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Disobedience
The next day dawned. Superman hadn't returned home. Batman hadn't slept and was still typing on the Batcomputer. Isabel hadn't slept either, sitting next to Batman. She prayed for the League's safety. The gods ignored her prayers. The Batcomputer flashed the alert warning, signaling the invasion of Waller's army into League HQ. Several original members called out for Batman and Bruce stood up. Isabel stared at him, concerned. "I am needed in the HQ."
Batman took out the red-sun radiation ropes and saw Isabel cower. Isabel pleaded, "Please, let me help." Bruce took no notice of her pleas and tied her to her chair. Batman threatened her in his most Batman voice, "If you disobey my orders and go to the League HQ, I will never forgive you. Do I make myself clear?" Isabel murmured, "I understand." As Batman went out of the Batcave, Isabel shouted as loud as she could, "Please don't die!"
Isabel cried for her incompetence. She was useless. She was no hero. She was only a damsel in distress. The Brainiac in her suggested, "Why not connecting to the Batcomputer and observe the situation in the League HQ?" Isabel looked at the screen and opened the League HQ security camera videos. Waller's army was formed by clones of meta-humans formerly known as Ultimatum.
The League members were being defeated by these enhanced soldiers. The soldiers seemed to feel no pain and attacked ruthlessly. She found Flash unconscious on the ground, still surrounded by clones beating him senseless. Hawkgirl was pinned down by several clones and some clones were tearing at her wings. Isabel could hear her ear-splitting scream. Isabel asked Brainiac for guidance, "How should I get out of these ropes?" Brainiac instructed her to inch towards one of Batman's collection of weapons and cut off the ropes.
Isabel was going to rescue her family.
