So this is what I came up with after days of not writing. I skip to the day before Eddie leaves for tour. This chapter is mostly about Loren and Eddie. I changed my writing style a little in this chapter. A guest said that he/she couldn't tell who was talking at time so I tried to make it clear. Please read and review.
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Loren is standing on the balcony outside enjoying the fresh cool air, as she over look the ocean. The night sky was filled with thousands of shining stars, which Loren love. The sound of the waves crashing on the shore was peaceful to her. Her content moment was interrupted, when she felt a hand softly touching her waist pulling her close. She smiles immediately knowing whose hand it was. He moves her hair to one side, and laid gentle kisses on her neck leading up to her ear. It was crazy to her that just one touch and he had her practically eating out of his hands.
"I don't know if I told you how incredibly beautiful you look tonight"
He whispered in her ear.
"Just tonight?"
"No you always look beautiful, but tonight you out did yourself. I mean look at this dress"
He runs his hands down her waist. She turns around and smiles with a glimpse of success in her eyes.
"Are you enjoying your party?" "Yes. My ma sure knows how to throw a going away party. I would rather spend the night with you in bed though" "you would like that, wouldn't you" "Yes. We could be in your bed cuddling now. Considering it's my last night with you"
He said trying to figure out the answer to the question he asked her a few days ago. He was so nervous to ask her, because he didn't know how it would come across. Would she think he only invited her on tour with him so he could keep an eye on her. Are would she think of it has more time with him. Eddie was lost in thought and Loren noticed. She lifted his chin with her finger so he was looking at her.
"it's not your last night with me"
She kissed him and walked back into the house. It took him awhile before he realized what Loren told him. She was going on tour with him. She chose him over Channing or Nina.
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"Loren"
Jake called out to her, next to him stood his beautiful wife.
"Loren, I would like you to meet my wife Traci" "Hi it's nice to meet you Loren. I'm so happy you're going on tour with us. I'll have a girl to go shopping with" "oh you're coming too. That's great I thought it was going to be me versus the barbarians" "I thought the same thing when Jake invited me, but no we'll have each other"
Loren saw her mother across the dance floor with her new boyfriend Eric Dane. Eric was nothing like Trent which was great. He was loving and warm, funny and educated. He was everything, in a man who Loren could wish for her mother.
"Sorry I have to speak to my mom. See you guys tomorrow" "Okay, don't be late"
Jake said as she walked off.
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"Hey mom, Eric" "hey sweetie, having fun?" "Yeah I need to talk to you" "oh, okay I'll get you two ladies something to drink meanwhile you talk"
Eric hugged Loren before he left.
"He's amazing" "Isn't he, I have to thank Katy" "Thank me for what?"
Katy appeared out of nowhere.
"For setting me up with Eric" "oh you're welcome. I knew you too would hit it off... Anyway I'm looking for Max have you guys seen him?" "Last time I saw him he was at the bar" "Of course, he would be at the bar. Thanks Nora... Oh by the way Loren you look beautiful tonight" "thank you Katy"
Katy walks away in search of Max. Loren turned back to her mother, but before she could speak Nora spoke first.
"Your going on tour with Eddie"
she said.
"How did you know?" "I'm your mother, I know you. Have fun and call me once a day or twice if you want"
Loren laughs.
"Okay mom"
Eric came back with the drinks and handed it to them.
"Is everything okay?" "Yes it's fine. I'm going to need you to take care of my mom while I'm gone"
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"Hey"
Mel yelled over the roaring of the music blasting through out the Duran's mansion.
"Hey Mel" "have you seen Ian"
They both scan the room, Loren spotted him.
"He's over there with his mate"
She pointed at Eddie. Eddie notice and gave her a smile.
"So, have you decided on what you're going to do?" "Yeah, I'm gonna go" "yes! Oh and remember to bring me back something, anything shiny will do" "okay Mel"
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"Hey, this isn't a romantic movie. You two need to stop giving each other longingly stares from across the room"
Eddie laughs.
"What can I say I'm a romantic kind of guy"
"Did she give you an answer yet?" "Yeah, she's coming" "that's great mate. Just don't mess this up. Loren's a great girl for you. She's beautiful on the inside and out. She tells it like it is. She's not afraid to tell you when you're being an idiot. And most importantly she likes you for you" "when since you start giving out relationship advice?" "Since I met her"
He motion his head towards Mel and Loren walking over to them. Who would have thought Ian would have a girlfriend, let alone giving Eddie advice on what to do. He was a player and now look at him.
"Ian, I want to dance" "lead the way love"
They went on the dance floor. Eddie stepped behind Loren and wrapt his hand around her waist.
"You seem comfortable putting your hands around my waist"
He got closer whispering.
"I'm starting to think that's where they belong"
He kiss her on her head. She let out a little giggle, which he found cute, come to think of it every little thing She did he would find cute.
"Wanna dance?"
He asked. Leading her on the dance floor. The music conveniently switch over to a slow song. He pull her close and lead her to the music.
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"You two ladies need to stop interfering in our children's life"
Said Max.
"What?"
They both said innocently.
"Eddie needs Loren, look at him"
Katy said. They all turn to Loren and Eddie. Eddie had a smile on his face that could light up the night sky.
"I can't remember a time when Eddie was truly this happy"
Said Katy.
"From what I seen in the short amount of time I've been here. I think they're perfect for one another"
"See Max even Eric thinks they're perfect"'
Nora added.
"I didn't say they weren't perfect together. I said you two need to stop butting in"
Katy and Nora rolled their eyes.
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The hours felt like minutes. Before they knew it everyone left.
"Eduardo don't be late" "I won't"
Loren was gathering her things to leave. Eddie offered to walk her out.
"Night Katy, Max"
Loren said.
"night sweetie drive safe"
Katy replied.
"bye ma, pop" "night son"
Max hugged him and they walked out of the house, and to Loren's car. Eddie open the door for her.
"Such a gentleman" "I try"
He close the door behind her.
"See you tomorrow"
He leaned in and gave her a kiss good night.
"Call me if you need anything" "Eddie I lived on my own before" "I know, it's a new house and a new neighborhood. I'm j-" "just trying to protect me. You and mom need to stop worrying I'm fine"
She kisses him.
"See you tomorrow"
Next day
"Wow Eduardo you're on time for a change. I wonder what brought this on" "yes Jake I'm on time"
Eddie walk pass him entering the private jet. Loren was already inside typing away on her laptop. Immediately a smile appeared on his face. He couldn't explain it every time he saw her his palms get sweaty, his heart begins to race and a stupid smile appeared on his face.
"Morning Loren"
She looked up and gave him the same warm smile he was giving her. He leaned in and kiss her.
"Well good morning to you too. That wasn't professional" "Loren you and I both know we are way pass being professional. What are you doing?"
She gave him a look before answering his question.
"I'm making a schedule for you" "are you almost done?"
She smiles.
"No Eddie I just started"
He sigh knowing what they could be doing instead of her working, but he knew he would have plenty of opportunities to do all that now that she was going with him.
"okay I'll look for a movie for us to watch when your done"
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About twenty minutes later Loren finished. She found Eddie at the back of the plane, on his laptop.
"I'm done" "finally!"
She laughs. Eddie pulled her down beside him.
"What movie are we watching?" "Endless love" "awe I wanted to watch that" "I know that's why I picked it"
Eddie laid a blanket over Loren and pop in the movie and got under the blanket with her.
So what do you think?
Should I go back to Pov's or keep writing like this?
Did you know who was talking or do I have to label more?
R&R