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OK, I've had this idea.
I thought that I could re-write this whole thing, but as Jasper's point of view? You know, start a new fan-fic. I would like to hear your thoughts on this, and your criticism is always welcome!
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As I stared into the black eyes of the giant wolf, I saw my life flashing before my very eyes.
Most of the memories were my old dim-lighted human memories. One's that were blurry and could not compare to the clarity of the newer memories. My favourite human memory was when I first met Jasper. He was the only reason that was here right now, wit him.
And killing werewolves.
Suddenly I was staring back into the present. I was lying straight, my back flat on the ground. I wasn't moving, I had forgotten how to do that. Suddenly, in my peripheral vision, I saw Jasper, leaping up onto the wolf that was about to kill me. His graceful jump made it hard to look away from him. But I had to get up and help him as much as possible.
This would be hard though. Jacob was my friend. We were good mates.
And he was about to kill me.
And I tried to kill him.
It was obvious that we were not friends anymore, and it was also obvious that he was sad about it.
"Stop!" someone yelled. And then I realised that it was me. Jasper and the wolf turned to look at me.
"Why do we have to fight?" I said, angrily. Growling almost. "Can't we just be friends and get over it?"
But the wolf just stared at me and shook his head at me.
"No, Jacob, you listen to me," I said, as if I could hear what he was thinking. "The Cullen's turned me into a Vampire. So what? The only bad thing that we had expected was that Charlie would be sad…" And as I said this I shuddered slightly. "… about me leaving and then after a few years he would get over it," I said, every word hurting me as realization came into view.
I would/ could never see Charlie again for his safety. As much as it would hurt me, it would hurt him to see me this way, with the scary red eyes and perfected features. He would think I was a ghost and run away screaming.
I stood up, trying to make my point obvious. Again Jacob ran off into the bushes. 30 seconds later he came back again in his human form.
"You know, it would be so mush easier if I could talk to you as a wolf," he said,
"Well the fact is that you can't," I said.
He
ignored that. "We can't let this go, Alice. My ancestors made a
treaty with these bloodsuckers many, many years back. It's not
about to make any exceptions," he said, authority in his voice.
I
took a quick glance back at the others. They were almost done. The
wolf that Edward had been fighting was lying on the ground like
Jasper's, it's breathing slowing. Esme wasn't done yet, but it
didn't look they would be finished soon without help. Rosalie and
Carlisle were having the same progress.
"Look over there, Jacob," I said, almost angrily. "Your friends are all dying now. Why keep fighting?" I asked.
"And it's your fault, Alice. I don't want to fight you, but now that the treaty is broken, there is nothing that can be done about it," he said,
"Your friends are lying there nearing death and all you can care about killing a bunch of Vampires that have no interest in killing you," I said, "You a wonderful friend then," I said, sarcastically.
Jacob looked down, I'd obviously hurt him physically and emotionally. I could see that he was sad about what he had to do. It looked and sounded like what he was about to do was forced on him.
As I took another closer look at him, I saw blood on his shirt.
"I don't want you to die," he said, "But I don't control this pack. It's him you want," he said and pointed to the largest wolf their, "He's the alpha."
But I wasn't listening to him anymore. The sound of his and the others hearts were overpowering everything else. The burn in the back of my throat went wild as I stared at Jacob's chest.
"No, Alice!" said Jasper.
"What's happening…. Oh," said Jacob as he took 3 steps back, away from me.
My mouth was watering as I stared into his black eyes. Jacob's scent was yuck, more like that of an animal then that of a human. But the sight of the blood made me shudder. I tried closing my eyes, but my throat burned on. If it weren't for the really unappetizing smell, then I would have charged at him as soon as I saw and smelt the blood.
I opened my eyes again, but the wound had already cleared up. Odd. How did they heal so quickly?
But the blood was still there, almost dry.
"She's loosing it!" I heard someone close call. And it was true; I was close to loosing it. I was almost shaking with my craving for his blood. Even though it smelt really bad.
"Stop her!" someone yelled.
Then I heard someone whisper to themselves, "Go get 'em Alice," they said. I thought it was Rosalie.
I looked up and saw everyone staring at me, even the wolves. But I controlled myself. I wasn't in any mood to hunt Jacob. He was my friend, and I wanted no one to die today.
I felt sorry for Jacob's friends lying near death on the ground, panting loudly. I wished that there was a way to compromise, to let this all go.
But Jacob seemed so against it. What really had happened all those years ago?
Suddenly, Edward spoke up. "No, Jacob, you are the true Alpha, the one with the only right to change the treaty."
OK, now I was really confused. If we all survived this, I would need a big explanation later.
I turned to Jacob and gave him a pleading look. The wolf that he had pointed too earlier looked upset about something, like he did not like what was going on one bit.
Jacob looked troubled. "No," he said, "It's Sam you what."
"No, Jacob," said Edward, "You're Jacob Black. The True Alpha of your pack,"
Jacob shook his head in disbelief. It looked like he didn't want to have this decision.
"You bit a human," he said. "You broke the treaty."
"And it wasn't our decision. She wanted this for herself, and if she harms any human, you can fight us," Edward said.
Jacob still looked troubled. We sat there for a while as he thought. It was really frustrating that I couldn't see our futures from now. I needed to see to help save us and protect us from any bad things.
"Fine," Jacob finally said. "The treaty will be renewed. It is still in place, but if you do anything else like this again, we will fight back," he said in a threatening tone. I felt a wave of relief was over me, though the calm that Jasper was sending through me. Or maybe he was sending the relief towards me.
I looked down towards the hurt wolves lying on the ground, wheezing. "What about them?" I asked in a sad tone.
"I can help," said Carlisle. "Just get them to change back into their human forms and I can help treat them," he said. I smiled.
But
this couldn't all and so quickly. There had to be more of a fight
involved in this.
But there wasn't. No one remained fighting
any more instead we where helping the ones that we were all planned
to kill. I stayed behind with Jasper, Rosalie and Bella though. Rose
and Bella didn't want anything to do with those dogs and were glad
to be free of them.
"It's over?" I whispered to Jasper.
"Yes, it's over," he replied softly.
"But, it happened so quickly," I murmured, as I reached towards his hand. He smiled softly towards me, and I returned the favour.
Carlisle and Edward, both trained in situations like this, were trying to treat the wolves. Emmet stood close by and watched though, maybe in case something happened to any of them, which seemed unlikely, even though I was still blind.
Slowly, Jasper, Bella and Rosalies' futures came back to me. I watched as Bella and Rosalie ran quickly into the house.
"Shall we?" I asked Jasper softly.
"Why not?" he replied.
So we ran hand in hand in to his… our room. As we walked in, I lounged on the useless bed. I was so glad though, I would never have to sleep again. I could always be with my Jasper, and nothing would ever come between us again. We were both equals now. Together.
But I still had many, many questions to ask Jasper.
I looked him straight in the eye. "Jasper, were did those scars come from," I said, quietly.
I paused, but I knew that he was going to tell me. "As I said before, I came from a very different place then where we are now. A place full of war and fighting. I was in those fights, and I got… injured," He said.
"Oh," I said, thoughtfully.
We sat there on the bed in silence for about 3 hours. Emmett had returned inside, and Edward and Carlisle had taken the wolves back to La Push. They were given permission to enter their lands only this once, to help them. The wolves trusted us now, and they would never return again. Or so I thought.
I could do this forever. But there was just a little part in my mind, so small that it seemed insignificant, that wanted to go and do something. It didn't care what. But this was the playful Alice inside that wanted to get out. Suddenly, the urge to have fun grew.
"Can we do something?" I asked Jasper.
"Sure. What do you want?" he asked.
"Let's play a game,"
He looked at me, questionably.
"You know, like… a board game or something,"
"Or something," he muttered, "You would cheat," he said, and smiled.
"No I… oh," I said, smiling when I remembered what he had been talking about. "So… what can we do? Maybe we could run! Oh Yes! That's sounds like fun," I said, jumping off the bed and onto the floor.
"Oh, Alice, what will we ever do with you," he said. He smiled and grabbed my hand as we ran out of the house and into the trees.
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