Chapter 14:
Imperfect Souls
The Hyuga headquarters relocated after the deaths of their acclaimed leader, Hyuga Hiashi, his wife Hinoto, and their youngest daughter Hanabi.
The revered Hyuga clan, whose battles with the vampires of Japan raged for centuries, never forgot the horrific night. Half of their people had been slaughtered. Their bodies mutilated across the ground. Worse was the news media reported the scene as a tragic mass suicide. Tragic, it was; but, mass suicide it was clearly not.
In order to conceal the secrecy of vampires in Japan, the remaining Hyugas who survived were forced to wager the honor of their dead loved ones in the name of duty. Bound by the vampire hunter code, they could never release information of the existence of actual vampires. As life continued, the Hyugas existed in order to seek revenge for the loss of their people—to fight for the purpose of human peace and order. To kill willingly for their deceased leader and his family.
Thirty seven years have passed since their heiress' kidnap. Hyuga Hinata was likely dead.
Her life was as good as gone the moment Uchiha Sasuke seized her from the clan. For years they tried to locate him, but he hid perfectly from their eyes. Whatever concealment had been pulled over the Hyugas, it was now too late to continue searching for the lost heiress.
There was no way Hyuga Hinata had lived this long.
Thus, the Hyuga Elders were shocked to hear the surprising news from one of their prized hunters that 'Hinata' had been uttered by the Uchiha vampire. Hanabi was still young—no less a twenty year old. Training his daughter for much of her life, Neji made sure she realized how lucky she had been to live through the ordeal. To hear the news of what she had gained from her battle with the Uchiha was also an unexpected gain.
"He spoke a name I have not heard of before, Father."
Neji looked up from his bowl of rice and stared at Hanabi. When his Uncle Hiashi and his family passed away, Neji was coronated as the next leader of the Hyuga clan. With thirty-seven years that have passed, forty-five year old Neji had successfully mastered the Byakugan and his share of killing vampires. His eyes slowly turned to Hanabi's bandaged arms which had been efficiently healing for a month due to their ancient medical techniques.
The two ate dinner before Hanabi would leave for tonight's raid. A Hyuga maid dressed in a traditional brown yukata stood by the rice door of the room ready for any instructions.
"You must respect the name, Hanabi," said Neji seriously. "It is the name of your aunt—the real heiress to the Hyuga clan."
Hanabi frowned," I had no idea at all Father. Why now? Why did you hide her name? All I knew was that I had an aunt named Hanabi whom you named me after."
Neji continued eating, placing rice into his mouth as he chewed. He could feel the intense stare of his daughter looking at him. Her gaze was just as fierce as his. It was a shame her mother had passed away after giving birth to her. Yet, he had given his daughter the name of Hanabi because of the death of his youngest cousin. It pained him to look at the sight of her dead body. Subsequently Neji swore that night to give his future daughter the honor of bearing the beautiful name. Hatred had burned in his eight year old eyes that a vampire had done this out of spite—no less an Uchiha. How disgusting.
Therefore, the attack that was to take place tonight at Uchiha Sasuke's engagement party would be their greatest attack in the last fifty years. They would soon wreak havoc tonight. The Hyugas had found something precious to take away from the Uchiha vermin; his fiance.
After all the Hyugas had lost, nothing could deter them from this path.
Hinata's words burned into Sasuke.
She hated him. He could feel it as her intense gaze lingered.
Sasuke wanted her to stop looking at him with that expression of loathing. He approached her again, but stopped once Hinata took a step back.
"Hinata."
He called out to her once more. He had her in his grasps. Yet, she was so far away. It was like the human Hinata had returned. As the silence pervaded, Sasuke's expression changed. A small smirk appeared on his lips.
"Do you really hate me?" he questioned bitterly. His eyes narrowed into a glare, with his hands strictly resting at his sides. Her word had been spoken, but was it really in her heart to only hate him? After all, Hinata had yet to find out the whole truth.
Hinata nodded; her face serious.
Sasuke looked away disbelievingly and began to move towards Hinata again. Hinata's eyes widened from Sasuke's sudden movements and she quickly wrapped her arms over her upper body.
"S-stop!" she exclaimed, tightly closing her eyes. She did not want to see what he would do to her.
His calloused hands touched her face.
If this is how you want to play, Hinata, I'll play along, thought Sasuke, as he stared gently at Hinata's features. Her skin felt soft to his touch—so familiar, yet so new at the same time. Even though she had spent much of her youth with him, he was still not accustomed to feeling her skin. Hinata was always beyond his reach, even now, as his body tingled with her face in his hands. Her skin was addicting. Fear was visibly in her expression. Being a 375 year old vampire, Sasuke could easily verify that hate was not the only emotion resonant in Hinata's system. There were other…emotions...he could detect, and she was afraid to express them in his presence.
It was clear to Sasuke that Hinata was trying to run away from him. Just like before when she had committed suicide.
Already, Hinata was acting ignorant to his pleas for her. He could see it in her eyes and the way she cringed when he approached her. She was going to reject the love and care he gave her. In any way possible, Hinata was not going to acknowledge his existence.
Yet Sasuke continued to touch her like this.
Sasuke was no fool. He knew what rejection was. Yet, it only increased his lust for her. Hinata was so delicate—extremely weak to confront her feelings. She had no idea the effect this had over him. He loved seeing Hinata suffer because it only confirmed the deep power he had over her; the best way he knew to get a reaction from her.
No one will make you suffer besides me, thought Sasuke, his eyes scanning her. No one else shall hurt you.
Sasuke released his hold on Hinata's face and quickly she fled from him.
Don't cry anymore, Hinata ordered herself. She was running. She wiped her face with her hands. Turning the corner, she looked back to see if she was being followed by Sasuke.
No one behind her.
Relieved, Hinata looked forward and felt her heart beat rapid to escape from his grasp. She was afraid of Sasuke. Never, in her life, would she had considered feeling this anxiety around him. She had bravely stood up to him—telling him terrible words that were growing in her heart like weeds. Tremors began to form in Hinata as she continued up the halls to the party.
Seeing his display of darkness was a truly horrible sight. And feeling her own darkness spread like a disease weathered Hinata's control. But pulling herself from Sasuke, Hinata had succeeded in keeping her secret hidden.
Sasuke stood alone in the hallway. He stared at the carpeted floor. His fingers wet.
Did she realize what had occurred while she had been with him in these last moments?
Your tears are gone, he thought, having wiped them away with his fingers.
"For the last time, Gaara, she'll return," said Naruto. His hands holding tightly onto Gaara's shoulders.
The gazes from the guests grew in increasing curiosity. Naruto knew jokes would not save them this time. The vampires were waiting for a reaction to arise from his hot-blooded friend. They wanted action. Just like Gaara, they were curious to see how Lord Uchiha and Hinata would arrive back to the engagement party.
Even Naruto knew it would be disrespectful to follow after Lord Uchiha and Hinata. All he could do was tame Gaara's temper.
Gaara tried to pry himself away from Naruto's hold, but a part of him wanted to be held back. Even Gaara understood the social hierarchy of the vampire system. Who knew what would have happened if he were to strike the Uchiha vampire. Most likely, imprisonment or physical punishment.
Naruto turned his gaze back to where Hinata had stood and stared into the eyes of Yamanaka Ino. They locked gaze. Embarrassed, Ino quickly walked away.
Naruto smiled. So Ino was still flushed when around him, eh? Naruto released a small chuckle, causing Gaara's eyebrows to rise.
"What are you laughing about?" asked Gaara angrily, turning his head slightly back.
"Nothing," replied Naruto nonchalantly.
Tired of being held back, Gaara growled. He also noticed the attention they were getting from the vampires of this room. This was not good. Gaara disliked this attention.
"Let go, Naruto. I won't do anything," replied Gaara, irritated.
Naruto released his friend and Gaara remained composed to Naruto's complete relief. Gaara stretched his arms before him. He ignored the looks the vampires continued to give him.
Naruto scratched the back of his head. So no one know cares how arrogant and stuck-up Sasuke used to be? Thought Naruto, Or rather, he still is. "No one here won't do a damn thing about Sasuke."
Fixing his tie, Gaara eyed the entrance of the party. He was still waiting for Hinata to appear through those doors. "What can we do?"
"Damn it all. Why the hell would he take Hinata?" questioned Naruto, tilting his head. He turned his attention to the pink-haired beauty. Sakura had been standing five feet away from them, looking worried also," Miss Sakura, do you know why?"
The whole time Sakura bit her lip in disbelief. After being asked the question, she directed her attention to the blonde man. She quickly changed her ill attitude into one of composure by releasing a smile," I don't think we need to worry."
"What?!" exclaimed Naruto outrageously, though he kept his voice to a minimum low. It would be rude to blatantly yell out his distaste of Lord Uchiha's behavior. For God's sake, your fiancé just ran off with my friend's girl!
Gaara watched Sakura. She looked indeed composed, but he saw the edges of her mouth tighten.
"B-but," began Naruto, "Why?"
Sakura chuckled. She turned her attention to Gaara," I'm sorry, but I saw you talking to Hinata earlier. How do you know her?"
Gaara cleared his throat before answering," She lives with me." His eyes narrowed. This female is angry even though she smiles.
"Really?" asked Sakura in surprise. Her voice lowered in speculation," Are you two lovers?"
Gaara's eyes twitched as he became uncomfortable with the question," No." His reply was blunt and sharp. Whoever this female was, she was indeed nosy. His voiced turned harsh. "How do you know Hinata?"
Sakura chuckled," Hinata used to live with Lord Uchiha and me before-"Sakura covered her mouth pretending to hide her shock," Oops. I should not speak any more. Please excuse me. I have to tend to my other guests also. Do enjoy the party." She bowed halfway to Naruto and Gaara before walking away in poise.
Immediately, Sakura's composed face disappeared. She pursed her lips as her expression turned angry. Idiots…how can you speak to me so rudely huh? I hope you live with that suspicion. After all, if Hinata really is loyal to Sasuke, she would never tell you of her relation to him.
Sakura had been shocked to see Hinata enter the engagement party. Yet, it had been easy fooling the petty girl with Sakura's concern. But once Sasuke dragged her away, Sakura felt rage boil within her body. How dare he embarrass her in front of so many vampires. By now, Hinata must have discovered Sasuke was not her biological brother.
Hinata must be feeling betrayed by us, thought Sakura delightfully. Most likely, Hinata would want to sever communication with Sasuke. After all, how could she love Lord Uchiha after what we've done?
Flying solo as she greeted the guests, she noticed Kabuto watching her from the stage. Sakura smiled and he smiled back at her.
Kabuto must have noticed Hinata enter the room, too, she thought. The two would need to talk about this issue.
Naruto continued to ogle after Sakura's cool demeanor. Gaara noticed his friend's lustful gaze and grabbed Naruto's shoulder to turn him around.
"Keep looking at her like that and you'll get pummeled by the Uchiha," muttered Gaara warningly. His friend had no boundaries when it came to female vampires. Gaara could not help but be reminded of himself. His eyes looked around at the various female vampires—many he dated and shared his bed. They all gave him glances, many hateful or still interested. Gaara turned away from them.
"Tch. I could say the same to you by the way your ex-girlfriends are looking at ya," replied Naruto sarcastically. He gave a small wave to several of the female vampires sitting and standing across the large room. He made small remarks to Gaara while some of the females intensified their glares or even waved back.
"Tch, Baka," Gaara muttered, releasing his hold on a laughing Naruto.
Gaara's eyes scanned the room for any sign of Hinata and finally caught sight of Hinata standing by the entrance. Her face seemed perfectly fine without any worry as she also scanned the room. The Uchiha was not with her; relief flooded into Gaara as he walked over to her.
But someone had already gotten to her.
Gaara stopped. His body grew cold and his face loss all emotion of relief. A group had started to form around Hinata. Vampires from children to adults surrounded her. But the figure that caught his attention to his utter hate was Lady Sayori dressed in an elegant violet kimono with white butterflies at the hem of her kimono and sleeves. Her long brown hair was in a bun and she embraced Hinata.
Gaara grit his teeth.
The return of music lessened Hinata's worries. She entered the party and everything inside looked the same as before. No one seemed curious about her return. Several vampires turned to look at her, but with Sasuke's absence, they lost immediate interest.
Hinata sighed in relief as she searched for Gaara. She was going to fib something for him to believe she could not stay here any longer. Rude as it was, Hinata did not feel comfortable being at the party any longer. By the Council's orders, she was not to have any contact with Sasuke. Thus, if the Council were here, they would be very angry.
"Hinata-neesan!"
Hinata's eyes widened as she felt the embrace of a boy. Her eyes looked down and her face softened in delight.
"Katsuya!" she exclaimed and her arms reached down to embrace him.
"Hinata-san!" exclaimed other voices.
Hinata looked up and saw several of the children from Lady Sayori's boardinghouse approach her.
"Minami! Shin! Tetsuya! Chisato!" exclaimed Hinata, calling out their names as they each took a turn to hug her. This time, as the light tears poured out from Hinata's eyes, she was overjoyed. An ache in her heart after seeing them again returned. "How are all of you?"
"Great!"
"You look beautiful, Hinata-san!"
"I never expected you to look stylish!"
"Momma wouldn't let me wear a dress like yours!"
Hinata blushed. Yet she continued to smile in front of the children. They had all grown so well and looked handsomely and beautifully wonderful.
"Hinata-san, it is a pleasure to see you again."
Hinata's eyes rose and immediately the children separated from her. Staring at the regal vampire before her, Hinata bowed to Lady Sayori.
"My lady," said Hinata politely," I am pleased to see you again." Standing straight again, Hinata smiled. Memories of her good stay at the boardinghouse filled her mind. Even though things had never been perfectly happy at the boardinghouse, Hinata realized how much she missed the simple life she had lived with these vampires.
Lady Sayori walked to Hinata, absorbing the stares of many of the vampires in the room who had stopped what they were doing to look at the interesting scene.
Lady Sayori opened her arms wide and embraced Hinata. Stunned, Hinata remained stationary. But Lady Sayori's embrace caused unexpected emotions to arise in Hinata. It had been awhile since someone had comforted her and to receive it from her former mistress, Hinata was touched. Hinata slowly raised her arms to hug Lady Sayori. Lady Sayori was a regal vampire and never had she hugged Lady Sayori before. This was a deep honor.
"My dear, how is he treating you?" whispered Lady Sayori softly.
Hinata answered softly," Good."
Lady Sayori closed her eyes in acknowledgment," Wonderful. I knew I could trust you." She released Hinata and smiled.
Hinata's eyes roamed passed Lady Sayori and her eyes immediately widened. Behind Lady Sayori, Maki and the rest of the females stood dressed in elegant kimonos. They all smiled at her.
"Hello Hinata," replied Maki shyly.
Hinata bit her lip, unable to retain her happiness. Just when everything seemed like it would turn into disaster Hinata was quickly overwhelmed with happiness at meeting her companions again. She quickly walked over to Maki, knowing that Maki and the other caregivers were to maintain a poised and controlled manner in the presence of other vampires. Therefore, Hinata took the initiative to act first.
She hugged Maki and quickly Maki returned the hug.
"My dear friend," replied Maki softly.
Hinata smiled.
She released Maki and hugged the other female caregivers as well. They all looked the same—still beautiful and attentive to Lady Sayori and the children.
"So this is where you were, huh?" smiled Takara.
"Hinata, you look beautiful!" exclaimed Umeko, pushing up her glasses.
"I think you look better in a kimono," remarked Izumi brazenly.
Hinata chuckled as Natsuko nudged Izumi warningly. She thanked her companions kindly. Lady Sayori excused herself to chat with the other vampires in the room. The caregivers continued to ask Hinata questions. However, Hinata avoided the ones asking why she had come to Tokyo. Hinata worried it would make the atmosphere awkward.
The children soon gathered around Hinata again—asking her about how life was in Tokyo. To ease their constant questions, Hinata directed everyone to a table where they could all chat. As Hinata related her experience with the snow that had appeared in Tokyo a few weeks ago, many grew jealous. This year, Lady Sayori had been unable to have them play in the snow because of the recent blizzards near the boardinghouse.
As Hinata listened to the children's stories, she realized Maki and the caregivers became silent. They continued to stand during the conversation. Relieved from her duties as a caregiver, Hinata suddenly realized the high restrictions placed upon Lady Sayori's caregivers. No one spoke very much and remained affixed on the children's welfare. Hinata felt uncomfortable to continue easily in her conversation with the children. She wished Maki and the others were allowed to chat with them casually together.
"Oh look, it's him!" squealed Izumi suddenly which surprised Hinata. Knowing Izumi, Izumi only reacted when there was a male vampire nearby.
But as she turned to look at whom Izumi pointed at, Hinata's surprise disappeared. Her head turned back to Maki and the female caregivers. Each of them were blushing as they remained transfixed at the sight of Uchiha Sasuke entering the party.
"Congratulations, Lord Uchiha!" the caregivers suddenly chimed in together excitedly. They bowed together like a horde of fan girls. Furthermore Hinata stood up with the children and bowed to Sasuke. No one seemed to notice Hinata's unease.
Sasuke stopped and turned to his right to stare at the group of children and females. He bowed his head to them. His eyes lingered on Hinata longer than the rest.
"Thank you," he replied politely. "Please enjoy tonight." And he walked away. Sasuke surmised them to be with Lady Sayori by the way the female caregivers were dressed in kimonos and the large number of children present.
As he continued toward Sakura who was chatting with a group of male vampires, his mind clicked at the image he saw of Hinata sitting with them. He stopped in his tracks as he relayed the image he had just witnessed.
Had Hinata been serving under Lady Sayori this whole time? That cannot be, thought Sasuke. It did not make sense. He had seen Lady Sayori numerous times in the last twenty-five years, but never had she mentioned Hinata. Why hide it if she knew his feelings for Hinata?
"Uchiha-sama, your future bride is very beautiful." Lady Sayori's comment surprised Sasuke, but he hid his surprise under a cold expression. Sasuke turned to his right and found Lady Sayori smiling up at him.
In a polite gesture, Sasuke took Lady Sayori's hand and pressed his lips to it. He bowed to her to show his deep respect.
"Lady Sayori, thank you for coming. It is not very often that I see your children or your caregivers together with you," he replied coldly. He purposefully ignored her earlier comment and released her hand.
"I believe when the event is important, my children should come and witness the spectacle when they can. Uchiha-sama is announcing his engagement officially tonight—our greatest protector yet," she said with elegance. "Uchiha-sama does not know how happy I am."
Sasuke did not return a smile. He sensed something different about her.
He looked up and saw several vampires staring at them both. Lady Sayori was still an active vampire, though she did not wield the strong influence as a council member. The vampires were curious to hear the conversation.
"I'm afraid many are becoming nosier about my business."
Lady Sayori chuckled melodically," I should expect so and you've mastered the art of 'whispering.' Uchiha-sama is going to change history. The Uchiha Clan will be rebuilt. Everyone is curious as to how the community will change. A new generation of Uchihas will be born; all of whom will inherit your grace, intelligence, and undoubtedly your fiance's beauty."
"Are you insulting me?"
"No, not at all," replied a stunned Lady Sayori.
"Why did you take in Hinata?" asked Sasuke. "And never once told me?"
Lady Sayori returned her familiar smile; her face not at all affected by the direct question," Uchiha-sama knows better than to break the rules. It is forbidden for you to meet her at any leisurely request. Why should she be of Uchiha-sama's concern? Uchiha-sama left her. Is it really right for me to tell you how happy Hinata-san was at the prospect of seeing her older brother when I told her to return to Tokyo? She tried to conceal it, but you know how perceptive we older vampires can be."
"Why did you not say anything?" asked Sasuke edgily. "You are not the type to hold onto rules forever, my lady."
"Hinata-san serves my son Gaara now. Not Uchiha-sama anymore," answered Lady Sayori kindly. "And she does a very good job. I have taken a glance at my son and he seems changed."
Sasuke narrowed his eyes," I never knew Lady Sayori to be so vindictive." How…how could she smile so deceivingly in front of him? He could see the anger and hatred sewn into her eyes.
"I love my family, Uchiha-sama. Without them, I will die. I am sure Uchiha-sama can relate to this and understand me," she spoke gently. "So please…love your fiancé…and know that family is the most precious thing to anyone. Without it, we lose the most truly important thing in our life; an honorable reason to live for."
Sasuke watched as Lady Sayori bowed to him one more time and walked away. His eyes stared at her back. Lady Sayori's words had been thoughtful, much too thoughtful. He turned his attention back on Hinata who continued to smile with the vampires around her.
Were you really happy Hinata? Without me, did you feel happier than you had ever felt before?
This was the first time he had seen so many vampires around Hinata—caring for her and smiling with her.
He was intolerable of the joy she gained through others. He believed Hinata could never be happy in this world unless he was there to guide her. He had never felt as jealous as when it involved Hinata; that he could not make her feel safe in his arms and make her smile all the time. All he could give her were tears and pain.
Did he really enjoy it when she suffered because of him or was that his own excuse to make her feel an emotion towards him? Was it because he knew Hinata could never truly be happy with him?
Sasuke turned his back from the scene he had observed guardedly. He smirked—a tactic to cover his pain. He still held no regrets. The day he killed Hinata's parents and sister was a day he felt his revenge come alive. And the promise he made to himself—to finish what he started—would leech off him for eternity.
Even though we are forced apart from each other, we have our memories of the beach together.
"Lord Uchiha," called Sakura, walking up to him.
Breaking out of his thoughts, Sasuke turned to Sakura. Automatically the edges of his lips rose a bit—fooling him and the rest of the vampires here in this room of his inner torment.
Sasuke held out his hand to her.
Sakura grabbed his hand and he pulled her into an embrace. Surprised, she hugged him back.
"Were you lonely?" Sasuke whispered darkly.
"What? You're talking too low, Lord Uchiha," whispered back Sakura. Her face blushing as she rested her head on his shoulder.
"I'm sorry," he said again, a bit louder for her to hear.
Sakura smiled and pressed her face in his shoulder, taking in his scent, as she shook her head," No. I'm sorry. Besides, you've never apologized before."
Sasuke smirked. It was easy to hide his feelings.
"Let's get started."
Sakura nodded and pulled away from Sasuke. Holding his hand, the engaged couple walked toward the stage to begin the procession.
"Would you like a drink before we begin?" asked a waiter, holding a tray of glasses with red liquid inside.
"What's that?" asked Kira, the young vampire boy.
"Blood."
"Oh, I want some!" exclaimed the children.
The waiter handed each one a glass as they drank its content.
Hinata watched as Katsuya, who sat beside her, looked at his glass.
Hinata peered over him and thinly smiled," What's wrong, Katsuya?"
"I…I'm still not used to it like the others," replied Katsuya. His voice low. He turned his face away from Hinata. "Hinata-neesan probably thinks I'm a coward."
Hinata shook her head," Never. You don't have to drink it."
Katsuya nodded, pushing the glass aside.
"Thank you everyone. As a member of the Vampire Protection Unit, it is my honor to be MCing tonight's special event. My name is Yakushi Kabuto and I am deeply happy for my lord, Uchiha Sasuke, who has chosen a beautiful bride-to-be. Let's give a hand to this wonderful couple."
Everyone clapped their hands.
"Now, as you know, we have an ensemble of events tonight. The Council will be joining us later. Speeches will be given and eating and dancing are going to occur. Let us enjoy ourselves tonight, shall we?"
Everyone applauded.
Hinata's eyes widened. The Council was coming? Her eyes quickly looked around for Gaara. If the children and caregivers saw her with him, they would be suspicious and might even despise Lady Sayori. Her snow-colored eyes continued for Gaara anxiously as Kabuto continued to speak.
"Lord Uchiha and his fiancé wish to say a few words."
The crowd applauded along with Hinata who absentmindedly followed. Her head turned left and right searching for him. And when she was about to give up, she suddenly felt his intense gaze on her. Gaara sat far off from her along with Naruto and three other females.
Hinata gulped. He was staring at her with those intense icy blue eyes. He did not look angry, which relieved Hinata immensely. And his eyes did not look troubled either, so he was not bothered by her sitting with the children and Lady Sayori's caregivers. Gaara looked away from Hinata, shifting his attention to Kabuto. Hinata looked up and saw Sasuke approach the microphone stand.
"Thank you, everyone, for coming."
His voice paused as applaud erupted.
His eyes scanned the area as he continued his speech.
"Many of you I know and remember," continued Sasuke; these were the familiar faces of mourning vampires he had visited. Vampires who had lost their dear ones. "For your undying support, please watch over us."
Know? Remember? Hinata wondered curiously. As she looked around the room, everyone was smiling at him—rejoicing at his speech: His vow to protect all vampires. Yet, Hinata detected immense loneliness in his words.
To Hinata, his words meant giving up his life for the sake of them all. It meant sacrificing his enjoyment for the sake that those around him would live meaningfully and peacefully. It was these words that caused everyone invited tonight to believe in Sasuke, the leader of the VPU. A unit Hinata had just recently come to know.
This is the Onii-san I rarely saw home because he worked endlessly in tire. The Onii-san I…Hinata lowered her head, respect and love. She had not forgotten what she told herself months ago.
If you smile more like that because I am gone, then I will forget what you threw away.
But after tonight's 'reunion' with Sasuke, her heart fell deeper in ache and longing. This was not the results she had wanted. Even though she was hurt, it was not because Sasuke had abandoned her—that matter was a fact she had come to already accept.
Instead, the source of her agony now laid in the lies regarding her ties to Sasuke, confirming how little she had come to know about Sasuke. How easily she had lived in his care and ignored the little signs he was suffering from something he could not tell her.
Tonight, a sense of true sadness had been given to her. The only family she knew had been a sham. But tonight was not about her. Tonight was Sasuke's and Sakura's night. The happy, joyous celebration of their engagement.
Even in the beginning of Hinata's awakening, she had a strong feeling Sakura was an important figure in Sasuke's life. There was no other explanation to account for Sakura's settlement in the Uchiha mansion.
"Good evening, everyone, my name is Haruno Sakura. I am delighted to see many vampires here tonight. I would like to extend my gratitude to the Council who accepted me as a fledgling. As Lord Uchiha's bride-to-be I will cherish our memories together. Please support us in the future."
Hinata applauded with everyone.
"If you protect your family, Hinata, than I will protect my love for Master Uchiha."
Yes, that's right, thought Hinata as she watched Sakura wrap her arms around Sasuke's. A smile graced Sakura's pretty face. There was pure bliss in her expression. As Hinata switched her attention to Sasuke, she could see his expression remain stagnantly the same. However, as Hinata lowered her gaze to the engaged couple's connected arms, she could feel a sense of matrimony already arising within the two vampires. If I protect my family, Sakura will protect Onii-san. She'll give him what he needs.
Her eyes watched as Kabuto took the lead and encouraged the engaged couple to kiss. Hinata could hear the fusses of the children around her. She could hear Maki and the rest of the females around her squeal in delight. Yet, Hinata watched in silence.
The couple closed their eyes and moved their faces close to each other. The room grew quiet as the two shared their first kiss in front of a large crowd.
I hate you, Onii-san, for hiding the truth from me. So smile, Onii-san. Smile so I can forget.
"You're leaving?" asked Naruto, eating his plate of spaghetti. An hour had passed and food was being delivered by the waiters and waitresses hired tonight. Naruto had taken his plate eagerly and began eating diligently. Dancing was encouraged on the dance floor next to the stage and many vampires had already begun to ask for a partner to dance.
Gaara stood up, leaving his empty plate beside Naruto.
"The reason I came late was because of tonight's security for the engagement party," said Gaara quietly. It had been an awkward table with intense flirtations from the three females. Naruto had responded back with crude jokes and innuendos during their eating. Gaara had strong inclinations to vomit his food at the sight of his ghastly friend as he remained silent. "Half of the unit have been ordered to guard the building. I've been ordered to do so." The other half of the VWU retained regular patrol around Japan along with half of the VPU patrolling Japan to resume the usual duties as well.
Several of the VWU members got up from their seats to leave. They had been ordered to patrol the area where the building stood and carefully watch for any hunters or mischievous vampires thwarting to wreck the party. Under the Council's demands, security was to be extra tight outside. No one was to be allowed inside the building without an invitation.
Before leaving, Gaara turned to Naruto," Watch over Hinata." Gaara decided not to inform Hinata. She was too busy enjoying her time with 'the others.'
Naruto nodded," Hai, Hai."
"Where are you going, Gaara-sama?" asked one of the female vampires, looking up from her meal. "Can we come?"
Gaara ignored them and walked off.
"He's so rude!"
"No ladies, he's taken," answered Naruto, with his mouth slightly full," See her? She's his mate!" His hand pointed to Hinata sitting with a bunch of kids and females.
The three females turned their heads," Eh? Her?" They each turned to Naruto—looked at the blonde's state, and sighed in disgust.
"We're leaving!" they sulked simultaneously.
"What? C'mon, I don't mind having you all to myself!" exclaimed Naruto, dropping his fork. But the three females stalked off.
Sighing, Naruto shoved his plate away.
"Damn," he muttered. Now he was alone.
"Have some decent manners!" snapped Ino, throwing a napkin at Naruto's face.
A smile formed on Naruto's lips. "Hey, you." He took the napkin away from his face and wiped his mouth.
Ino plopped a seat next to him. Crossing her arms, she glared at him," I pity you. That's why I'm here."
Naruto chuckled," Sure."
Ino raised an eyebrow," If you're so worried, why don't you join the VWU again, Naruto?" She could tell from his expression that he was worried.
Naruto wiped his mouth and held onto the napkin tightly.
"I don't want to," he replied sharply, his eyes focused on his plate.
Ino became silent, but her eyes observed the table on the stage where Lord Uchiha sat with his fiancé Sakura.
"Look, Naruto."
Naruto glanced up at Ino to see her concerned expression. Naruto followed her stare and saw Uchiha Sasuke rise from his seat. He was talking to the silver-haired man named Kabuto. Naruto raised his eyebrow at seeing Kabuto. It had been years since he had seen him and Naruto still did not trust the silver-haired vampire. After a minute, Kabuto approached the microphone stand.
"Excuse me, everyone. To our dismay, the Council will not be able to appear tonight. However, they send their best wishes to Lord Uchiha and Lady Sakura," exclaimed Kabuto cheerfully.
"Uh-oh," remarked Ino worriedly. Getting up from her seat, her eyes grew more concerned.
Naruto stood up from his seat also.
"Damn," Naruto muttered," Something's gone wrong."
Immediately, looking around, he could see the atmosphere of the party change. Everyone's faces were confused, but some were more frightened then others. Many were already starting to get up and leave.
"What's going on, Naruto? It does not make sense for the Council to cancel so suddenly," said Ino, her voice becoming nervous. "After all, didn't they help plan this?" Everyone knew how important Lord Uchiha was to the Council.
"Shit, Ino, get out of here," said Naruto hurriedly. He turned his attention to Ino and quickly grabbed her shoulders," You have to leave with Hinata, got it?"
Ino's face grew worried," But the others…"
"I could just be making a mistake," spoke Naruto," and I could be saying a stupid thing right now, but I have a bad feeling. Do you understand Ino? You need to get away with Hinata!"
Ino bit her lip. She never saw Naruto this worried very often. From all her years of knowing him, she knew Naruto was a skilled vampire. He was a great fighter in the VWU, even considered to be a top contender to take the chief position after White Fang. But when he suddenly left, it angered the Council along with everyone else in the VWU. Ino remembered that day—when she had broken up with him and tried to get Gaara back as her boyfriend.
"How about you?" asked Ino.
Naruto smirked," Me? Are you worried 'bout me, Ino?"
Ino blushed. "You don't call me Ino-chan, anymore."
Naruto laughed, his hands tightening around Ino's shoulders. "That's because you're not like the others."
Ino bit her lip," You're going to stay and help even though the Council disapproves of you."
Naruto nodded," You know me, Ino."
Ino nodded," I'll take Hinata with me."
Naruto watched as Ino headed over to Hinata. The two were talking now. Quickly and calmly as possible, Naruto headed toward the stage.
He needed to speak with Sasuke.
"Is something wrong?" asked Sakura, getting up from her seat. Sasuke had not touched his plate nor drank the glasses of blood.
Sasuke was talking to Kabuto again and some of the vampires from the VPU had arrived as well.
"We discovered the first bodies hidden in the bushes 75 kilometers from here."
"So far, the bodies we've discovered in the surrounding area have been twenty. All were vampires."
"But we suspect there could be many more."
"Did you identify them?" asked Sasuke, his eyes wary.
"No. They had no identification on them."
"My lord, I request that everyone evacuate the building," said Kabuto. "Even the Council has canceled their plan to come."
Sasuke looked at his guests intently. They all seemed to have worried expressions. Yet, as some were leaving, others continued to remain seated and talk to each other.
"What else?" asked Sasuke, turning back to his subordinates.
"We believe Hyuga hunters may be behind this. Each body displayed several deep impacts to their limbs."
Sasuke's eyes widened. The Hyuga Gentle Fist technique.
Sakura walked over to join in the conversation.
"Hyuga?" asked a male voice.
The group turned their head towards Naruto, standing near them with a confused expression.
"Naruto…" growled Sasuke. "This is none of your business."
"It is, especially since we used to train together under Kakashi-sensei," remarked Naruto with a bothered expression. "Now tell me what Hyugas have to do with this." Unafraid, he stepped closer into the circle. Naruto knew he was stronger than most vampires on the VWU and VPU. And Sasuke knew it, too.
"Leave, that's all I need you to do," said Sasuke harshly. The blonde dobe annoyed him. Naruto was the only peer who had ever defeated Sasuke in a dual. It lasted several days, and in the end, it was Naruto's damn persistence that gave him victory over Sasuke.
"Yeah right, Sasuke. You need me if things go terribly wrong," spoke Naruto," I don't care about the Council. I can take any punishment they give. Unlike you, I don't have my reputation to uphold."
Sasuke smirked with revulsion," Annoying bastard."
"You idiot, show some manners!" snapped Sakura.
"Are we forgetting about the important issue at hand?" asked Kabuto curiously. Turning to Sasuke," Naruto is right, my lord. We may need his help if the Hyugas are planning an all out attack on this building."
Sasuke pondered for a solution quietly. The tight security tonight from half of his VPU and VWU was meant to prevent this. Yet, it did not surprise Sasuke to suspect Hyuga hunters behind the assault.
"Shinta, gather fifteen others from our forces and have them start evacuating the guests. I will stake out the building with the others. We must make sure the halls are safe to guide our guests," remarked Sasuke. His eyes intently observed the room for any oddities. Even though twenty bodies had been found, there had been no attack from the Hyugas so far. The circumstances brewed suspicion and caution.
"Lord Uchiha, what do I do?" asked Sakura worriedly. Her eyes looked up at Sasuke, clinging to his tuxedo tightly.
"Kabuto will escort you. Leave," ordered Sasuke, looking down at Sakura.
Sakura nodded, her face lowered. "You must come back."
Sasuke raised a hand to touch Sakura's shoulder; however, unable to assure her, he returned his hand to his side, forming it into a fist.
"Go," Sasuke ordered once again to the female he would be pledging his devotion to in the future.
Sakura left with Kabuto following after her.
"Geez, you could at least kiss her goodbye," remarked Naruto, raising an eyeborw. The whole scene looked awkward.
Sasuke glared at Naruto," Shut up." He quickly walked to the microphone," Everyone, evacuate. My subordinates will be arriving shortly to lead you out of the building."
By now the calm setting had turned fervent. Vampires around were standing up and preparing to leave.
"Let's go," ordered Sasuke, heading in the direction Sakura and Kabuto had taken that was a back entrance of the party.
"Alright!" exclaimed Naruto, pushing up the sleeves of his tuxedo. "It's been awhile since I've put myself in a fight."
"Tch," smirked Sasuke.
But it was the scream that caused their confidence to end. Halting in their tracks, Naruto and Sasuke turned to the area of the guests. Immediately, three vampires had been decapitated. Blood gushed out from their bodies.
"What the hell?" hissed Naruto. "Don't tell me-"
"They're in here; somewhere," muttered Sasuke cautiously. His eyes scanned the areas and suddenly he saw them. All of them now had taken off their waiter guises. The wigs, the eye contacts, and the clothes came off, as Hyuga hunters in their full form and glory began slaughtering as many vampires they could within sight.
They killed the hired waiters and waitresses, thought Sasuke, fuming. The scent from the previous owners of the clothes hid the Hyuga scent well since the room was also packed with vampire guests. It was an excellent disguise devised. Otherwise, Sasuke knew he would have smelled the Hyugas easily.
Tonight, there had been seventy-five waiters servicing to the needs of all the vampires. Now, they were murderous Hyuga hunters.
Sasuke and Naruto rushed over to the helpless guests. Dodging the Hyugas' attacks as they fought to reach for the guests.
Suffering any damage from the Hyuga Gentle Fist technique rendered a decrease in mobility and recovery. They packed immense power enough to match any vampire, and with superhuman lethal speed that was formidable even to Sasuke. He knew how much it stung and deadly they could be.
Sasuke tactfully dodged the first punches made to him in this hand-to-hand combat, but sweat poured from his face as their quick punches soon doubled. Copying the Hyuga techniques he observed, he fought back back with their own weapon. Sasuke's genetic eye technique called the Sharingan allowed him to predict and track the movement of his opponents. Injuring several already, Sasuke readied to kill anyone in his way.
Presently, he and Naruto were clearly outnumbered. The screams of his guests continued to echo rampant in the room; throwing off some of his focus. He was stuck between two dilemmas—kill Hyugas or take as many guests out of an unprotected entrance. The entrance led to the halls, but Sasuke had no idea whether more Hyugas were waiting out there.
In a matter of minutes, the room had become a bloodbath. Sasuke shouted angrily as he broke a Hyuga's arm. Screams from the guests continued to grow as Sasuke and Naruto also tried to tackle any Hyuga trying to kill the guests.
Suddenly the fifteen VPU members he had ordered Shinta to send arrived. Now the main priority would be to get the surviving guests out.
As Sasuke continued to fight, he looked around for survivors. Vampire bodies piled the ground.
"Death to the Uchiha!" shouted the Hyugas as more screams resonated within the room.
Sasuke equaled their main target and it was his duty to protect the vampires at the cost of his own life. Sasuke continued to fight, but the troubled thoughts of innocent vampires who had died already because of him began to conflict his mind. Suddenly, the group of Hunters around him had increased tenfold.
Hinata, where are you?
Sasuke and his subordinates in this room were still outnumbered. Sasuke had the opportunity to still flee if he took the back entrance, but that direction would lead to Sakura's whereabouts and he would abandon his guests.
Sasuke raised his arms in front of him and continued to fight.
"Ino-san, where are we going?" asked Hinata, panting as they continued down the flight of stairs.
They were running down the halls. It had been quiet for awhile as they walked swiftly down the stairs. Ino rejected taking the elevator for precautionary reasons to Hinata's curiosity. But when screams from the floors above erupted, Ino's sudden burst into a sprint sent a shiver down Hinata's back.
"Shit shit shit shit," hissed Ino worriedly as sweat trickled down her face. "Running in heels suck!"
Hinata cried out," W-wait!!"
Ino was shocked by the surprising force Hinata had. In a jolt, Ino felt as if she had pulled a rock and fell flat on the floor. Still holding onto Hinata's hand, Ino looked up to see a sweaty Hinata looking down at her.
"Please… tell me what is going on, Ino-san," said Hinata urgently. "There are vampires still up there."
More screams were heard as it echoed down the flight of stairs the two had just climbed.
Ino shivered as she heard the screams. She was starting to hyperventilate.
"Hinata-san, I don't know. But under Naruto's orders we need to leave!" said Ino drastically as she pulled herself up. "Or we'll be screaming like the others up there!"
Hinata's eyes grew weak," What?" Turning her head back, the screams continued to echo. "Is it…Hyuga vampire hunters?"
"I think so," replied Ino warily. "No! Wait, Hinata! Come back!"
But it was too late. Hinata had already disappeared, so fast that it took Ino by surprise. Looking down at Hinata's black heels, Ino's body shook. She's going back…to face the hunters…doesn't she know that they are formidable creatures? You can possibly die!
Hinata would be up there again, but this time the party would not look so elegant anymore. Blood was sure to cake the walls and ground. Death was imminent.
Ino shook her head, trying to wipe the sweat that continued to pour down her face.
I need to tell Gaara! She disappeared and left her shoes with Hinata's.
Sasuke could feel the intense gazes of the Hyugas with their masks on. They were attacking him with deep force and power. However, he easily evaded them. Some were advanced but few in this room had been able to master the Byakugan eyesight that only a few in the clan had been able to harness in Sasuke's lifetime. He was affected by their ability to immobilize him, but they were not strong enough to hold him down for long.
"You bastards! It's time to die!" shouted Naruto, fighting back. Ripping, and tearing with all the goriness of battle and war, Naruto charged at his opponents with angry speed. They're after you, Sasuke, and killing innocent vampires to distract the Vampire Protection Unit's attention!
Sasuke took small glances at Naruto while fighting, remembering how uncontrollable Naruto had been as a trainee. While Naruto fought with spirit, Sasuke fought with intelligence and precision. The both of them had been widely praised for their skills.
Reinforcements of forty more VPU members had arrived and now it was an all out battle. In these kind of situations, Sasuke's subordinates knew the protocol. Everyone's main duty was to safeguard the vampire civilians: The guests needed to exit the room.
This time, Sasuke and Naruto fought with stronger morale at the number of faces who had come to help. A group of the VPU subordinates stationed themselves at the entrance, fighting back any hunters trying to follow after the guests. So far, the reinforcements have shouted aloud no Hyugas in the halls.
Sasuke was relieved; the tight security outside had been successful in not allowing any hunters to enter. The remaining half of his VPU subordinates and the VWU must be fighting a tough battle outside as well.
A few guests still remained, cornered by Hyuga hunters. Sasuke was one of many who were in the middle of those corners trying to protect the remaining guests. Of all the vampires for him to protect, a child had to be stuck in this bloody mess. Irritated, Sasuke grabbed the kid's collar and tried to get past the Hyuga hunters.
However, he fell back each time he was hit with the gentle fist. Blood squirted out of his mouth as he continued to break through the Hyuga crowd growing in numbers around him. They never seemed to lessen as their desire to kill him rose with every Hyuga he had been able to kill tonight. Sasuke raised his arms to block their attacks and even jumped in the air to escape their growing numbers around him.
"Bastards!" shouted Naruto, pulling out a Hyuga hunter from the crowd to thrash. Other VPU subordinates were doing the same but each hunter was as lethal and vigor at fighting back.
"Remember me, Uchiha scum?" shouted a female voice.
Sasuke landed back on the ground with the wailing and half-injured vampire child at his grip. He looked at the person with the familiar voice: The female vampire hunter he had fought a month ago—the one he had been unable to kill because of the images of Hinata.
"Woman," he spoke as he charged at her. "I should have killed you."
She dodged his attack and aimed to plunge him with her gentle fist.
Sasuke evaded it barely. With his hold on the kid, he was not at his usual agility.
"Let the boy go and then you'll be able to kill me," she spoke tauntingly. There was so much blood in here—the blood of vampires was like acid to her senses. "Tell us where your fiancé is!"
Sasuke growled as he released the boy from his grip in order to fight back. One strike to the heart and the bitch would die. Sasuke aimed his arm up to hit her.
But his body froze.
Shocked, Sasuke was unable to move. His eyes trained on the Hyuga hunter but she was just as stunned as she found herself immobile. Sasuke looked beyond the female hunter and saw a surprising figure by the bloodied entrance.
Hinata stood by the entrance staring at Sasuke with suppressed horror.
"Wha-" Hinata began, but as she lowered her eyes to the injured vampire child on the ground behind Sasuke, she quickly shut her mouth.
Sasuke felt time had stopped as he continued to remain immobile. It was until he heard Hinata grab onto Katsuya that he could move again and so could the female hunter who now stood stunned.
The both of them had witnessed and the endured the amazing feat of a woman who had the abilities of a Hyuga but moved to the boy behind Lord Uchiha like a vampire.
"Hinata!" shouted Naruto worriedly," Get out of here!" He tried to reach for her, but the Hyuga hunter he had been fighting struck back with a punch. Naruto flew several feet away as he clutched his stomach.
"Katsuya, are you okay?" whispered Hinata anxiously. Her eyes looked around and saw Naruto yards away from her, struggling to get up," Naruto-kun!"
Sasuke felt his limbs return to normal and quickly reverted into a combat stance.
"A Hyuga is a vampire?" questioned the female hunter appallingly. And she bears the name, Hinata, like Father had spoken. Shocked, she ordered out loud," Kill her!!!"
Hinata's eyes widened as she heard the blood-curdling words. Grabbing onto Katsuya, Hinata knew she had to get him to safety. The fighting continued as Hinata had seen earlier, but now everyone dressed in dark suits with white eyes were now hammering to aim their fists at her.
Hinata winced as she felt a punch to her stomach. Stumbling, she fell to the floor on top of Katsuya.
"Hinata-neesan!" shouted Katsuya, tears filling his eyes.
A yell erupted from behind her, as Sasuke attacked the male Hyuga hunter who had struck Hinata.
Hinata bit her lip as she got on her knees and stood up. Pressing Katsuya close to her body, she took steps forward. She looked to her right as a hand reached for Katsuya's back. Quickly turning around, she took the hit and fell to the ground once again over Katsuya. Blood squirted out of her mouth as she tried to maintain her strength to leave the room.
"No!" shouted Katsuya angrily, struggling to rid himself from Hinata. She would suffer more if she held him. He would only slow her down.
"Stay still," ordered Hinata weakly. Her mind growing weak. The pain traveled down her limbs—feeling her body become more paralyzed by the numerous punches to her body.
As Sasuke gazed around, he noticed the relentless spirit of the Hyugas charging at him and Hinata—now they were also following orders from the female hunter to head towards Hinata as well. Even as their limbs broke or their legs became weak, they were struggling to get to her. Hinata never had the experience of training to recover her body from the force of the gentle fist. She was weak and could easily die with more injuries to her body.
Sasuke's fear had come true. Once Hinata revealed her ability as a Hyuga to command the power of immobility upon her opponents the hatred of the Hyugas unleashed onto her. Any Hyuga survivors tonight in this room could spread the startling message and endanger Hinata. Hinata had never even studied the Byakugan yet commanded this hidden ability within her like a spark. Was it the vampire blood flowing through her veins that had triggered it easily within her?
Even worse, his subordinates were relentlessly sending the guests out through the entrance. Unconcerned for Hinata's welfare. His subordinates knew protocol was to get the guests out first. As they escaped through the entrance Sasuke could do nothing to stop them. From there, his subordinates could fight from the outside and flee easily if necessary. It was safer than being caged up here.
His subordinates were shouting.
"The VWU are dealing with Hyugas outside too!"
"No one can get in to help us! We have to leave this place with the chance we got!"
If Sasuke gave them the order to protect Hinata, the Council would be suspicious. The vampire community would charge him and his subordinates with high crime.
Hinata winced as she was struck in the back, but she refused to get off of Katsuya.
He's just a child…afraid like everyone else…she told herself as she endured the pain and more blood squirted from her mouth. She was being attacked, but continued steadfast in her state to lead Katsuya away from this deplorable room.
Sasuke tried to fight off the Hyugas surrounding him to get closer to Hinata, but it proved to no avail. He had also suffered casualties. There were scrapes and bruises on his skin and the mass impact of punches to his body left sores on him. Blood gushed from his cut lips to his bruised knuckles. So many were coming at him simultaneously like they were endless dominoes.
"Hinata!" shouted Naruto desperately.
Sasuke's eyes widened as he saw Naruto make his way towards Hinata.
Hinata had become the ultimate diversion to get the remaining guests out of the room.
The remaining survivors of his team were waiting on him.
"I will go for the boy," said Sasuke, his eyes turned to his teammates. The only excuse he could use to save Hinata right now.
"We'll stay with you while the others leave!"
Sasuke nodded.
They charged at the remaining hunters.
"You can't die, Hinata-neesan!" shouted Katsuya as Hinata collapsed onto him unconsciously. His eyes widened as the female hunter who had fought Lord Uchiha appeared in the air ready to strike down and pierce Hinata in the back.
All it took was a few seconds to change their position.
Quickly, Katsuya pushed Hinata off of him. As she slid off him, Katsuya smiled dimly at what was his destined fate. His heart pounded like a drum as the female hunter shouted for Hinata to die.
He was doing something right, wasn't he? After months living as a vampire, he was using his abilities to protect someone he loved. This was the best way to die, wasn't it? Just like Father and Mother.
The female hunter was too late to stop herself from changing position. Katsuya knew she would kill him without realizing she had missed her target.
As the hand struck his chest, Katsuya lost the function of breathing. Immediately, his vision darkened and his thoughts disappeared.
Everything painful within him ended by the force of a gentle fist.
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At that moment, I felt how lonely your journey had been.
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Author's Notes: I truly do not like writing and describing fight scenes (which is probably why I prefer Alternate Universe) because I am horrible at it. But for this story, it seems necessary to have them because of the position Sasuke and Gaara hold. Without it, I think the story would lose the essence of struggle between the two races—the vampires and hunters. If anyone is confused, the fighting techniques used by Sasuke and the Hyugas are somewhat different in a way from the manga/anime. I purposefully did that because the manga/anime has a more ninja-esque feel to the techniques while I tried to emphasize similar characteristics associated with the Byakugan and Sharingan that would be relevant to this alternate universe. If I have displeased any readers because of this change, I am deeply sorry!
On the other note, THANK YOU to all the reviewers who recently reviewed! I was ecstatic to hear your thoughts on it and am pleased so many enjoyed chapter 13. I hope you enjoyed this chapter as well, and please feel free to give any critique you may have. I am open to all thoughts, especially to your take on the fight scene. I believe I wrote a very lame fight scene. Kishimoto illustrates wondrous fight scenes with great detail and dialogue that he ultimately puts my fight scene to shame.
And so I will do my best to improve! My love and gratitude to everyone again for reading this story this far and being so supportive! :D