Crescentclaw- Yes, it was. Brightspirit, Shiningheart and Braveheart were created in honour of Emmy Grace Cherry, a huge Warriors fan, and her parents, Jimmy and Dana Cherry, who all died when a tornado hit their house in 2008. Their cat had survived the tornado but lost the use of one of his/her legs.
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Chapter 12
NOTE! NOTE! NOTE!
Here is my next chapter, and it's really good! Sorry it took so long because it was really hard because the last chapter had a cliffhanger!
Oh yeah, I remember that. I can't say it was a very exciting one, tough.
Thank you all for reading, you are really cool except flamers. Please make a review!
"Hello!" Ancient said. "I am Ancient!" And he was Ancient!
Er... We know that..?
"Oh no, he's attacking the camp." Sparklestar said.
You're all doomed.
"Yes, and I want to kill your leader so Deathheart can become the leader of SapphireClan!" And then he killed Sparklestar! Sparklestar was dying so she called Moonshimmer.
"Moonshimmer, I'm dying." She said, croaking her last words.
You've got 8 more lives, unless the author pulled a Nightstar and refused to give her nine lives because, let me guess- Moonshimmer should be a leader?
"No, you have eight more lives left." Moonshimmer replied.
"No I don't because StarClan didn't accept me."
TOTALLY CALLED IT!
"No, you can't die because you don't have a deputy and then we wouldn't have a leader!" Moonshimmer said.
Aren't you the deputy? *checks the previous chapter* It says right here: "I choose you to be my deputy," !
"You have to become the leader, Moonshimmer! You're a good leader
Don't make me laugh.
and you need to lead SapphireClan!" Sparklestar said!
Don't be cruel; they're in enough shit already.
"But I'm not ready for another moon yet! StarClan will be mad!" Moonshimmer said.
I doubt that they'll be mad.
"But StarClan said no to me, and I became leader so it doesn't matter." The whole Clan gasped. "I couldn't become leader because I'm in love…with Chocolaterain!"
Creepy. She's like, what, 30 cat years older that him?
Ancient gasped louder than any other cat.
"But you're Chocolaterain's grandmother!"
WOAH! DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! THAT MAKES IT SUPER-DUPER-ULTRA CREEPY!
he said loudly! Many shocked SapphireClan members gasped, shocked!
"She can't be Chocolaterain's grandmother because Chocolaterain is my son and she isn't my mother!" Moonshimmer said.
She might be Vanillastar's mother, ever thought of that?
"Yes she is! Sparklestar's true identity is Daydreamheart."
WHAT THE FUCKING HELL?! DAYDRAEMHEART IS DEAD! DEAD! AND SHE AND SPARKLESTAR DON'T EVEN LOOK ALIKE!
Ancient said. "When Daydreamheart gave birth to her kits she pretended to die, and went away. Then she came back as Sparklefur, and joined the Clan again a week later!" There was a silence!
Okay. I'll just write down everything wrong with that.
1. Sparklefur was already in the Clan when Daydreamheart died, as she became deputy next morning.
2. I know these cats are idiots, but you can't just pretend to be dead! There's like, a millon things wrong with that sentence.
3. Sparklestar and Daydreamheart don't even look alike. How the hell did she change her fur color?!
4. Why would she pretend to be dead? Seriously, why?
5. Nobody noticed she smelled like Dayreamheart? ...Nobody?
6. So she just joined the Clan, became a deputy and nobody noticed a thing?
7. Even implying that any this is possible is wrong.
"She did?" Sunsetshine asked! He was amazed!
I would be too, if I were you. But mostly, I'm amazed that all of you are so awfuly stupid, yet all of you manage to find a way to end up even more stupid.
"Yes, she did and that means Chocolaterain is her grandchild and they can't be in love.
Gosh, this is exactly like FirestarXStargleam.
But they are, so she can't be leader! And now I killed her and she has no deputy
Moonshimmer's the deputy! Trust me, I'm not too happy about it either, but still!
Deathheart can be SapphireClan's leader!
Yay! Go Deathstar!
I'm going to get him." Then he ran out of the camp!
"I'm sorry I never told you." Sparklestar said to Moonshimmer.
"That's okay." Moonshimmer said back. "But don't die because then I have to be leader and I'm not ready." She said!
Gosh, will you stop with that "I'm not ready" crap?! It's starting to become really annoying!
"You have to be leader or Lilyblossom will be leader and he's really mean!" Sparklestar said, with her dying breaths.
"I'm back!" Ancient said and ran into the camp!
You were gone?
Deathheart was with him! "Now Deathheart can be the leader of SapphireClan!"
Yes! Go Deathstar! Boo, Moonshimmer!
"Yay," Deathheart said. Because he got to be the leader of SapphireClan! Then Sparklestar died because she was dying.
Thank you for pointing out the obvious.
"No!" Chocolaterain said, running into the camp and next to Sparklestar's body! Phantom was there too!
I thought it was Ancient=Phantom?
Then Chocolaterain angrily killed Ancient!
Wha..? Why? Okay, pelase don't tell me that his grandma's feelings were mutal!
"Deathheart, I love you!" Ancient said with his last words but Lilyblossom ignored him because he was really mean!
"Now I get to be the leader of SapphireClan!" Lilyblossom said! "Now I am known as Deathstar!"
"Oh, no!" Glasswater said.
Okay, I'm pretty sure she already died.
It was really bad, because now Deathstar was leader and Deathstar was mean! But it was too late because Deathstar was already the leader.
Will you stop pointing out the obvious?!
"I'll stop you!" Moonshimmer said, and unsheathed her claws!
"No you can't because I'm your leader." Deathstar said, and she sheathed her claws again and looked sad. "And now I rule SapphireClan I can rule the whole forest!"
"But if you rule the forest everyone will have to be mean!" Moonshimmer said. "Please don't! I know you're evil, but you must be nice somehow!"
"No! I'm absolutely evil!" Deathstar said loudly!
"Hey everyone! I have something to say! Tranquildream is pregnant again!" Beautifulpaw suddenly exclaimed. Everyone was surprised!
AGAIN?! She's a medicine cat! She shouldn't have been pregnant the first time!
"Oh no! How did you know that?" Tranquildream said.
"Because I'm psychic and I got your abilities!" Beautifulpaw said.
Obviously.
"I'm so proud! And yes, I'm pregnant again. The father is Gaysparkle." Tranquildream said! Deathstar screamed, and ran away
No! What the hell are you doing?! NOW MOONSHIMMER'S GONNA BECOME MOONSTAR!
because he was amazed Gaysparkle loved she-cats!
Yeah... it's offensive, but I can understand why he was surprised.
"Yay! SapphireClan is saved!" Sunsetshine said, because SapphireClan was saved!
Thank you, Sunsetobvious-who-died-twice-and-we-don't-know-if-he's-a-he-or-she.
"I'm going to go now too because Vanillastar is dead and I want a better plan because I need to take over SapphireClan." Phantom said and him and Chocolaterain left the clearing!
"On no, I'm having my kits," Tranquildream said.
Her pregnancy lasted for three seconds again?! What is wrong with this cat?!
Moonshimmer went to help her because she had delivered her kits before even though she wasn't a medicine cat! Then Gaysparkle came into the camp because he heard about the kit, but Tranquildream had already had it. Its name was Awesomekit because it was awesome that Moonshimmer had delivered it!
No, it wasn't awsome.
"I'm really happy we had a kit." Gaysparkle said because he was allowed in the camp because they didn't have a leader! Then Sparklestar woke up!
"He didn't really kill me!"
*blinks* What? Okay, I'm outta here. *leaves* *returns* Oh what the hell, I can't leave you guys along with these... things!
she said, and she was alive! Everyone in SapphireClan was crying with happiness! "But now we need a new deputy for SapphireClan. So before StarClan—"
"You just made me the deputy." Moonshimmer said.
"Oh yeah. I forgot." Sparklestar said, and everyone happily went to sleep. Except for Gaysparkle, because he went back to his Clan.
Lilyblossom lay in his den, crying. He didn't let anyone else see though because they would think he wasn't mean and he was really mean! He was crying because he was surprised Gaysparkle liked she-cats because he loved him. And now Ancient was dead, there was such a great chance to tell Gaysparkle his true feelings!
So now you do love him? Knowing you can love is... creepy.
"Hello," Ancient said, appearing behind him. Trying to wipe away his tears, Deathheart turned around.
"Ancient, you're alive! After you died I almost took over SapphireClan!" he exclaimed.
"Very good, even though you needed my help. Next time I won't help you, so you'll have to do it on your own."
"Okay."
"So why didn't you take over SapphireClan?" Ancient asked. He was looking at Lilyblossom really scarily, and Lilyblossom was scared of him.
So we're back to Lilyblossom again, huh?
"Because I found out some very good information." Lilyblossom said, simply. Ancient nodded.
"Very good Deathheart! Now, soon you will attack SapphireClan on your own, because I won't help you this time."
"Okay." Deathheart said, and he was ready! "Now I'll go and properly take over SapphireClan. See you later!"
"I'm gonna go take over a Clan! I'll be back by dinner time! See you later!"
"Goodbye, dearie," Ancient said, then he went away.
Meanwhile at SapphireClan it was morning again. And the Clan was talking about how they won against Lilyblossom and Ancient the previous day but how Ancient probably wasn't dead because he was a powerful and mysterious cat. Then Sparklestar noticed something!
"If Ancient got into the camp, he must have needed help from one of us!"
No, not really. Considering that you are too stupid to notice when an enemy cat is in your territory, it's not too hard to just run around your territory and look for the camp. Plus, Deathheart used to be in your Clan, I'm pretty sure he told Ancient where to go.
Everyone was shocked!
"But who could that be?" Moonshimmer asked. Nobody knew!
Because you're all too stupid.
"Everyone!" Beautifulpaw suddenly said. "I have to tell you all something!
Let me guess- someone's pregnant... again?
Sunsetshine is pregnant!" Everyone gasped again, it was shocking!
So now Sunsetshine is a girl once again.
"Oh no!" Sunsetshine said. It was really bad, because of who the father was! "I cant tell you who the father is because it's really bad." She said.
Who is it? Deathstar? Phantom/Ancient? Chocolaterain?
"That's okay, you can tell us when you want." Moonshimmer said, and they went back to their duties. Sunsetshine went to the nursery because that's where you go when you're going to have kits! She knew she couldn't tell anyone who the father was because they would all be shocked! It was zombie-zombie-Jasminedung!
WHAT THE HELL?! JASMINEDUNG IS A GIRL! A GIRL CAN'T BE A FATHER! THIS IS JAZZSONG AND STARGLEAM ALL OVER AGAIN!
"Wow, look at that!" Sparklestar shouted out. Sunsetshine ran out of the nursery where everyone was and before them stood a giant evil black tower!
WHAT?! HOW DID A MOTHERF*****G TOWER JUST APPEAR IN THE CAMP?!
"Oh no, it must be an evil death tower!
*faints*
And that means Phantom or Lilyblossom must be in it!"
"That's okay, we'll take a patrol in there and stop them from taking over the forest!" Moonshimmer said.
"But the tower is on EmeraldClan's territory! They won't let us go in!"
Since when do you cats care for the warrior code or anything that is not Moonshimmer?
Sparklestar said, but Moonshimmer was smarter!
As if.
"Yes they will because I'll ask them to join us!" She said, and turned to everyone else. "Me, Sparklestar, Beetlescar, Tranquildream and Sunsetshine will go! Come on!" Even though Sunsetshine was a queen she came because she was really nice!
It was almost moonhigh by the time they reached the big scary tower. From RubyClan, Rockwatcher and Sneezenose had joined them. From EmeraldClan Mournfulphantom and Serpentpaw came and from DiamondClan Gaysparkle came so there was lots of them! And Tranquildream was happy because Gaysparkle was there! She also brought Awesomekit too, because he was awesome!
"Now we can finally stop Phantom, Chocolaterain, Lilyblossom and Ancient! We can't kill them though, because killing's mean and we're nice." Moonshimmer said.
No, you're not. You'd let someone die because you're scared of rain.
But then the tower's doors opened and zombie-zombie Jasminedung was there! Sunsetshine let out a loud squeak because he was scared!
Now it's a he again.
"Welcome to my castle!" Jasminedung said, then Rockwatcher killed her because nobody likes her.
Poor Jasmine. That's really mean of you, Tainted Purifacion.
But she had said it was her castle which was weird because it was supposed to be Lilyblossom's! But it was okay, so they went inside.
Inside the castle, it was very well decorated and furnished! There was lots of furniture and in the middle of the entrance hall there was a big statue of a cat! The cat looked just like Jasminedung!
They kept walking and went up lots of flights of stairs,
Cats don't know what stairs are.
then they got into an attic.
Cats don't now what an attic is.
It was really dark and scary, and when they were in there everyone wanted to go but Moonshimmer said they couldn't!
"I can't see anything in here because it's too dark!" Mournfulphantom said! And she was right and it was really dark in there!
"Yes it is dark! And soon your eyes will be very accustomed to the dark! Because you'll be stuck here in the dark!" Jasminedung said, but they only knew it was her because of her voice, because it was dark!
You're not gonna stop saying obvious things anytime soon, huh?
"No we won't because we'll get out!" Moonshimmer said.
"No you won't because I won't let you!" Jasminedung said,
Jasminedung, I like your style!
and she closed the attic door!
Cats don't know what doors are.
They heard the key clicking in it and they were trapped!
Cats can't lock doors! And they don't know what a key is!
"Oh no, we're trapped in the attic!" Sneezenose said!
"We have to get out somehow!" Gaysparkle also said!
"Oh no, I'm having my kits!" Sunsetshine said.
Of course he/she'll have kits in the worst time and place possible. It's become a tradition in this story.
Moonshimmer helped her because she'd helped with kits before even though she wasn't a medicine cat! Sunsetshine had four kits, two toms and two she-cats. "How will we get them back to camp?"
Good question.
"We'll all carry one each." Moonshimmer said, and her, Tranquildream, Gazingflight and Sparklestar carried them!
"Moonshimmer you're so clever! You should be the leader!" Gazingflight said.
Then your Clan would be even more messed up than it already is.
"No I can't yet, but when Sparklestar dies I will be." She replied.
"Okay." Gazingflight said. "I know how we can get out. Look over there!" Everyone turned to see parachute backpacks!
WHAT THE FUCK?!
They grabbed one each and jumped out of the window!
YOU'RE FUCKING KIDDING ME! *starts crying*
It was really scary because they fell really fast, but then they pulled out the parachutes and they didn't fall as fast anymore! Soon they were on the ground and they were all alive!
"I'll name the white tom with red eyes Darkkit because there's a little dark bit on his eyes. And I'll name the red she-cat with red eyes Redkit, because she's red. And I'll name the other tom with no legs
NO LEGS!?
Giraffekit,
HOW ABOUT YOU NAME HIM ITSAWONDERTHATHESALIVECONSIDERINGHEWASBORNWITHOUTLEGSKIT?!
and the other she-cat Moonhighkit because she's really black!"
Because Blackkit would be too normal.
Sunsetshine said, and everyone said 'yay'! Then they all went back to their Clans!
Once they were back at EmeraldClan, Dragonstar asked the SapphireClan cats to stay! Everyone else went home except the SapphireClan cats, because they'd been asked to stay at EmeraldClan for some reason!
Yeah, why does Dragonstar want them in his Clan?
"For your bravery in defeating zombie-zombie Jasminedung and parachuting out of a hundred-storey window, I would like to give you your warrior name, Serpentpaw. From now on, you will be known as Serpentfoot. May StarClan make you a really good warrior, so you can be useful to EmeraldClan, or giving you your name wouldn't make any sense." Dragonstar said. Serpentfoot was really happy, because he got his warrior name!
"Now we have to go home." Moonshimmer said, "because the warrior code doesn't let us stay on your territory unless you ask us. Bye!"
Er, he did ask you. And since when do you care about warrior code?
"Bye Moonshimmer!" Dragonstar said, and the SapphireClan cats also left so they could go back to SapphireClan. But when they were in SapphireClan they were really surprised!
"Watch out, Lilyblossom is attacking!" Sparklestar said really loudly.
"Yes I am!" Lilyblossom said, who was in the middle of the camp attacking! Then he attacked Suicidekit, who died!
He was... already... dead.
"Oh, no! Poor Suicidekit!" Moonhighkit said, and they were all really sad! Then Giraffekit ran over and attacked Lilyblossom, and he was really hurt! Giraffekit was happy because Lilyblossom went away, but he was really sad that he hurt him.
"Well done Giraffekit!" Sparklestar said. "From this day forth, you shall be known as Giraffeclaw!
WHAT THE FUCKING HELL?! HE'S A FUCKING ONE-HOUR OLD KIT THAT DOESN'T HAVE LEGS!
You will be a really good warrior because you beat Lilyblossom!" The Clan cheered, but then they were surprised again!
Gaysparkle was at the entrance to the camp! "I want to join SapphireClan," he said!
No! Don't! I'm begging you, don't ruin your life by joining them!