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okay- I have the suckiness out of my system from last chapter. I know I never edit, so I'm gonna start doing that more. Hope ya'al like this chapter, I'm switching back to Edward's power and POV
here we go- on the most oddest chapter ever. What will happen is that once Edward gets the ring on Bella, her thoughts will be more clear to him, but only for a little while.
EPOV
Here was the moment I had been waiting forever for. I reached into the pocket of my coat, and nervously felt for the little black box. But the box didn't matter, what was inside of it did.
Resting between the layers of black velvet, was a ring; an engagement ring. Designs in white gold lace up the edges, meeting together for a small cluster of diamonds, with a large one in the center (picture on profile... i think). She may not love the price, but she would love the ring.
Now all she had to do was say yes. Just one simple word, but it meant everything to me.
I heard her coming down the stairs, so I snapped the box closed and ran up to greet her with a kiss. "I have a suprise for you", I whispered to her. Before she could protest I swept her up (bridal style) and ran out the door. I was on my way to the perfect spot to propose to her, our meadow.
I got there in record time, and once she opened her eyes, she gasped. The meadow had a carpet of rose petals. Candles of every shape and size burned in a circle, symbolizing that we were one. I let her down to the ground, and pulled out a single rose from my jacket, and the box. Bending down on one knee, I began, (BTW, I have no idea how to write a proposal speech, but I'll try.)
"Isabella Marie Swan, I love you. I can't think of any other way to say it. I know that I cannot dream, but in a way, I do. I dream of the day when you would be mine. And today, I would like to make that a reality. You accepted me, all of me, when I feared that no one else would. You've stayed by my side this entire time. And now I ask, would you be my wife, for an eternity." I gazed up at her hopefully, to see that she was crying. Now it was her turn to make a speech.
"Edward Cullen, I never imagined that I would find someone, much less get proposed to at the young age of 18. I've promised my mother that I would wait till I was older, but I'm afraid you just can't keep all promises. I have 18 years to make up for with you, and I'm not loosing one more minute. Yes, I would love to be your wife."
This was what I had been waiting for. I took out the ring, ready to put it on her finger. She gasped, and starting crying again. As soon as the ring touched her finger, something changed. A new voice came to my head, a voice I had never heard in my thoughts before.
He proposed to me. He will actually be mine, forever. That means... he is going to change me. An eternity with the love of my existence, I couldn't think of anything better. Rene may regret getting married young, but I never will. I love him, I love all of him. And I always will.
As soon as I took my hand off the ring, the voice stopped. Why could I hear her just then. Was it because she was entirely opened up to me?
"Isabella Swan, is that a promise"? I asked her. She was shocked that I had heard her thoughts, since I never have before.
"Yes, she replied, one that I never will break".
I laughed and leaned in for the first kiss I would share with my fiance.
Ok- there weren't a lot of thoughts in that chapter, but I really wanted him to propose to her. REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW