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Spottedmist - Fight Fight Fight!

Birdflame - Hollyripple did do something. -wink wink- But mostly because Finchstar did something bad. But also, I haven't found a warrior for Bluepaw also. c: I'm getting on that though.

Sunripple - Yup! Pshh Of course not. Bluepaw needs to learn how to remain strong. In my opinion of course.

Splinterclaw - Ooooooo

3Snow Fox3 - Hehehehe. Maybe kill you… in suspense.

Guest - Cliffhangers are my weapons. And Thanks!

Maplestrike - Who knows? Maybe because he's crazy.

CrystalStar of LightClan - Growl

Bluepaw struggled under Finchstar's claws. Each paw pressed on her shoulders, his hind leg pressing down on her tail. She hissed as Finchstar looked down, smugly.

"Not so tough now," he growled, his fangs a few centimeters away from her neck. Bluepaw widen her eyes in realization. Her blue-grey fur flatted in fear, her grey eyes bore into his green ones. Finchstar let out a hackled laugh, his claws crawling towards her neck. His brown and red patched fur bristling as he finished laughing. He leaned down, his fangs latching onto her scruff.

She let out a whimper, as he forced her onto on her belly. His paws clasped onto his haunches, as he brought her closer. She glanced over her shoulder and widen her eyes. His green eyes shadowed as he gripped her scruff tighter. He was going to mate with her!

"No!" cried Bluepaw trying to scramble away. "Please no! I'm too young," she yowled and tried to turn and scratch him. Finchstar let out a low growl and shoved her muzzle into the dirt. She whimpered softly, and pressed to the ground.

After 10 seconds, Bluepaw lifted her head. "What about Breezefern! She is expecting your kits!" She heard Finchstar shuffled and leap over her. She tucked her tail under her legs, glancing towards Finchstar. His brown and red fur laid flat down, his green eyes cleared. His face looked haunted as he took a step towards her.

"I'm so sorry-"

"Just stay away from me!" screeched Bluepaw and raced down. Her tail tucked tightly under her legs as she bounded from the den. Tears streamed down her face, as she bounded down the HighLedge. She saw the shooks of confusion and curiosity as they followed her out of camp. She raced to where she could only go. The Windclan Border. She stopped at the border, inhaling the rabbit scent of Windclan. She scanned the flat land, looking for any sign of Stormfang.

Her heart drooped, as she realized there was no Windclan nearby. She let out a hefty sigh, brushing the tears away with her paw. She felt violated. She tucked her tail between her legs again, and followed the border to the small patch of forest Windclan owned. She trotted back into the forest, follow her and Stormfang's old scents. She came into a clearing, smiling softly. There was a small pond, tree branches overhanging them. A single leaf danced down, and gently landed into the pool. She spotted the gnarled roots in the corner sheltered from any rain. Moss and feather intertwined to make their nest.

"Bluepaw?"

She spun around and saw the familiar pale grey pelt. With white patches. His dark blue eyes almost black bored into hers. She sniffed slightly, as Stormfang widen his eyes. He raced towards her, letting her rest her head in between his neck. He rested his chin on her head.

"Let it all out Bluepaw," he whispered licking her ear. His tail wounded around her, pulling her closer. She released the tears as she sobbed into his neck. A single tear dripped from her cheek and landed onto the ground. Turning the dirt a dark brown. After a few moments, Stormfang pulled away. He gently nudged her to the gnarled roots.

Bluepaw stepped inside the nest, immediately curling up. Her tail covering her nose as her body shaken with sobs. She peeked out, spotting an amused Stormfang.

"Are you going to move over for me?" he purred touching her cheek with his nose. Bluepaw let out a shakily laugh, scooting over a bit. She watched Stormfang step over over and curl beside her. He threw a paw over her, bringing her closer. She inhaled his sweet scent curling into him tighter. Her tears now forgotten as she let out a sigh.

"Stormfang, I have to talk to you."


Bluepaw was honest with him. How Finchstar raped her. How Aspenfall fallen in love with her. Her mother. Her sister. At the mention of her sister, Stormfang stiffed beside her. She knew he tried to change the subject, which she let him. But she couldn't help feeling suspicious. She shifted in her nest, accidentally brushing muzzles with him. His eyes flickered open, as he smiled softly. He reached over to lick her muzzle.

Bluepaw purred glancing up from Stormfang and to the sky. The sun was starting to set. Orange and red streaks started to cover the sky as the sun started to disappear behind the mountains. Bluepaw sat up, letting out sigh.

"Are you sure, you'll be alright?"

Bluepaw glanced at Stormfang who was already crawling out of the nest. His dark blue eyes were deep in sorrow and anger as he rubbed muzzles with him. Bluepaw gently pushed him away and saw a flare of hunger in his eyes but quickly disappeared. Her blue grey fur fluffed up against the cold. She narrowed her cold grey eyes as she glanced at Stormfang. He kept swiveling his head towards the sky and his paws kept shuffling.

"Somewhere you need to be," asked Bluepaw coldly staring at Stormfang. Stormfang merely stared at her in surprise.

"No of course-"

"Tell me the truth Stormfang," she pleaded quietly padding up to him. She pushed him on her back, planting her paws on his shoulders. Leaning back, she twined her tail with his. Stormfang just laid there quietly, staring up at her. His eyes glittered in the fading sunlight as he stared up at her.

Bluepaw.

His Bluepaw.

Bluepaw looked down at him with expecting. Her soft grey eyes staring into his. Stormfang gently pushed her off. He shook out his pelt, walking towards Bluepaw. He twined his body with hers, giving her a gently nibble on the ear.

"Bluepaw, I-I. Flamecloud's my mate. I-"

"You what? Love Flamecloud? She's expecting your kits," cut off Bluepaw, lashing her tail in defense. She pushed the pale grey tom away, muttering a curse.

"No! Bluepaw that's not true," he called after her. She heard his pawsteps pound behind her, as he leaped in front of her. Bluepaw looked up, her white paws digging the ground in anticipation. Anticipation to rake her claws against his face.

"Maybe that's why meeting other cat is bad. They will always betrayal you," she wailed softly shaking her head. She shoved Stormfang away, and marched out. She heard his calls get distant as she got closer to camp. Finally, she couldn't hear him anymore. She let out a sigh. Why couldn't relationships from other clans work out? She did love him. But did he love her.

She let out a shaky laugh. Of course not. He loved Flamecloud. Flamecloud that piece of crowfood. Her bright orange/ginger pelt. But yet her rogue identity. She stole Stormfang from her.

Bluepaw casted a glance behind her. Her eyes longing for the same pale grey pelt that pressed against her. Her heart tugging for her to belong to Aspenfall. She was torn in two. All that remained was…

Do I love Stormfang? Do I love Aspenfall?

"Bluepaw?"

She whipped her head forward, letting out a warning growl. She saw the shadow shrink away before slinking back up. Her cold grey eyes narrowed, as the shadow shifted and started coming towards her. She first spotted the white ear tips against the shadows and they angled towards her. Aspenfall.

His dark grey pelt blended in the shadows. She watched him come up in front of her. His muscles rippling along his pelt as he moved. She blinked in surprise as the fur bristled along his spine. Bluepaw took a step back, at his sudden angry expression.

"Where have you been?" he hissed angrily, staying hidden in the shadows. His only white ear tips visible against the black night. Bluepaw resisted the urge to snap at him.

"Walking. Clearing my mind," she lied. She was surprised how the lie slipped off her tongue. No remorse floated through her. She watched Aspenfall unsheathe his claws in and out, digging small gorges into the dirt.

"That's a Lie," he spat.

"No it isn't," she retorted, leaning on her heels. She sat in visible moonlight that escaped from the overhanging trees. Aspenfall took a step towards her, a growl rumbling in his throat.

"I watched you. From the first time you started meeting Stormpaw," he spat out Stormfang's name out like it was crowfood. "Then you kept meeting him. I knew you never loved me the way you loved him. When you were injured. I took care of you hoping for the chance you'd fall in love with me. Then I saw the way Finchstar abused you," Bluepaw flinched at him but he took no notice. "But instead of coming towards me. You went to him. Instead of me." He shook his head, letting out a small whine.

"I thought you'd forget him. Love me instead," he whined softly. But his voice got harder. "I stuck by you this whole time! And you choose him! From Windclan." He looked up, meeting a stunned Bluepaw.

"Then, move on. Go chase after Clouddust. Lilythorn. Anyone," mewed Bluepaw harshly seeing Aspenfall flinch back. He looked down, shaking his head.

"It hurts to love you. Bluepaw. First, the fox attack and now-"

"Then don't love me," retorted Bluepaw cutting him off. She was surprised at her coldness. She watched Aspenfall growl, his tail lashing.

"You mouse-brain. Cats care for you. But you won't see it. You reject cats that try to love and protect you," he hissed sharply, this time making Bluepaw flinch back. He let out a laugh. "I know what's wrong with you. Bluepaw. Your afraid. Afraid of love. But maybe you should be. Because now, you have no one loves you now."

With that, he lashed his tail and stalked away. The shadows swallowing him up. She felt an icy prick stab at her heart. She realized that he was right. No one, Stormfang. No Aspenfall. All she wanted was attention. Now she has none. She let out a whimper, staring at the place where Aspenfall disappeared. All those time, he watched her with Stormfang. He said nothing. He trusted her to tell him. And now, she destroyed his trust. And the rest of Thunderclan.

Bluepaw staggered back towards camp. Her heart broken in two. She slipped past the guard, and into the apprentice den. She saw Aspenfall already curled up in a nest, far away from hers. She stepped over a snoring Wolfclaw, and into her nest. Bluepaw curled up, flicking her nose over her tail. She laid back, letting out a sigh.

The sigh, woken up someone. A shadow started staggering towards her. Smaller than an apprentice. And walked with a limp. Leafkit. She watched the sleepy kit, step over Aspenfall's protective tail and walked towards her. She blinked the sleep out from her blue eyes and staggered towards her. She watched with amusement as Leafkit slipped on a twinge of moss. The blue-grey apprentice leaned up and picked up Leafkit.

The brown she-kit let out a squeak of surprise at the sudden lifting. Bluepaw settled Leafkit between her flank, giving Leafkit a lick on the ear. The kit let out a murmur before curling up beside her. Bluepaw wrapped her plumy tail around the kit bring her closer. Bluepaw smiled softly, before curling up as well. Exhaustion washing over her. Tears clouding her eyes as she closed them.


OMG! FINCHSTAR YOU JUST RAPED BLUEPAW! WHY! Why am I so mean to her. I mean, Aspenfall was that pair of eyes staring at them for the first meeting. And she stormed out on Stormfang for him admitting he might be seeing Flamecloud. Oooh! So much drama in this chapter. An update on Blood Path. I got writers block on it. :/

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