ok seems like i should continue, yeah i know my language sucks big time and i did rewrite the first 6 chpt in a haze. But i never had a proper english teacher the english i've learned is from watching tv and reading fics. and english isn't even my second but fourth, its a language i try to learn when i have time. but i really appriciate that you all still read i really do, and i'm gonna think about the lenghts and the speed. im to lazy to get a beta reader ยด"chuckles" after new years i'm gonna start rewritting the other chpts. but one quick question, "I'm" is "I am" i know that, but can you say; no am tired. or is it that you have to write all the time "I'm."

second question can you put a . and then a; And? so example; ". And"

ok i'm done now lol

BYE

Marry Christmas and happy new year! )