Dear readers:
Unlike most authors, I would really LIKE to have some Flame reviews so i can tell what Im doing well and what I'm doing poorly. I hate people who hold back chapters for reviews, but I'm holding back this chapter for a flame. for those of you who dont know, a flame is a really bad, extremely rude review telling the horrid parts of this story. also, I would like to know if while reading this story, it is obvious that english is not my first language.... just out of curiosity.
much love,
EIMHB