Hello, the author here, I want to say yet again thank you to the people (Suzza100 and FrankElza) for their lovely comments. I making it my mission to try and write as many chapters a I can between now and the 11th as I go to Disneyland Paris and the 12th and won't be able to update as I will be at work as soon as I get back then I start uni again on the 19th. So here is the first chapter of many to come over the next week.


After what felt like a life time the teens eventually made it to the National Park after having to stop another four times after leaving the mall due to people needing the toilet and others just wanting to stretch their legs.

Casey who practically lives for surfing said "Look at the surf. It looks amazing."

"God, you're right it does look amazing, I can't wait to get out there." Aden agreed "Maybe we should go out now before we set up camp?"

Belle turned to her boyfriend "No one is going surfing until we have set up camp!"

"Why not?"

"Yeah Belle. Why not?" Josh and Matt said together.

"If we let you all go surfing now you won't get out and that means we wouldn't get the tents up till it is pitch black and I don't about you but I personally don't fancy doing that." Sasha replied to the guys who were turning into whiny children with all the complaining.

"Fine but as soon as we are finished setting up we are hitting the beach before dinner." Casey told them not being too happy about having to wait before he hits the surf.

With that they teens started unloading everything. They all agreed that while they were taking the stuff to camp, one person would stay at the car park with all the stuff that the others couldn't carry and then once they had got the camp, one person would stay there why the others went back to the cars.

The person who was elected to stay with the cars was Kyle and the person who would stay at the camp would be Phoebe as the other teens thought that this meant they couldn't start making out again when they were meant to be helping. With that sorted the teens grabbed what they could and walked off in the direction of 'base camp' (as Oscar had decided to call it), leaving Kyle to his own devices.

Not long after the other teens had left Kyle, Ray turned the corner to see all the cars parked and that Kyle was stood on his own. Stopping the car, Ray watched to see what his own personal TV show was up to and though himself.

I can't believe for the first time since I started following the kid, he's actually alone. Maybe I should just go grab him now and stuff him in the boot of the car and go meet the boss man. Although I don't know where the rest of those brats are and I can't risk that kid from the food court seeing me again and thinking that I'm following them. Which I know I am but I don't need them to know that, do I? No I will wait don't fancy getting in trouble with the boss when he's paying me a lot of money to follow Kyle and God knows I need that money I have two children to feed and clothe.

Suddenly Ray was pulled from his thoughts when he saw the other brats appear from no where.

"Hey Kyle! We got a good spot." April said as she walked over to her friend.

"Oh cool, where?" Kyle answered her back

"You know that lake we discovered last time we were here?"

"Yeah, we didn't find it till the last day and we were all disappointed as we could have gone swimming in the lake if we had known how close it was to the campsite."

"Well we've set up camp halfway between the lake and obviously here so we didn't have to far to walk."

"That's actually a pretty good idea April."

"Aww thank you Kyle. I thought it was too. Anyway let's grab everything else as I think between the thirteen of us we can carry the rest of the stuff back to camp. Don't you agree?"

"Totally agree with you on that front. Josh we should get all the boards inside your camper van." Kyle shouted to Josh as he saw him appear from behind the bushes.

"Yeah ok then that's get the other stuff out of it first I think we can pretty much leave the volleyball set here as well." Josh replied.

"Yeah let's leave that here."

The guys started unloading the camper van by putting the food and drinks boxes on the floor while the others started collecting the remaining items from the cars. Once the camper van was empty, carefully Kyle, Josh, Casey and Aden took the surf boards of the top and handed them to Matt and Oscar who was waiting to put them in the van.

"Be careful Oscar!" Casey shouted as he saw Oscar nearly drop his side of the surfboard.

"Sorry it slipped." Oscar replied.

Finally, all the boards had been taken off the top of the camper van and carefully placed inside (without Oscar nearly dropping anything else) and the volleyball set was put back inside as well. Kyle picked up his guitar, swung his backpack on to his shoulders and followed his mates towards 'base camp'.

Eventually after what felt like ages to Kyle, they arrived to see Phoebe had already put one tent up and was starting on the next one.

"Wow!" All the teens said together.

"What? If you think I was just going to wait until you all got here, before I started then you should have thought again." Phoebe replied shocked that her friends though she would just wait for them to get back.

"Well, why don't we help you now or would you rather we just left you to it Pheebs?" Casey asked her hoping she would say that she didn't need any help and they could head back to the car park and beach.

"Ehh, I know what your up to Casey Braxton."

"What is that Pheebs?"

"You just want me to do this so you can go surfing., but guess what?"

"What?"

"You are not going anywhere until we have finished here, so you better put that stuff down and make a start on the rest of the tents and somebody should go and collect enough wood for the fire."

Knowing that they weren't going anywhere anytime soon the teens all set about setting up the two big tents while some people went to collect firewood.

About forty-five minutes later the camp was all finished and they even put hung the battery powered fairy lights around the camp so they always had light at night (as they all agreed that they could just turn them off during the day so they didn't waste the battery life).

"Can we hit the beach now?" Xavier asked the girls.

The first to respond was Maddy "Yes you guys can hit the beach now, considering everything is done here and while you are all at the beach we can cook Kyle's birthday meal."

"Eventually come on guys lets go, before they change their minds and make us stay here as well." Josh told the other six guys as he dropped his phone in the guy's tent and grabbed his car keys and started to walk off in the direction of the beach.

Quickly the other guys did the same and followed him ignoring the girls call to come back and get at least one phone.