Well, I have been yelled at by critics because of Chapter 10 because it was "MA". I am not mad, but I would like them to look at those that WRITE NOTHING BUT LEMONS! I do understand that it is their job to try and get rid of such things, but isn't this site's motto, "Let your imagination flow". So, I talked to the critic, which I do respect and understand it is his/her job. But take a look at the ones that write nothing but lemons. My lemon, is to help improve Firepaw's strength, which makes it part of the plot if you think about it enough. However, I assume this only happened because of the one person who complained. And I respect that you're just doing your job ZadArchie, and I appreciate you. Venomheart the Dreamer, No one else has complained about my style of writing, not to be a dick, but if you don't like it, stop reading. I write to make the majority of my fans happy. You are just one person. Venomheart the Dreamer, I assume you reported the chapter, hence why ZadArchie intervened, unless I actually caught the attention of a critic. Which would honestly be, breathtaking. I am not mad at you ZadArchie. I greatly appreciate the review. I am waiting for ZadArchie's message. Now! How about I make a short chapter and then determine who Firepaw will be spending his night with this time. That's for you Guest! As your name has not yet been dropped XD! And yes, I saw your review Shadowwing. I do read all the reviews, but I am sometimes frightened to because of all the hate I have been getting as of recently. Now, let's just have this little chat with Windclan shall we? And to the Guest and Shadowwing, reviews like yours are what give me the strength to continue on this road. I enjoy making people happy, and the fact that people actually enjoy my writing, that makes my heart swell. Now! I have rambled on long enough. Time for the chapter.
Chapter 14: The Arrangement
Onestar looked up at Bramblestar and nodded. Bramblestar raised his voice, "Now, as of recently, you have all seen what Firepaw is capable of yes?" Mews of agreement were heard and Onestar asked, "Yes, your point is what exactly, Bramblestar?" Bramblestar chuckled and mewed, "I thought you'd never ask. I am offering the same thing I offered to Riverclan. Let our clans find peace and combine into one, but still separate." A few yowls of excitement were heard and Onestar asked, "And what will the advantages be? And what is the point of us joining forces and becoming one?" Bramblestar mewed, "Well, the advantages are simple. We will be able to hunt in each other's land, there would no longer be fights over simple accidents like border crossings. The point of us joining forces is that we would be able to protect each other significantly easier from attacks. We would be able to hunt on each other's territory and well." Bramblestar whispered to Onestar quietly, "If you can't tell by now, Firepaw kind of has a thing for Heathertail, so, by becoming one, Starclan won't frown down on them." Onestar nodded his agreement and whispered back, "It's been so long since I've seen Heathertail so energetic and eager to talk to someone. So, you got yourself a truce Bramblestar, if the majority of my clan agrees." Bramblestar nodded and Onestar yowled, "WHO ALL HERE AGREES WITH CONJOIN WITH THUNDERCLAN AND RIVERCLAN?" An overwhelming roar was heard as almost every cat in Windclan yowled, "YES!" Onestar chuckled and said to Bramblestar, voice full of sarcasm, "Well, that was so close to being a no." Bramblestar purred with laughter and bowed his respect to Onestar as Onestar hollered, "THEN IT IS DECIDED! FROM THIS DAY FORTH, WE ARE ONE!" Yowls of approval ricocheted around Windclan and Bramblestar smiled.
There, nice and short. Wait, is this going to get reported as well? -_- Sorry, I am just aggravated about chapter 10. Anyways! HappytheExceed17, signing off! Until next time! Starclan watch over you all!
