A/N: I always write the author's notes after I finish writing the whole chapter…and this one was kind of difficult for me to know where to leave it. But I think that after this…some things are going to explode. Yeah, I mean it. And I had to update this one because it has been eating my brains since I ended the last one. And be prepared for my final notes at the end of this chapter…because I don't know what you'll think about the story after this…and I want your opinions, ok?
And the Gaara x Hinata thing seems like is eating your brains out…and that's good. I'm thinking in too many things to do in Suna.
Aisuruitachiwakoi—I missed your reviews! But I'm glad that you're back and…you reviewed all three! Oh my… Ok, first I want to see that Gaara x Hinata picture! I hope to see it soon. And about the 'I Don't like blondes' thing…I made it to make clear that Hinata in my story NEVER had a crush on Naruto…only that…and I LOVE blondes too, but dark haired are the hottest. (Sorry Yuki…) and your conclusion about Itachi…that was good…really good…
Jigoku Hoshi—I know that I have a LOT of grammar mistakes…that's why I write on the disclaimer that my grammar and spelling were mean and evil. Yeah, a lot of explanation…but I hope that it was good enough for you. sorry again for the grammar mistakes again.
Tsnade—yes...I know that somehow this is getting annoying with the characters hiding their emotions. But if you look closely to the manga or the series…they are mostly like that.
Blue-Shine-Angel—Here's the update…hope you like it.
kenshinlover2002—Now that I think about it, Hinata has a lot of secrets…but you'll know them little by little. Let's hope that Sasuke does something about her and Gaara…and soon.
Lems—thanks a lot for correct me about the Kazekage thing…I was quite confused about it and finally someone noticed it and helped me…THANKS…and the photo album thing will be a great piece of the puzzle on this story…so never forget the album photo.
Qii-chain—Hinata is not mysterious about liking Gaara…is true…Gaara is "kind" of cute (Gaara is too lovely to hate him, is true).
Kichou—I see that the photo album caught your attention…good…you'll hear more of it in future chapters.
Rcr—OMG…are you studying psychology or something! Because your review was awesome! And I love to read long reviews so don't worry. and yes, I believe that Sasuke is getting possessive and too jealous…and I love it. I want him to fight for real for her…to really try if he really cares…who knows if only is for his 'macho' pride only and not love...anything is possible in this world. And he 'poor' Naruto is getting the result of that…LOL and I never though that her admission that she liked dark haired men will guide everyone to Itachi…WOW.
Creynoso—Thanks for your review and let me tell you that in this chapter is mentioned another novel and the author is Mathew Lewis…great one. Hope that you can find them on amazon or in your library…but I bought all of the in "Borders"…so good luck. And about last chapter…I made it thinking how it would happen in the anime…and I had a hard time writing it…I'm glad that you liked it and that you laughed about it…I can be funny sometimes don't you think?
Gaaraluvv—Is my grammar getting better! Well, that would be a miracle, because I feel that every time is getting worse…really. I see that you liked the 'so short' comic/funny scenes…I don't wanted to bring you tension all the time, even if this is completely an angst…I must level with something else sometimes, right? And you'll see a lot MORE of Gaara here…I promise!
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Chapter 20
Birds…
Sasuke woke up earlier than ever, and like the rest of the guys there was a secret mission…ruin Hinata and Gaara's time alone. After bathing and dressing, they hurried to get their breakfast when they noticed that some servants were taking out a pair of dishes.
"Uh…what happened here?" asked Kiba, hoping that it wasn't what he though. Then one of the servants looked at them and explained. "Good morning. Kazekage-sama and Hinata-sama already left for their important work. They requested to not be molested today unless is absolutely necessary since they're going to be quite busy today."
At this they looked impressed…so Hinata knew somehow what there their plans were and woke up earlier? They would never know….
Meanwhile…
Hinata and Gaara have been completely focused on their work…well no completely. Time on time they gave glares at the other…and acting like it was something weird. After some time acting like this, Hinata finally decided to speak, "You shouldn't get comments too much on your head Gaara."
Gaara looked up at her in confusion, "Can you explain what you said, Hinata?"
"Gaara…I know that you were on the other side of the bathroom with the others."
By this Gaara tried to keep his cool, but he couldn't…his face showed surprise and it was too evident to deny. "But, how…"
"Gaara-sama I'm an ANBU captain. There were too many chakras on the other side of the wall in constant stress by everything that I said yesterday…too obvious." By her response, he though about it and it was true. They're maybe experienced ninjas, but if it was a case of spying, they could be caught too easily.
"And since you knew that we were there all the time, did you lied in purpose?" it was a direct question and he didn't wanted misunderstanding with her, not at all.
"I can't tell lies Gaara-sama and besides, I don't think that I said anything wrong…right?" she asked back a little bit concerned. But seeing that he still looked cool and collected, she felt more secure. "Not at all, you're quite sincere and that's what it matters." And with that they continued with their work…
Sasuke and the others were in front of trunks that were placed at the middle of the training room throwing shurikens and kunais. It was a basic exercise, but it had its purpose. And it was good…since Kiba draw the Kazekage's face on them. Naruto decided to not practice this time, only watch. But when he saw that Sasuke didn't minded and was quite abusive with the poor trunk, he got worried. Maybe he's stressed since we are here and can't do anything without Hinata's orders. Or perhaps is that…he hates her after all.> thought the blonde nin, when a question pop out of his brain…and he had to ask it.
"Um…do you think that Hinata will find out about us peeking at her conversation with Temari?" when his question finished, the training stopped. The rest of the men looked at him surprised and then smiled. "I doubt it…but now that you talk about it…." said Shino, while he started to think. "What, what is it Shino?" asked Kiba while taking the shurikens that were on the trunk. "Maybe she knows it now…from Gaara's mouth."
"What the heck you mean by that."
"That maybe Gaara can use it on his own purpose. He can say that he knew form his brother Kankuro that we were overhearing her conversation with Temari."
"And why do you care if she finds out? She said nothing important you know." Responded Sasuke, he was quite worried and it came worst when he never though in that possibility. "Because she can think that we don't trust her at all, or that we were sent to spy on her by Konoha's council." After mentioning this, Kiba walks away from the training room with strong footsteps. "Kiba…where are you going?" asked Naruto, concerned of another confrontation. "I'm going to tell Hinata the truth before that bastard does it in his own words." And the rest followed him…
Hinata and Gaara finished their paperwork finally and now they were resting on his office…reading. Gaara suddenly looked up at Hinata and noticed that she was already on the half of the book that he gave her last night. "Fast reader?" he asked out of nowhere. Hinata looked up at him and responded since she knew what he meant, "I couldn't resist of not reading since you gave it to me and started reading it right away…I even felt asleep on it."
"Like last night? You can get into trouble if you keep doing that."
"I like to read…that's how I learn. And besides, what else I can do in this place Kazekage-sama?" asked the ANBU captain, raising an eyebrow.
Gaara saw this as a challenge, he saw that he still had some official Suna documents to work with…but he can do that later. He stood up from his chair and went directly to Hinata. When she looked up to see him in front of her, he didn't give her change to respond and took her by her wrist and pulled her out of her comfy chair.
"Kazekage-sama, what are you doing?"
"Call me Gaara and I want to show you something…" and after saying this he opened a window…
In that moment, Temari opened the door with Kankuro at his side to check how it was going everything. Then they saw an empty office and an opened window.
After that Kiba and the others stepped behind them, "Move a side, we want to see…Hinata…" and when they saw the same scene that the siblings did…a certain Uchiha activated his sharingan. With no more comments, the group runs towards the window got out to see any sign of Hinata or Gaara…
And they found them on the roof of the tower…
Hinata held his hand, telling him something….
And when they managed to climb on the roof…
Both Kazekage and captain jumped from the roof.
"HINATA!" screamed her team while running to see where they fell, and when they looked down…something came up…
A giant black bird came out of nowhere…carrying Hinata and Gaara on its back. Hinata was riding it while Gaara was behind her. The people of Suna stop doing their chores to see the giant bird on the sky, flying side to side of the city…
"Is true Gaara…this place is beautiful!" screamed Hinata while the bird flew higher. For Gaara was a different story, he was used to stood in high altitudes with his sand under him…but riding an animal…it was a different story. Noticing this Hinata decided to help him a little.
"Gaara…did you trust me!" asked Hinata while the bird flew higher, making the city look smaller and smaller.
"WHAT!"
"IF YOU TRUST ME!"
"OF COURSE I DO!"
And after reading this the bird started to fly straight…in a calmly way. In that moment Hinata stands up on the bird and moves around. "Hinata what are you doing?"
"You're going to ride him?"
"WHAT?"
"You heard me…"
"But Hinata…I don't know…why?"
"Because," and while doing this Gaara was placed on the front and Hinata was behind him, and embraced him from behind. And she whispered to him, "…I trust you."
In a micro-second the once giant bird turns into millions of little birds and the two ninjas fell from the sky. They were on an extremely high and now the fall was going to be fatal…
"OH SHIT…GAARA…HINATA!" screamed Naruto when they saw what just happened. "We have to catch them…" responded Sasuke. "…but how?"
"I can summon the giant frog…they can help them!" responded the blonde nin. "But at that altitude…only if the damn frog is enormous…they'll die from the impact."
"Damn…" responded Naruto…knowing that his biggest frog was a little bigger than the tower. Even Jiraya's not big enough either…>
Up in the sky, two ninjas were still falling. Somehow Hinata made it to catch Gaara's hand and get each other closer. In that moment he remembered about the sand…he didn't have his gourd on him…but he can so something about it. seeing his intentions, Hinata held his hands tighter. "I told you that I trust you and I still! Just remember the name of the crow!"
"HINATA…"
"JUST DO IT…I KNOW THAT YOU REMEMBER! PROVE IT GAARA…"
Not knowing what else to do, he closed his eyes and started to remember…while they jumped from the tower…she screamed something, but he couldn't tell what.
The bird is a crow…
It was dark as night…
Dark as night…
It was…
"its name…I got it…its name is…RAVEN!"
…and the millions of bird formed under them the giant crow again and catch them from falling under the impressed look from their friends on the roof of the Suna tower.
"See I knew that I can trust you." responded Hinata, who was embracing him again.
The bird got closer to the Suna tower until it landed on the roof. When they got down of it, it turned into a normal size crow and flew to Hinata's shoulder. "Hinata…Gaara…can you tell me WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT! YOU SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME!" screamed Temari, making them cover their ears for a second.
"It was just that I showed Hinata how the city looked from the roof of the tower and she wanted to show me the city fro the sky." Responded simply the Kazekage…making the rest twitch their eyebrows by this. "And since when you can summon that bird Hinata?" asked Naruto, his face looked more serous than usual.
Hinata stop caressing the crow to look at him, "I don't understand your question Uzumaki."
"I saw you turning into a giant crow like that one in the fight against Orochimaru. But this…"
"Well, let's think about it shall we? So, since you're Jiraya's apprentice, you can summon frogs as well. Tsunade's apprentice, I can bet that she knows how to summon that thing and I can bet too that the Uchiha can summon snakes as well." by this they look at Sasuke and with an 'hn' confirms it.
"If all that is possible…then why you ask such a stupid thing?" and by this she walks to Gaara. "I saw some interesting shops…I'll be visiting them. So, if you excuse me..."
"In that case I'll go with you," responded Gaara, "and I guide you where I got most of my collection." Hinata looks at him a little surprised, she didn't expected that.
"But you're busy…"
"That can wait…"
"But I don't want to get in the way…"
"You're my guest and that's final" seeing that she can't argue any longer, she accepted. Seeing the faces of her teammates, she had to do something. "You can come with us too if you want."
Thinking that they'll say yes, Naruto steps forward but Kiba's response shocked him…a lot… "We are actually in the middle of our training, we can visit the city tomorrow. I hope that you don't mind." Responded politely Kiba making the others turn their eyes white by his response, "Well, if that is your decision, is ok I guess. You need training." And with this Hinata and Gaara leave to the city.
Then Hinata stops, and turns around, "By the way, why did you come to the office?" Kankuro and Temari looked at each other and responded. "Well, we usually check on Gaara to see if he needs something or not." but then their eyes were on the Konoha team.
"Sorry Temari-sama, Kankuro-sama…but I meant about my team. Why you came to the office?" to this the guys went silent. Kiba, the one who planned to go to the office in the first place was looking elsewhere, leaving the others with the problem. Suddenly, Naruto pushes Shino forward to answer. "We were planning to ask you to practice with us, but since you're going out with Gaara is ok."
"I see…are you sure?"
"YES!" screamed suddenly Kiba, "You go out…you've been working too much with paperwork and you two need some rest…right guys?" and the rest nodded. Hinata didn't know if she should believe in them, or not. but decided to leave it this time, "Ok, but I promise to make up to you later." And with this she leaves beside Gaara.
Then the group returned through the window and after Temari and Kankuro leaved, they started to talk. "Thank you so much Kiba for leaving us." Muttered with sarcasm Naruto, "Don't you understand what I did, don't you?" asked Inuzuka, getting a dead glare fro the others. "I don't know what you did Kiba but you acted like a coward. Now Hinata is in a date with Gaara."
Sasuke, who hadn't said a thing since Gaara's 'invitation' and Kiba's response was thinking about what will happen between those two. I can't believe that I left her with him. I should push the dope to ask to go but no…my pride didn't let me…> and now his pride was hurt…again. back in reality, he heard Kiba's response.
"Listen, Hinata and Gaara thinks that we are going to train right?"
"Right." Responded the rest at the same time.
"Now we can follow them without suspect at all. We can track them…and if anything happens…ruin it." finished Kiba with his 'brilliant'…plan?
"I don't know guys. If Hinata and Gaara have mutual interest we must leave them with their life…and besides…"
"Besides what Naruto." Asked Shino worried. "Is about what we saw today…the bird…"
"Ah, come on." Groaned Sasuke, not seeing importance about it. "What about the freaking bird."
"Well, you see…" and after this he swallowed hard, he didn't now how Sasuke will react about this and decided to say in his more serious tone ever. "Back when we went to find the Akatsuki to rescue Gaara…we confronted Itachi…" after saying this Sasuke got all his attention about it.
"What about it Naruto."
"He made clones and jutsu…based on crows…" and then Naruto turned to see Sasuke, his eyes turned into sharingan. "…but who knows. Maybe it was coincidence…"
"Shut up…you know that is not possible." Responded Sasuke, now it made sense! If Hinata was actually capable of do that summon jutsu it means one of two things. One is that she was capable to do it since she was young due to her talents…or two…that she kept training with him until…> suddenly he felt that everything in his mind was mixing…this can't be happening…
"And why you are worried about it? Itachi is dead now…" interrupted Shino.
"Is not about Itachi…"
"Then what is it?"
"I don't know…maybe we shouldn't get in their way…"
"Just think Naruto, if instead of Hinata it was Sakura who was dating right now with Gaara. What you'll do?" Asked Kiba, "…Let's go…" responded Naruto while the rest followed him in direction to the main city of Suna…
Gaara and Hinata went through the stores of Suna along with the surprised look of the people of the city.
"Is that the Kazekage?"
"Yes…but who is she?"
"Yeah, I never saw her before."
"I don't know but they look good together."
"That's true."
Gaara was listening to most of the comments and looked at Hinata at his side to see if she was uncomfortable with this. She looked quite relaxed…more like ignoring everything that was said around them. She suddenly looked at him with her eyebrows raised. "Something's wrong Gaara-sama?"
In that moment he woke up of his daydreaming and shook his head, "Nothing, here is where I get my collections." And both entered into the store, without noticing a group of Konoha ninjas were following them.
Naruto: "Do you think that they saw us?"
Shino: "I don't know, both are experimented shinobi."
Kiba: "And besides they're TOO busy with each other to look around, that's the weak spot."
Naruto: "But what's the plan…spy them all day? He is not going to kill her for Kami's sake! Are you with me Sasuke? ...Sasuke?"
And when they looked around, Sasuke disappeared from the group. "Great, he had to take the damn opportunity to escape! Now we have to search for him before we have no choice but tell her." Ordered the blonde nin, with the agreement of Shino and Akamaru, while Kiba was still watching the entrance of the book store.
"You search for him while I keep watching…" and then Shino grabbed Kiba's ear and pulled out. "Don't you hear? Sasuke is gone, and I we don't find him soon we'll have to explain Hinata HOW we missed him." With this the Inuzuka opened his eyes wide and understood, leaving the place to search for the Uchiha…
An hour later Hinata and Gaara went out of the store. "I apologize for being too much time there, but I never thought to find soo much variety compared to Konoha." Said Hinata while putting a small piece of paper on a pocket. "Never mind, it happened to me the first time, but I see that you got almost all the copies that I have on my room. They'll arrive on the tower tomorrow." Mentioned Gaara
"Great, I'm crazy to read the one that I started to read there."
"You mean 'The Monk'? The story is a little complicated, but you'll be impressed at the end." Responded the Kazekage while looking forward, by this Hinata frowned.
"You mean that you already have it?"
"It was one of my first ones."
"…Where have you been all my life…" muttered Hinata while they kept walking through the streets. Then a group of kids playing 'ninja' stopped when they spotted the couple. "Kazekage-sama… Kazekage-sama!" screamed the kids who stopped in front of them.
Gaara and Hinata stopped due that the kids were on their way, making them look down. "What is it?" asked Gaara trying his best to not being meant…they were kids after all. Then one of the kids looked at Hinata. "We never saw you walking around with someone, who is she?"
In that moment he looked back at Hinata who was going to respond when he interrupted. "She is Captain Hinata from the ANBU force of Konoha; she came to Suna for official duties." Then one of the girls looked at her and frowned, "Oh…so…is she your girlfriend?"
In that moment he looked at the girl directly…why she thinks such a thing? "And why do you think such a thing?" he demanded more than a question.
"Because you are carrying her bags, and my brother does that to his girlfriend all the time."
In that moment he looked at his hands and it was true. He was holding most of the bags, "Is not what you think…"
"Then why?"
"Because I'm being a gentleman, that's all."
"But I saw you shopping with Temari-sama before and you never…"
"…don't you kids playing before you spotted us?" asked Hinata, getting a scowl from the boys. "We weren't playing…we were training."
"But if you keep talking to us it would look more like a game. I'm a captain…and I know about it." by this the boys pulled the girls with them and run away to continue with their train/game thing. After they were long gone, they resumed walking.
"I though that they'll never leave." Commented Gaara while taking a deep breath, "I never thought that the Kazekage will end up arguing in the middle of the street with a seven year-old kid." Responded Hinata in a comical tone. Then he looked at his hands, still holding the bags.
"Can you tell me why I'm carrying the bags?" he asked while raising an eyebrow. "Because I was going to carry them but YOU MISTER insisted to take them instead." She responded, seeing what will be his next action. "I see…" he finally responded, taking another street.
"Gaara, where are we going?"
"I want you to see this; you never came to Suna if you never visited this place…"
"Ok…"
"Naruto, any sign of the bastard?" asked Shino while releasing some of his bugs, "No a trace, the bastard must be hiding somewhere." Then Kiba with Akamaru appeared, "We either, we need a piece of his cloth or something because is like going out there blind."
"I don't have anything with me right now, but we can return to his room and take something of his belongings." responded the blonde nin. "That is if Sasuke hadn't already got there and retrieved his stuff to leave." Responded Shino.
"That can't be happening…we have to find him! You know what is going to happen when Hinata finds out?" asked Kiba, while Shino just shook his head. "She'll be pretty pleased."
"What do you mean?" asked Naruto.
"Remember that Hinata's duty about Sasuke's case was of hunter. If he ever runs away or turns into a threat she can kill him…" and with this his eyes opened wide. "Shino keep looking, you too Kiba. I need Akamaru to get into the tower the fastest as he can." Orders Naruto, normally Shino and Kiba never listened to his orders, but this time it was worth it…Hinata would kill Sasuke if they didn't find him first…
"Is this Shuukaku's temple?" asked Hinata while looking at the huge building, the symbol of the giant sand kyuubi adorned almost everything around it with statues and seals, like a way to keep the creature there. "Yes, come in." gestured the Kazekage while they entered the temple. Hinata noticed that there were some people that were praying to the giant Shuukaku statue at the end of the hall. "Are they praying for Shuukaku? But I though…" muttered Hinata. Why people would pray to a demon? Is weird…>
After seeing the statute for a while Gaara responded, "They don't pray to Shuukaku, they pray to keep him there. they pray to not have another …'vessel' with him…" after saying this, they kneeled in front of the figure and started to pray. The rest of the people on the temple started little by little to leave the place…it must be getting late.
Either Hinata or Gaara noticed this they kept there silent until Hinata spoke, "Did you miss him?" she asked in a low voice, for respect. Gaara opened his eyes and stopped the ritual to look at her.
"What did you said?"
"Did you miss Shuukaku…"
At this he looks down and frowns at himself…why this of all sudden? "That doesn't matter…"
"It is…" now Hinata had her eyes opened too and looked around. Seeing that they were completely alone she continued. "It matters a lot, he was inside of you."
"Is safer having him there instead in me..." Responded simply Gaara, he needed to give an end to the topic now. "I'm not talking about safety Gaara, I mean if you ever wanted him out." Hinata knew that she was pushing a subject, but she needed to know.
"I was a demon that wasn't accepted by the others, and now people are not afraid of me like before."
"So for what other people can give you with condition you decided to take him out?"
"I didn't take him out, Akatsuki did…"
"And the council decided to leave it like that, right?"
"Hinata, what are you trying to tell me?" asked Gaara looking directly at her eyes…he never did it until now. "I'm not trying to say anything Gaara. What I'm only asking is that if you ever REALLY felt alone. Now without him, did you feel complete? Did you feel like your true-self again? Did you like the change? Did you feel protected? Did you feel…" suddenly Hinata had to stop asking due to Gaara's face…she found out that she hit in a very sensitive topic, she went too far.
"I'm sorry Kazekage-sama…I went too far…" with this Gaara took her hand and held it tight. "You know what Hinata?" asked Gaara while looking at the statute of Shuukaku.
"…you're the first person who ever asked me that…who got worried about what I felt about it. And to tell you the truth…I was never asked to, that's why…"with this he stands up, helping the ANBU captain do the same.
"I need you to make me a favor…and I believe that you have the strength to do it…"
After gathering Sasuke's scent, Kiba and Akamaru started to search again. it was getting late and no sign of the Uchiha yet, "He hadn't left the city yet, that's for sure." Said Kiba while he was still running through the roofs of the city. "If that is true, then why he hadn't found him yet!" asked Naruto.
"Maybe he really wanted not be part of our peeking plan and went to see the city. And knowing that we will be over him all the time…he wanted to be alone." explained Shino.
Kiba and Naruto: But you were the one who though about him leaving Suna!>
"Still, is getting dark and most of the stores are closed. Where he can be?" asked Naruto. "Maybe he went to…you know…have fun?" wondered Kiba,
"But he had a girl in Konoha! That would be…like…cheating!"
"That doesn't mean that he cares for her. And besides, he is without her in Suna for like three weeks…he must be addicted to it by now."
"Addicted to sex…is that possible?"
"Well, he was obsessed with power before…any difference?"
By this Naruto shakes his head and continues the search…
Gaara and Hinata had been in the temple for like three hours and finally came out in a cloud of smoke. Gaara was stepping weakly "Gaara…are you ok?" asked Hinata while she was holding him with one arm and the other with the bags. She had in the end to leave them on the floor to help Gaara better.
He recovered back his strength and then looked back at her. "I'm better now…" and with this he takes her by her waits and spins her around. "Gaara…don't…Gaara!" and after a couple of spins he put her back on her feet.
"It seems that your strength is back…amazing…" she said looking directly at his eyes. "Yeah…amazing…" responded the Kazekage looking at hers.
And the unthinkable happened.
Gaara pinned Hinata suddenly against of the nearest wall and kissed her. Instead of fighting him back…she stood there, frozen by his actions. And slowly she started to respond to it, caressing his short red hair.
And while this was happening, a pair of sharingan was looking at the scene…and that same sharingan transformed into Mangekyou…
A/N: Yes…believe it or not…Hinata and Gaara kissed…and Sasuke saw it. What will happen now? It will mean problems to come.
And the mention of crows in this chapter is due that in one of the manga chapters, Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi meet Itachi again and he makes clones based on crows…I don't know if that was illusion…but it was soo cool that I never left my mind…
And now with the BIG news…next chapter will have a LEMON. And you'll be asking…how dare you! Well yes…it will have a lemon…but who knows with whom I'll make it…I already know the pairing, duh.(Evil laugh…Orochimaru style…)
The situation that I left this chapter will make things more complicated…yeah I know. How I can think of a lemon with the entire angst thing happening here! Well, as you'll see in NEXT chapter…it will work fine like last time.
And like last time…if you don't want to read lemons, don't like them…or any reason that you may have…just don't read the chapter! In my first lemon, I received e-mails complaining about it…if you're going to flame me for it…post it on the reviews section. I won't delete them…since I don't know how…LOL!
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