okay, so twilightchickgal33 stopped and whatever but i wasn't exactly pleasedw/ wat she wrote but oh well...
u can see wat she wrote in chap. 3 of her forge of my story, go to the link i put on the last chap...
so for ur July 4th (which will be in exactly 28 mins...) prezzie, u get a small preview of Chapter 11!!!!! Whoo;
"Edward," A sigh of relief escaped my lips as I saw the -ex- love of my life laying in the soft lawn of our meadow… our meadow. He looked beautiful; the gentle green grass embedded his figure perfectly, like the ground could engulf him at any moment. He lay with his hands behind his head looking up at the clouds, which at that moment parted, revealing the bright sun. The rays of light beamed down on us, making our skin glisten like gems. He slowly turned his head and smiled at me, but it didn't touch his eyes. (how many times has that line been used?)
"If your not going to leave then I will," he said, "if you don't love me." All I could do was gasp.
(Try saying that 10 times fast, loveofmylifelayingloveofmylifelayingloveofmylifelayingloveofmylifelayingloveofmy… WOW, I'm such a loser…)
(OMG, another one!!! Gentlegreengrassgentlegreengrassgentlegreengrassgentlegreen grassgentlegreengrassgentlegreengrassgentlegreengrassgentlegreengrass)