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Haddock followed the Doctor back into the room where the pods and Rose were. The Doctor stopped at the door way and scanned the room for Rose, he saw her lying on the ground. Running over, he noticed that her leg was in a splint; he knelt down in front of her and stared at the injured leg. The Doctor tried to contain—though with even less success than his earlier attempts—his anger; no one was ever allowed to hurt his Rose. He pushed the hair out of the sleeping girls face; his hand paused when he noticed an ugly bruise around her neck, and realized someone had choked her. The Doctor stood up and started to pace around the room, trying to reign in the terrible anger that was building inside him, he felt as though he was a volcano about to erupt and when he did, there would be catastrophic damage. He looked at his screwdriver than, at Haddock, turning he went back to Rose. Gently he picked her up and held her in his arms, he was upset that he hadn't been able to prevent her from getting hurt.
"I'm sorry, I'm so sorry Rose." He whispered as he held her close. Rose opened her eyes and found herself looking over the Doctor's shoulder, she whimpered as the pain in her leg came back into sharp focus. Wrapping her arms around the Doctor, she hugged him tight. She was so relieved to find him alive! She grabbed his clothes as the pain in her leg increased, Rose silently started to cry.
Haddock couldn't take his own pain anymore, he walked to the pod that held Tintin, sat down and leaned against it. The Captain clenched his teeth, as his chest screamed in pain where Edward had punched him. As he sat there he realized that some of his ribs might be cracked or even broken. Why hadn't he stopped to think about it before? The pain was too much for him, and he slowly slipped into unconsciousness. The last thing he saw was the Doctor and Rose, holding each other.
The Doctor heard something move by the door, looking up he saw Edward staring at him and Rose. That was the final straw for the Doctor's rather small control of his anger. The Doctor snapped. Gently letting go of Rose he jumped up and slammed Edward against one of the pods, which cracked on impact, Rose gasped in surprise. Edward felt pain run through his body as he collided with the pod, wait, since when could anything cause him pain? Edward tried, with little success, to avoid the Doctor's gaze, he felt himself tremble inside as the Doctor glared at him.
"Why did you hurt Rose?" he said through clenched teeth, Edward wanted to shrink away, but the Doctor had a firm grip and he was practically shaking him. "Answer me Edward!" the Vampire struggled to look at him.
"S-s-she tried to stop me from taking you away." Edward said he was having a hard time talking without emotion, especially with the look the Doctor was giving him.
"You didn't have to BREAK HER LEG!" the Doctor said raising his voice. Edward glanced in Rose's direction, he saw the pain in her eyes and felt a twinge of regret; he then turned his gaze to the Captain, and gasped slightly.
"Doctor, you have to believe me, I didn't mean to kill your friend the Captain." Edward said still looking in Haddocks direction. The Doctor looked confused for a moment then slowly turned his head, the Captain was slumped against one of the pods, and the Doctor couldn't tell if he was breathing. Edward took the opportunity to punch the Doctor while he was distracted, the blow never landed. The Doctor dodged the vampires blow; he swung his own fist and managed to clip Edward right in the nose. Edward was surprised when he fell back and hit the pod again; he felt the pod crack again. Edward felt a warm liquid run down his nose, he was amazed to find himself bleeding, he smiled slightly, and this meant he didn't have to go easy on this man when they fought.
The Doctor could see that Edward was far beyond reason now; he had somehow decided that killing the Doctor would save his Bella. However, Edward didn't get the chance to hit the Doctor, he swung once and the Doctor dodged, before Edward could try again the Doctor opened his mind.
Edward fell to the ground and screamed he held his head. The pain was so great that he felt as though it would split in two. The Doctor barely grimaced at the fact that he was hurting someone so badly, but he knew if he stopped, Edward would stop at nothing to try and kill him. The Doctor went to see if the Captain was indeed dead or alive, Rose saw something move in the corner of her eye, she turned to see that the pod that Edward had cracked contained the dalek, had it moved or was she just paranoid? Edward groaned as the Doctor's thoughts reeled inside his head, the alien…no the Time Lord was driving him insane; Rose gasped as the dalek's ray gun twitched. The Doctor walked to the Captain and felt for a pulse, it was very faint. As if he was slowly letting go of life.