Ok holy shit i can see there are still people wanting more from this story, considering ive gotten 2k views in the past 2 days im actually pumped to start writing again. I've gotten one offer for a beta so far which surprised me. So if anyone else wants to be my beta you still have a chance, because im sure some of you hate the constant errors in my story. I know i promised a preview of the rewrite but i honestly dont know how to go about that.
SO, what im going to do is this. Im going to tell you guys about some of the changes in the story and some ideas i have that i dont know whether to add in or not.
THINGS ADDED FOR DEFINIETE
The island: The island is a dungeon added into the story. it is where the main character starts and it'll be where he spends most of the story. its broken into five areas. Two permanent dungeons, a revolving dungeon, a resource dungeon and a safe heaven.
The safe heaven at first wont be safe, it'll have four guardians which hell have to defeat in order for it to be safe.
The permanent dungeons will be never ending dungeons. They'll always be around and will have the same mobs, they'll get stronger and drop better loot but other than that they'll be the same. Idk what type of mobs they could be but i was thinking of one being a dragon dungeon and maybe one be a zombie one. or they could be based off a game.
Revolving dungeon will change everyday. The enemies could be from an anime/game/tv show/book etc. Each day it'll change, for example. One day in it you could be fighting freeza's men(Dbz), you could find loot from Dragon ball in that dungeon at the time, but the next day you could be fighting mermen and devil fruit users(One piece). And you could find devil fruits in there. (One day in the real world, you can add in a time dilation to be in there for longer)
Resource dungeon, i dont know how to make this one work. it was my last beta's suggestion. So i was thinking of having mobs which drop resources from different games, no idea how to implement that but any suggestions would be helpful.
Now this one some people might not agree on but the way ive written it so far has made me change this. so imma put it in big bold writing for all of you.
HE WILL NO LONGER USE JUST MAGIC ITEMS. Now i know in the last one he didnt use just magic items ghe had mana make magic and stole techniques. Hes still going to steal techniques but im going to have him learn spells and shit. Most of the spells that hell use are Skyrim spells, but they'll be different. For example say he gets the spell tome for 'flames', in Skyrim you can just shoot flames out of your hands. But if he were to get this spell tome im thinking he can use it and make it stronger or turn it into different spells.
I have ideas for a magic that he could get, Ender dragon slayer magic. Now for those of you who haven't played minecraft before, there is a boss in the game called the ender dragon. My thought is that in the revolving dungeon he could fight the ender dragon and get Ender dragon slayer magic. It'll be like fire dragon slayer magic but purple and acidic. He could also use it for teleportation.
This is only some of the ideas i have im obviously not going to give them all to you.
Possible ideas to use, i want feedback.
World dungeons: At random times he'll get the choice of going to a different world, most of them will be games and anime worlds. Games like Skyrim, fallout 3/nv/4,Ark. I dont know what others would be good but suggestions would be appreciated. Different anime's would be, One piece, Dragon ball, Gurren lagann, Naruto(I haven't watched much of it so i probably wont do it). I might do dungeons from movies and books too. Movies such as super hero ones, maybe a few zombie ones idk yet but if someone suggests one i might do it.
Ok so there was this idea i had for ages, i was going to have it in my last version of this story but i didnt get around to it. It was the whole Riolu as a compainion. He would turn into a Lucario during battle and maybe in certain circumstances go into mega Lucario.
Some of you might have noticed i love pokemon, dont like the new series tho. I just hate the way ash looks in alola just ew. Anyway I have a few more pokemon related ideas such as... As an eevee who can turn into any of its eeveeloutions and turn back. This way to could use any of the elements.
Storage seals on each of his fingers, each one holding a pokemon. He could channel magic towards a certain one and gain attributes of that pokemon. A Pikachu one, he would gain a tail and ears and would be able to use electric attacks. I was thinking he could gain these seals or marks, by defeating the pokemon in battle.
Pokémon devil fruits, i know people have used these in the past but i thought of it recently and thought it could be a good thing to use.
One last idea i had which is a really big one. It'll need some explaining first.
The idea is based off of Edolas and Earthland. They are the same world but with differences, so my idea was to add in two other worlds. One world im going to call Exodus, in exodus there is peace. The magic is more powerful than earthland. Its ruled by The Ten Pillars Of Exodus. They are the equivalent of earthlands 10 wizard saints. They are the most powerful people in the world.
Exodus Natsu is one of them, he is the second strongest. He is also known by a different title, but thats a secret for now. Lets just say he has a different dragon slayer magic.
The strongest is the Exodus version of Rinji, this rinji uses magic items as his source of power. He runs the largest magic item store in all of exodus. His identity of the strongest is hidden though as he doesnt want the fame and publicity.
The other 8 dont have a earthland counterpart. Some are from different anime/tv shows/ games etc. And some are just made up OCs.
The other world is going to be an apocalyptic world, i still haven't decided what it'll be tho. Zombies and Vampires are kinda overused but i do have some plans for OCs for the vampires.
But what im leaning towards is a dragon apocalypse. In it there will be dragons ruling the world and dragons will have human slaves. The good dragons like igneel and grandeeney will have a safe area for some humans and will be training them.
Idk if ill actually do this one but its just an idea.
If anyone has a my feedback please pm me or leave a review. Heres what im going to do about this story, Currently im writing chapter 3 of it, i need 1 and 2 to be looked over and have the errors fixed. if i get a beta soon ill post chapter 1 by the end of February. There isnt many changes to it but theres some important things in it.
Thanks for all the support i really appreciate it i started writing this story to kill my bordom and to keep myself busy to distract myself from my thoughts. But now im writing it because i enjoy writing, i dont really think im a good writer but fuck it i dont care im going to keep on writing.
-Hibesdude
