Ah, well as some of you seen, this isn't a chapter. Well, it's actually 4 chapters, in some way. Well, this letter is to notify everyone that I have completely, remade, redone, and revamped Chapter 1, 2, 3, and 4. Along with editing chapters, 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, 12, and 13 to fit the storyline of the first 4. I hope you all enjoy the new adjustments. I know it took long, well it was 4 chapters. Well, I hope everyone finds these updated a bit more 'realistic' and more 'in character'.
Changes Made to Chapter 1:
Changed ages in timeline:
Taichi, Yamato, Sora – 13
Koushiro, Mimi – 12
Jyou – 14
Takeru, Hikari – 10
Changed the story line a little.
Changes made to Chapter 2:
Changed the story line immensely.
Changes made to Chapter 3
Changed the story line immensely.
Made into a 'fluff' chapter
Changes made to Chapter 4:
Changed story line immensely.
Made a more soft approach towards the 'moment'
Changes made to nearly ALL Chapters:
Added page breaks, organized things better, fixed a few errors that were spread out among the chapters.
I hope everyone enjoys reading the new enhancements as much as I did writing them. Well, im looking forward to seeing everyones great reviews!
Review Responses
Catheen Clogston – I use them because i would rather have their authentic names. Thanks and hope to hear more from you soon.
Birdboy – Ah, ok. Yeah im hardl yon there myself. Its just I had remembered you put one of your fics on the boards.
Loveismyantidrug – Awesome, hope to hear from you as well!
Chibi Biyomon – Well, I must say that I have a lot to say in response to your 2 words. I don't mean to be offending, or in anyway trying to bend your interests. However I must say that you either did not read anything of it, or you only read Chapter 1 and misunderstood it. I am not asking you to actually read the whole thing, but I see it wrong that you stereotype it right off to bat.
Andrain John – Well thank you for the positive points. I know my skills are lacking, but it is, and has been my first fic. However the way I read your review, I only want you to know I don't want to force anyone to read. As for there being Hentai, I greatly disapprove and will not resort to anything of the such. I have stated this in an earlier chapter.
DarkMetalAngel of Destruction – Thanks!
Tai'sgirl/Writerofthecentury/Crazydigimonfan/Whydoyouwanttoknow/none/Greatstory/Wonderingwhatwill/Lilprincessofdigimon/Mattismymainman/Kouji'sprincess/Dramxwriters – (whew) Well, to me this seems like the same person, just reviewed over and over again with different names. I don't take it as an offense, just want to thank you for your positive and upbuilding comments. Also, Im a pretty strict Taiora fan, so you probably wont see any Sorato here.Sorry.
Judeofthewriters – Thanks, I really appreciate everyone support.
Lord Rance – Oh, ok. Well I hope I in no way offended you. I hope you and your family do well in whatever you choose to pursue.
Sachiko-san – Well, I must say that I have no clue what your saying. I only use a handful of Japanese words in this fic, yet I know nearly nothing of Japanese. Sorry : P.
Caracalgirl – You actually found time to review!
Isumo1489 – Thanks for your comments. As for me helping, email me at my email address found in my profile, and ill try to help you out.
Onii-Liinku – Thanks. I know that in the earlier chapters, I came off really strong and sudden, I hope the remake changes that and some of the other peoples views.
Well, after a lot of reviews, positive, negative, and neutral, I must say that I am happy to have made it this far. Ill try to update As soon as I can.