Jinchuriki

by crossoverfanofanime

A brutal betrayal in the night, Kagome is turned upon by those she called "friends", and left for dead. As her physical form is being ripped apart, a sinister evil imprisoned within her soul begins to stir. The Gobi has awoken. Now Kagome has been saved by those like her, and they have become her friends. (Up for adoption)

14. Re-edit notice

Editing and new chapters Incoming!

I am so sorry for my exceptionally long hiatus. I dealt with an account hacker and suffered enough writer's block to build another Great Wall of China. (Get it? Writer's "BLOCK".. heheheh… LAUGH!)

But after a great hiatus, Jinchuriki will live again, and it is coming back n' better then ever.

Differences:

Grammar. Looking back and re-reading my story (posted two years ago) I noticed the WRETCHED grammar errors. These will be improved now that I have grown the conscious to proof-read my stuff before posting.

Plot: I now see, looking back. My plotline was a tad unfocused and didn't really seem to LEAD anywhere. After taking a Creative Writing class this year, I feel it will do that much better.

Descriptive language: Mayhaps my most fatal flaw, I didn't DESCRIBE anything, and it was quite sad really. This will now be remedied as I begin my re-write of older chapters.