a big problem now because these came with guns. I now turned to Angel and said, "Get the guns."
She nodded but thought, But I thought you told us not to use guns.
Forget my ethics! This is a death or death situation here!
Okay.
We then lunged at the front line and clobbered them. Apparently, the robots weren't equipped for sudden attacks and were destroyed easily. We popped up with the guns and aimed at the robots. And we fired off rounds of bullets.
The bullets easily penetrated the robotic armor as they crashed to the ground. However, they also fired off rounds, and, unlike times before, we did not get off unscafed or whatever. It was after the fight we cried in pain (just Angel, I sweated in pain).
"Ow! my knee!"
"My toe!"
"That just barely missed my head! I can feel the burn."
I checked out Angel's knee and said, "It's superficial. However, I should carry you just to make sure I don't jostle your wound."
She replied, "But what about your toe."
I quirked an eyebrow and said, "So you're going to carry me, now?"
We laughed and then, remembering the seriousness of the situation, quieted immediately. I asked Angel, Can you locate Ter Borcht? He needs a good butt-kicking.
Sure. She was mentally silent for a minute before spouting out directions. Go forward four left turns and take the fifth.
I genuinely smiled. Now we were getting somewhere.
I had been following her directions for 10 minutes before I found Ter Borcht. He was in a high-security room watching Fang and the rest of the Flock trying to find us in Antarctica. I gasped inaudibly. He knows where they are!
This sucks.
I agree, Angel. This definitely sucks.
Then I felt my kick-butt senses take control and burst into the room. This got Ter Borcht's attention as he turned around. I looked at him with blood-lust all over my face. I must have looked pretty scary because he was quaking in his chair.
I felt like being cliché and made a slow march toward him, while doing an angry speech, slowly I might add, "You have stolen my little girl. You have split up my flock. You have been the one sending all of the robots to our family!
"I thought I was angry then, but no! You have to make my life miserable! I have had to live with your mistakes since BEFORE the day that I was born. And then, you went from us being a part of the New World to being on your Assassinate list!
"You know what! You are worth less than the snow on my shoe! You don't deserve death! You deserve a painful torture that you are unable to die from!"
I ranted on and on for a while, then calmed down considerably. I panted in rage after that, waiting for a response.
It came, "Vou have proven a vorthy person. But vou are underestimating me. For now, I vill vestory vour vittle Flock!" He then spat on me and pressed a button.
A robotic PA announcement now went over the whole area, "Destroy 'Mini-Flock'! I repeat, destroy 'Mini-Flock'!"
He laughed maniacally then abruptly stopped and fell over on his desk. I turned to find an enraged Angel. She must of killed him. But I was still scared of what came next.
She said these in a very shaky but scary tone:
"You!
Will!
Not!
Get!
Away!
With!
This!"
...CLIFFIE! It was bound to happen sometime.
So I got rid of the major antagonist, but the robothings are after the Mini-Flock. Tsk! Tsk! Tsk! What is going to happen.
Just to let you know *Spolier?* I probably won't kill the Flock because of the risk of flames. But I might just do it anyway, makes good drama.
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Oh yes and:
Disclaimer: Oi! It is obvious I doon't own de Maximum Roide series, or any of the characters... or the roboalls... I have to be more creative.
*sigh*
