Story:
Misunderstood by Bda241
Star Rating:2 out of 4 stars
Review: The award winning story may be a favorite to audiences around and has a good reason to. Acclaimed with its plot and characters. It was established as an instant classic. But this is a first story. There are bound to be errors. Let's begin:
In the teenage years of Gumball Watterson, he has it all: the love of his love, friends, family, the good life. But someone didn't like it too well. They hatch a plan to rid him out of town, for good. When he is accused of vandilizing the school, he is taken away and nearly no one believes. Not his girlfriend, not his mother, nearly all of his friends think he is public enemy number one. He is soon taken away, but manages to get away. A runaway fugitive, aided by the advice of a former convict, now hides in the nearby town with a family to take him, with an alias.
The story has an interesting plot with mesmerizing characters that can grip you with emotion and has a good background story and makes you feel emotion. This story is lovable and scores big with others.
I'm not complaing about the grammar, but the story seems too short an doesn't give us enough time to match wits and to understand this better. We also have a plot hole with a nearby town that no one bothers to check. Along with the old cliche of parents not believing the children. We also have hate towards the other characters but doesn't give much satisfaction to other characters.
Summary: Bda241 has a story that can't be ignored, but it's not perfect. We have characters that live to its potential but can't seem to add up other thoughts and plot holes. You will get enjoyment, until you really start to think about this story.
~ I'm Fan Fiction Critic/Reviewer Henry Peters