Sorry guys this is not a chapter. I will be updating in the next couple of days. I have to say I am excited with all the great reviews I have received so far. Seriously all the reviews are exactly what I need for me to continue with the story. I wanted to take some time to go over some stuff with my story so far. Since this story is still in progress and there are days when you might go with out having an update I thought I would point some stuff out. I know every writer will make sure to make a point to write stuff that you may not feel is anything and then find out later on it was. So since as of right now I plan to finish this story I wanted to give you an inside on what you may need to file that is important.
Chapter 1 I make a point that the reason I have kept Keith is because I feel that his and Lucas's relationship will be a key in this story. I plan on doing just that. I was very pleased with the way Mark brought Keith back in and had him show Lucas how much Peyton really meant to him. So yes I plan on doing just that with this story.
Chapter 3 I made a point to say that Dan felt Lucas was engaged to the wrong women. I also made a point that there were two set of eyes that kept going to Lucas. Both of these will be addressed later in the story.
Chapter 4 I made a point that Lena already knew Dan's name. I also made a point that she had asked her mother about him. It will come into use later on why I made every light in the house on, and why both Finn and Lena saying "it's the only way it would/should be."
Chapter 5 I made the point to have Katie to express that her daughter was very loyal and that close family and friends are very important. There was also a reason why I brought up that Lena could sing. The reason why I put in that Dan received scrap books too is important.
Chapter 6 there is a point on why I listed everything that Lena received from her mothers and Greg's will. Hint someone asked me to bring back Andy!
Chapter 7 I made a point that when Lena was talking with everyone she was still very private and very vague about stuff. Please note Lena is still very much a stranger and they hadn't received as much information on her as she did on them.
Chapter 8 I made a point that she also will be receiving a degree in Art and Music History. I made a point that while she as talking to Karen she said "you can teach me a thing or two."
Chapter 10 I know that there are many of you guys that have never watched Gilmore Girls, but there is a reason that in this chapter I did in fact bring in Lorelia and the mention of Rory. Also reason why I asked about Rory and Logan's relationship and the fact they would be in North Carolina in a month.
Chapter 11 there is a reason why I had Lena tells Haley she needed to get back into the music business. I was very happy to see in the show Haley getting back into music. I know I haven't yet to go into what happen in Dan's office, but there is a reason why he is the way he is in the last part of the chapter.
Chapter 12 I made a point to add Tristan in, and tell them how he had met Lena while he was attending Military School. There is also a part where Tristan is talking to Nathan and Peyton he lets them know it wasn't the first time she had done that before. That is very important to know. Once again it's expressed that Lena is a private person.
Chapter 13 there is a reason why I stated Nathan could tell that Finn and Tristan would die for Lena. Also where I made a point that Peyton has heard all week Lena humming a song. (Yes I know it wasn't spelled right in the chapter, sorry) Ok so I was very surprised that in my reviews no one questioned what "Promises" they had made. That is very important just as is the fact I wrote that Tristan took notice of 3 boxes sitting in her room. I may not have written it right, but the rest of the stuff in her apartment was already on its way to the states. Also once again if you have never seen Gilmore Girls you didn't get that they were in fact talking about Rory!
Ok so I hope this will help you guys. I know it's odd I did this, but since I wanted this story to be very long this stuff might be forgotten. Thank you guys that have taken the time to read and review it meant the world to me.
If there is ever anything you may have questions about please let me know. I will try to answer you as soon as I can.