I have made some changes to the story and tried to fix some of the type-o's that were in the story. I have taken some stuff out and put some details back in. I tried to make this a little longer than the other chapters. I will try and fix my other story today or tomorrow.

Chapter 13

Max's POV

I curled in onto myself and jerked away from his hand, but the brain attack kept coming. I knew that it wasn't because of Galbatorix. I fell to the floor and grabbed my head.

I had tears running down my face as the pain slowly started to increase. It was getting worse and this time I didn't know if my brain was ever going to stop hurting.

I suddenly felt my body being lifted off the ground. The sudden movement made the pain increase again. I curled in again and I suddenly screamed.

My body apparently couldn't take it anymore and my mind went black and my body went limp.

Murtagh's POV

Galbatorix jumped back in surprise when the girl crumpled. She hit the ground hard and cradled her head.

"Stop whatever you two are doing this isn't helping us," Galbatorix ordered both of us.

"I'm not doing anything. I thought it was you," Eragon said.

"I didn't do it. I thought it was you too," I said, raising my hands in the air.

"I'm not doing this. Grab her we need to get her somewhere else and with her dragon you are going to have to watch them though. I felt that pain she was in; she isn't going to be able to move for very long. Follow me with her," I walked over and grabbed her. She was unnaturally light for someone her size.

Suddenly she screamed so loud it hurt my eardrums. Then she went limp. It was harder to carry her now that she moved around so much and was very light.

"Eragon help me, she passed out and I can't carry a limp body by myself," Eragon walked over to me and grabbed her legs. I carried her by her arms and we followed behind Galbatorix.

Galbatorix lead us to one of the rooms in our wing of the castle. This wing was made for the dragon riders and had places for the dragons to get into the rooms from the outside.

The room had 4-poster king size bed with a dark red comforter and gold pillows. The walls were painted red and had gold strips. There was a huge opening that opens for her dragon to get in. There was a huge pillow that laid beside the window for the dragons and there were seat and chairs to sit in.

We walked over to the bed and put her down on it and then walked over to the window and opened it. We wanted Thorn and Saphira to bring her dragon in so that it could be close to the girl.

Thorn can you bring in her dragon, there is something wrong and we are hoping that this will help.

I know Starr is going crazy she keeps fighting us and Galbatorix's dragon had to hurt her to get to her to stop going completely crazy. She is still fighting him, but not as much.

Starr?

That is the dragon's name. She is smarter than a dragon her age should be and her wing was somehow healed before we got here. She is in good health and is still able to fight Galbatorix's dragon, even though she was hurt.

Get him to stop we need her as unharmed as possible so that she can help her rider. We need to figure out what is wrong so that we can get her true name and bind her to us.

Her name is Max that is all we can get from Starr. She keeps screaming that she needs to get to Max. I think that it is probably her rider.

Yes, that would make sense. Bring her here we need her near Max and we need her to help Max wake back up.

Ok, we are on our way.

I heard the dragons before I saw them. Thorn and Saphira are on both sides of Starr and Galbatorix's dragon is behind them making sure she doesn't run. Starr flew directly into the room and immediately went to her rider. She pulled Max out of the bed and pulled her to the pillow. She then wrapped her body around Max.

"We need to know what is wrong with her so that we can fix it. Can you tell us what is wrong with her?" I asked Starr. I knew that if we tried to get anywhere near her right now she would light us up and we would be crispy.

You can do nothing for this. It cannot be stopped. You shouldn't have moved her off the floor. The movement was hurting her more. She is having an attack on her mind and you can't do anything about it. You have to let it run its course.

"Is there anything we can do to make it easier on her?" I knew that she must be in extreme pain. I have felt what it feels like to have an attack on your brain. I know that she is probably in so much pain right now that her body did shut down.

No you should leave her alone. This had happened before and she always comes out of it. You just need to be careful of making too much noise. That will help for not making it any worse.

"Ok we will try to be quite," I said. I went to the chair and sat down. Thorn was able to fit in the room too and came to sit beside me.

Thorn can you get Galbatorix to talk to his dragon; we need to know what he did to Starr. That may have caused this Brian Attack to start.

Ok I will go, but be careful of Starr. Dragons get desperate when their riders are hurt and we can't talk to them and she can't talk to Max right now. She could hurt you if you try to do something to Max and she doesn't know how it would affect her.

I understand I will try to stay away from Max.

Galbatorix's POV

I walked out of the room that was set up for the new rider. I walked to my office and set behind my desk.

I walked over to my books and scrolls on the wall looking for the prophecy about the legendary rider. I have heard about this rider since I became a rider. It was a well known fact around the riders that they would fall. It was just a matter of time. They didn't go down without a fight by any means, but in the end they did fall.

I was rereading the legend when my dragon came in. Curling around my desk he laid his head on the ground and watched me work.

What is wrong with the girl? Her dragon was going crazy. I had to pin her down and curl my claw into her neck to get her to calm down a little bit. Even after that it was bad. Then suddenly she went crazy I couldn't really control her. It got better when we could bring her to the room and she could see her rider.

I don't know what is wrong with her. When I was trying to get into her mind she sudden recoiled in pain and the crumpled in on herself. I couldn't get into her mind without causing myself extreme pain. That was probably why the dragon was going so crazy because her rider was in so much pain.

That is probably true. I know that I would have been doing the same thing. That dragon shouldn't be able to even get close to getting away from me and she almost got away from me. A dragon a few days old should still be trying to get used to his body and that dragon was sure of all her movements. She knew what to do and how to get her body to do it. I didn't learn to move like that until I was at least a year old.

Thanks maybe that information will help us get them easier. We need to work on getting them on our side. You need to make sure the Varden don't try anything while we are preoccupied.

Don't worry I will take care of it, but I don't think you need to worry about her going to the Varden. The rider wants to stay independent and would rather be left alone than promise herself to a cause.

With that my dragon jumped out of my office and started to fly out into the sky. He would probably fly around and listen in to see if he hears any rumors about what is going on.

I planned on making this longer, but I couldn't think of too much more, and I was getting annoyed with myself on not updating. Sorry again hope you enjoy this chapter.