I've gotten a few comments saying Blackstar is too much older for Dovepaw; Look at Dustpelt and Ferncloud. He's a lot older too.
Plus, what I say goes!

Warrior Heart - Al. Simple, and he isn't very...um...cute…but he loves to cuddle!

I know I'm going back on my word, sorry, but I'm only including one of the cat suggestions I got; Leopardpaw; no, that wasn't her in chapter 11 (which was messed up, with bolding, sorry).

This chapter was not fun since I hate writing in Jayfeather's Point of View so it was originally short and lame so now it has a few POVs in it. I said "so" to many times.

/"\Jayfeather's POV (*Ha!) /"\

"Jayfeather!" The blind cat was jostled from his work by the Blackstar's call. He sounded…frightened? We must have lost many cats. Jayfeather thought grimly. The battle had ended moments ago. For now, Lionblaze was searching for Dovepaw; she must be terrified, and the Jayfeather wanted to know she was safe. Dovepaw was like a little sister to him. Like…Hollyleaf he thought in pain.

"Have…have you seen Dovepaw?"

Jayfeather's heart was racing now.

DOVEPAW WAS MISSING!

"She's not out there! She's just an apprentice! Weren't you watching her? What in StarClan's name is wrong with you! She didn't stand a chance alone! Why weren't you with her! Willowshine!" Jayfeather urgently called another cat into the conversation.

"Yes?" The tabby cat replied calmly, looking up from dressing a cat's bleeding paw.

"Have you seen Dovepaw!" Blackstar hurried the conversation.

"Not since the battle ended. In fact, as soon as she was out there it ended…" Her meow slowed thoughtfully.

"Oh no" They all said in union. Jayfeather raced to find Lionblaze.

/"\ Dovepaws/"\

"Wake up fox dung!" A cat hissed and stabbed Dovepaw's side with a claw. She sat bolt upright.

"Where am I!" She demanded.

"You are in the Dark Forest Good guess Warrior's Heart! And it was Hawk frost : ). The voice…it was familiar. She couldn't tell who it was; the cat was hiding in the shadows.

When the cat emerged, Dovepaw let out a squeak of shock. It was-

Dontcha hate my cliffies?

Translation:

Don't you hate my cliff hangers?

I'm going to start writing in a few cat's POVs including Jayfeather (which won't be fun) Lionblaze and Blackstar (FFFUUUNNN!) so you can see what's happening on the island.

This island will get more dramatic than Lost! Insanely funny inside joke in my family :)

Oh, and Ivypaw's POV. Hehehe.

Also, I plan on showing you an unrevised chapter with it's revised chapter soon. Idk why it just seems cool.

*I got a PM saying that I only ever do Dovepaw's POV and it made the story terrible. I get a lot of hate mail! Well HA to you!