Well, it has been almost a year... I want to apologize and tell you all some really well thought out excuse that covers all the bases... but TBH... I forgot this thing existed for a while... I know, you can all yell at me now should you so wish...
anyways... First comment was from... BringbackDannyPhantom
Wha-! I'm soo confused! What happened inside Danny's mind!?
Longest comment came from... (you guessed it) jim89
Interestingly, seeking things from Sam's perspective
She said. But, Tucker and Valerie have a lot thicker skin when it comes to annoyance then Sam. The thing but of the two of them Valerie's the more hotheaded one
i.e. when something does get to her thick-skinned with critical which kill shot and she'll go nuclear especially when emotions involved. Ironically, her and Sam have that in common
At least Sam's also honest about her and jazz, not getting along well
it's all Sam's side not jazz. She really can't kill someone being Optimistic and overly caring.
But the funny thing is Sam's only one that noticed that jazz is not around
you must have some bond for each other even though Sam doesn't want to admit to it
if Sam had not noticed how long the other idiots to figure it out
My guess is it would take a while
as for Raven and Danny about have been very awkward conversation. or confrontation with the bad guy
We shall see
and favorite comment came from msclever9
Wow, I just wrote a review for chapter seven cuz I didn't see the little arrow button that went to the next chapter, so I though the story ended there. Lol.
that sounds like something i would do... almost constantly...
so now... without further adu! CHAPTER 14!
*cheers*
Chapter 14
(Danny)
I sat bolt upright trying to make sense of the fact that I wasn't in school anymore. I looked around, trying to take in my surroundings too fast and ending up confusing myself even more. I closed my eyes forced myself to take deep breaths before taking a look around again. I was in the ghost zone, not at my old school, Raven was lying next to me and seemed to be avoiding my gaze. Only when I had caught her eye did the rest of the dream come back to my and I turned away to hide my burning face. To distract myself, I continued looking around, Frosbite and all of his subjects were passed out around me.
Where have I seen this before?
The whole scene seemed so familiar, yet I couldn't help feel like something was out of place...
"Quick, pretend to go back to sleep and don't "wake up" until I come to get you, no matter what... stay focused and you shouldn't be affected!" I whispered urgently
Raven gave me a startled and confused look before slowly following my instructions. I lay back down and just as I was closing my eyes, a horde of green ghosts that looked like burlap voodoo dolls floated into the room. With my vision completely hindered I had to rely on my other senses, which is really hard... especially when ghosts don't make sound. Eventually, I heard Raven leave the floor and less than a second later I felt something fall over my head and a pair of arms lift me into the air.
(Raven)
When Danny said sleep, I didn't question him and I didn't argue, I was scared I would let slip how embarrassed I was. I figured that when nothing happened I could laugh at him then, but soon I felt something hard and metallic shoved onto my head and I felt the floor fall away beneath me. As soon as whatever was on my head was put into place I I felt myself slipping back into a peaceful rest. Focus! Danny's voice rang out clear in my head, opening my eyes was obviously out of the question and I was slipping away fast. Summoning all of my mental abilities, I willed myself to stay alert and awake, I just had to keep myself awake until Danny came to get me. I could do it, NO, I CAN do it! Then, they put me down on the softest bed I have ever felt and my resolve crumbled into dust...
(Danny)
As nocturne's pet dolls carried me away I kept trying to discern any type of clue as to where anything was... I knew if I opened my eyes i was done for, but I couldn't stand not knowing. Hey, don't be surprised... patience never was one of my strong suits... I was straining all of my senses, hoping for some kind of sound that could give my any info. After a while, the helmet began clearing my head, trying to lull me into unconsciousness. In that moment, just as my head cleared, I saw everything around me, well... not really SAW... It was more like everything around me just kinda showed up in my head. It was only for an instant and it seemed like everything was frozen. I began trying to listen for any clues again and I cleared my head and felt a sort of pulse leave my body and a moment later I had a freeze frame in my mind where everything was. Confused as I was, Mr. Lancer's voice filtered into my head, "Since it has such poor eyesight, a bat relies on echolocation to discern its whereabouts. Scientists have discovered that a bat sends out a subsonic sound frequency that bounces off nearby objects and back to the bat." My head was already spinning, but I managed to piece together that I seemed to have a new power based on a bat's way of seeing. I decided that just to annoy Sam, she always hated the stupid names i gave my powers, I would call this one Ectolocation. I focused and sent out a stronger pulse than before but still only got my immediate surroundings.
"OK," I thought "The pulse can't travel through solid objects"
I thought I was ready for anything, until I felt myself being thrown out into nothingness. Sending out a pulse just to be safe, but I got almost no info back... I opened my eyes and saw that I had been thrown out of the land of the far frozen and into open ghost zone... and to make matters worse, Nocturne had managed to put up an Ecto shield around the entire habitat...
And this is where I leave you for tonight, it is late and I have school in the morning (kill me now...)
So please feel free to follow/fav/comment and I will update next on Saturday, September 10 (you may now commence yelling at me and cursing my name for the 1 year wait time...)
