Hi everyone, Sorry it has been so long. My computer got a virus, and I had to redo windows because I couldn't figure out how to get rid of it. Then I couldn't find my password, So I couldn't update. Yesterday, I managed to find it, but I have lost all train of thought on where I was going in this story. As a result, I have decided to take it down, and do some revising, some adding, and take my time to improve it. I also want to make two versions of it. One will be more user teen friendly without descriptive violence and sexual themes, and the other will be Rated Mature so that I don't have to worry about what I add. Since I started with a Teen rating, I felt a little bad when I had to up the rating to mature, because I don't really have a specific direction I was taking it, and pretty much just let it flow the way it wanted to depending on my mood at the time I was writing. This way I can write the way I want to, and then edit out the inappropriate parts for the teen version. What I want to know, is whether I should also remove the boy x boy & girl x girl type relationships for the teen version. I was thinking, that some people might not appreciate them, but I really don't want to make three versions, so if you have a free moment, tell me what you guys think.