Hello, AlexC, and here is updates to the story and reason of slowness. I feel like there is no real jump to the story here, as I really don't know the balance between actions and plot. the storyline is where the Rift Rocket has not only travel from the RWBY and Fortnite universe but to others of such interest, rather it be gaming or a show. I'm also trying not to make it sound close to the one movie "Ready Player One", where it's just a mash up of every character in one movie and power is the main plot. I rather have them have value to each other and to the reader. Ruby is more mature when it comes down to her team but remains as the kooky girl who is interested in new stuff. Kureha having family problems where she is more of an outcast in the real world but the best in the virtual world of guns. and Reaper (Fortnite) have a better grip of both solo and teaming as he does with the Mission Specialist. What I'm trying to say is, I want the characters to be founded as a balance from the good to the bad side. I would also like to point out that there is a discord server where you can fully show me your OC(s) and chat with others with the same interest. it's a bit under construction but I want to get people together while I make them. I'm trying to figure out something for the non-discord users. If you still want to keep using the PM of FanFic then you're more than happy. also to cover up my slow story telling style. A Job. that is all. in other cases, I may not be able to do the story until either Monday - Wednesday. thank you and good readings
-AlexC
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P.S. Don't know why it still blocks the whole site but the end is correct, it is permanent if you just put Discord.