I apologize severely for not getting a chapter out to you guys especially with my promise not to vanish for more than three months.
Unfortunately the main reason why is because I am basically having a crisis of faith. Not only have I started to lose interest in "Shivering Grasp of a Promise" but I reread it, and I realized that it sucks. However you guys seem to like it, so I am not going to drop it entirely.
Now, I have some clue to what's wrong with Shivering Grasp, including the title. "If one note is off it destroys the entire symphony." According to that quote, there might be more wrong than I know. So, I'm going to have to take a short hiatus to find as many of the problems as I can and fix them. I already have someone who's helping me out, but the hiatus will be far shorter if you guys helped out too. Comment what you think is wrong with this story and possible solutions. The more, the better.
The first thing I'm going to do is take care of that title and description, I'll change it tomorrow to give you a chance to read this and understand why i changed it.
Then I'm going to shift back over to my Macross story as that one's been collecting dust for far too long and to give me something to inspiration on how to fix this story. Don't worry; this story won't collect dust either. I'll try to get back to it as soon as I can
When I do come back, how should I do it? Rewrite it or just replace the chapters as I go along?
Before I resume publication, I will release a prototype or multiple if necessary and see if you guys like the new version.
Thank you for being amazing readers and dealing with my faults and this story's faults. Please comment on the above so we can reunite sooner
Till next time
Angelum Tenebrarum
The new title and description:
The eyeless devil
Born to unique circumstances, rescued from the streets as a child, and raised by the investigator who found him. He wants to find a place to belong in this world but he can't decide where. With the humans? With the ghouls? Does a monster like him even belong in this world? He doesn't even know what he is.