Maximum Ride: 10 years later
Sorry I haven't updated lately. Its almost Christmas break so my schools been shoving test and quizzzes down my thoart. But im back and ready to type...or write?
I do not own Maximum Ride but I do own a jar of jelly in my fridge.
Chapter 14
Fang POV
"So Maxie why not you come here, right next to me and see who you'll be guarding." Ari hissed.
"Alright Bro, show me the scum." Max hissed back while walking towards the cages.
"Alright here's Angel, Gazzy, Iggy, and Fangie." Ari said while pointing to each of us.
"I'll keep them under control until there called." Max said and gave Ari a small small. Ari nodded and walked away, and that's when I finally spoke
"Max what did they do to you."
"What are you talking about tweetie bird." Max growled.
"You..." I started
"Fang don't bother." Angel interupted
"What do you mean don't bother. I promised Max I would never let her become part of the school and I AM NOT GOING TO BREAK THAT PROMISE!" I yelled.
"Fang. We are not going to let that happen either, but she's lost right now. Were going to come up with a plan." Angel whispered and gave me a look saying trust-me-you-won't -regret-it. I decided just to nod and slumped back into my cage. I looked at Max one last time and saw her flinch just a little under my gaze. Don't worry Max. I'm not going to give up that easily.
ANGEL's POV
Man, Fang can be such a pain sometimes. But I'm glad he's finally calmed down. So I decided to look over at the so called Max and saw her standing at the door with her back towards us.
"Shut up." I heard Max whisper/hiss. Who's she talking too?
"Oh is fake me thinking there going to really give up on me that easily. Because then you got another thing coming." I heard Max say?
"I said shut up. I'm under control not you anymore." Max hissed
"You may have control over my body. But I have control over my mind." Max hissed? Ok now I'm confused. I looked even closer and saw a normal looking Max sitting on a tool table with a mocking look on her face. Wait two Maxes. But the thing I didn't notice was me yell
"Max!"
"WHAT DO YOU WANT MISTAKE." Eraser Max yelled.
"Angel, can you see me?" Max asked.
"I SAID SHUT UP." Eraser Max hissed at normal Max. But Max was still looking at me unfazed. But all I could was muster a single nod.
Normal Max POV
"YES." I yelled, "I can't believe you can see me. You know how boring it is following yourself around by force. I know your probably thinking that it would be fun, but it just gets boring after a while. Especially when you have so many fun retorts to say, but know one can here you say...whoa when did I become a Nudge." I said letting out a long breath. I then looked at Angel who was giggling softly, which gave her a confused look from Fang.
"No Fang she's not going insane. Is that what he was thinking?" I asked Angel.
"Yeah." Angel said outloud.
"I mean yeah" Angel thought.
"I think you should catch them up. Before they think your insane." I said
"Hey Max how come you look so calm." Angel asked
"I don't know. I think it's because nothing can hurt me in this state." I anwsered. That's kind of wierd and frustrating, now that think of it. I finally noticed that the whole flock was looking at Angel with there mouths a gaped.
"Yeah she's right there." Angel whispered and pointed to me. Everyone looked in the direction that I was in. Except for Fang who was looking at me directly like he could acutally see me. It even made shiver go down my spine.
"Hi." I said a little awkward.
"I'll tell them everything you say." Angel thought
"Hey." They whispered back.
"Ok don't worry guys. I'm fine just really bored." I said which gave me a few nods and small smiles. Except from, you guessed it Fang. So I walked over to Fang's cage and put a hand on one of the bars. Then he put his hand on the same bar, which made my hand all blurry. I guess Angel told him I moved.
"I'm holding on. Don't worry, just worry about the flock." I said.
"But how long can you hold on." He whispered
"For as long as I need too. She may have control over my body, but I have my mind." I said giving him a little smile.
"But what if you can't break out. What if I have too..." He whispered letting his voice trail.
"It's not going to happen. Just don't lose hope." I said.
"I SAID TO STOP TALKING." Eraser Max yelled and came over and grabbed on to my wrist sinking her claws into my arm. I let out a loud painful hiss, which Angel quickly noticed and said
"Stop it your hurting her."
"Like I care." Eraser Max growled and sunk them even deeper. I let out a blood curling scream and felt the cold, metal floor connect with my body.
"I said stop it." Angel yelled and looked at Fang who let out a low growl. Probably just hearing what was going down.
"Now, Ari said to take a quick syringe if I was having problems with you." Eraser Max said and pulled out a needle.
"NO!" The whole flock yelled at the same time. But it was to late she sunk it in her arm and pulled it out with a pleased grin.
"MAX!" Angel yelled seeing me start to fade.
"Don't worry Ang. I'll be back, she can't hold me down." I said giving her smile and then everything went black.
Please review and tell me how many chapters you want until Max breaks free. Trust me that will really help and if you do let's just say I will add a very helpful twist to help save our Max. Come on Review this is your chance to help save Max.