Well, here we are. The last chapter of One For All (Redux) I hope you guys enjoyed this story. There's not much to really say other than I missed two reviews from my last story. WHICH I APOLIGIZE IN ADVANCE! I just forgot to save them and I'm so sorry. So lets get right into them.
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Everything begun to become crystal clear as the whole group opened their eyes and saw multiple bright lights illuminate the room they were in. "Are we dead?" Qwark asked. The whole group, except for Jordan, begun to inspect themselves and from what they felt and saw...
They were alive!
The whole group got up and took a few deep breaths, knowing that they were indeed alive as they heard Elaris on their communicators. "Welcome back Rangers! Good job!" Elaris cheered.
"So cadet? How many planets will I have to save before anyone will like me again?" Qwark asked Ratchet.
"You know Qwark. You don't have to do big things to be a hero. Just the right ones." Ratchet said, causing the Captain to smile at the Lombax. Maybe he was right after all.
"It is curious that the sudden cessation of velocity relative to our inertia did not cause either of you to-" Clank was stopped as Ratchet emptied his stomach all over the floors of the Phoenix. Qwark and Clank covered their eyes. "Oh dear." Clank finished.
"Don't worry cadet. It happens to the best of-" Qwark then emptied his stomach all over the Phoenix as well. Qwark then got up from his seat and stumbled over to the Phoenix's lavatory. "Oh god that was terrible." he said before leaving the three creatures.
Ratchet recovered. "At least my buddy has a belly of Raritanium. Isn't that right?" Ratchet looked over and saw his wounded friend. He saw him reach his hand up and try to remove the blade, but to no avail. Ratchet gasped in shock.
As Qwark left the bathroom of the ship, he saw the Lombax running as fast as he could down the hallway with the Human in his arms. Qwark turned his head, wondering what the Lombax was doing, but gasped as he saw the blade in the Human's chest. "Help me Qwark!" Ratchet yelled. They both carried the Human all the way over to the ships emergency room and laid him on the bed where Brax use to sit. Since he was still in the hospital getting his arm fixed, there was no problem on using a different bed.
All of the rangers rushed over to where the figures were to congratulate them on their victory. Unfortunately, this party would have to hold as they saw the Lombax and Markazian preparing the Human for transport to the hospital. "What did you do to him?!" Cora yelled as she pointed her Combustor at the large alien.
"Lets not worry about that now! He's hurt real bad!" Ratchet yelled. Time was of the essence as Ratchet begun to command all of the rangers to do different things to keep the Human alive. "Elaris got get me the Nanotech!" Ratchet commanded. Elaris rushed to the supply closet of the Phoenix and got the pink Nanotech. In the meantime, Ratchet tried desperately to feel for the Human's pulse to find the Human's veins. However, he didn't know anything about first aid and didn't know where to begin. Cora shoved the Lombax aside and immediately found the pulse in the Human, successfully finding Jordan's veins.
Once the Nanotech and the IV was ready, Cora his left arm and injected the tube.
All that was left to do now was pray and keep the Human awake as they begun their transport to the hospital. Cora was now in command of the entire group as she looked towards Elaris. "Engage the hyperdrive." she said.
"What?!" the whole group said.
"Don't act like I'm crazy, just do it!"
"Cora the hyperdrive hasn't been fully tested. And besides we should be able to reach Allero City in about-"
"I don't think he's gonna have enough time! Now move!" Elaris didn't say a word as she rushed over to the main cockpit of the Phoenix. She started pressing buttons to calculate the planets coordinates and prepare the jump to hyperspace. "Everybody hold on!" she yelled from her seat as she engaged the Hyperdrive in 3...2...1...
Suddenly, the ship flew 68 times faster than the speed of light as it zoomed through space. Elaris now told the rangers they should be at Allero City in about 30 seconds.
Meanwhile, Ratchet, Sophia, Clank, and Cora stayed by their Human friend and made sure he stayed awake. Despite the many times they told him to stay awake, they saw him slip away as he closed his eyes.
25 seconds later...
They finally reached Allero City and without a single citizen noticing the ship, the group got the Human ready for transport to the hospital. Cora released the beds wheels and they quickly rushed the Human down the ramp and rammed the hospital doors open.
All of the citizens inside cheered for their entrance, with none of the Rangers even stopping to greet the civilians. Cora rushed over to the doctor and told them they needed into the ICU stat. "We need in the ICU now!" Cora yelled to the doctor.
The robotic nurse looked over the desk and saw the blade sticking out of the rangers chest. "Oh my!" she yelled. The nurse then guided Cora and Jordan to the ICU and all of the doctors prepared to move the Human onto the now sanitized operation table. Once they moved him, all of the doctors began to argue if they should use anesthesia or not. But Cora argued that there was just no time for it, she could feel the Human's pulse slipping away. Next, they had to remove the blade, seeing it's the only way in order for the Nanotech to do its magic. So Cora and the nurses held the handle and on the count of three, they pulled, causing the poor Human to moan in pain as blood spewed from his now opened chest. They quickly installed the Life Support on the Human and saw his blood pressure and pulse drop like a rock off a skyscraper.
They quickly injected the pink Nanomites into the Human's veins and begun to do their work to stop the bleeding. All the while, Jordan slowly tried to rise from his place as he moaned out. "Home." he moaned until... He dropped onto the table!
The life support went static. And they looked to see that the blood : pressure and pulse were at absolute zero. Galactic Ranger, savior of the Solana Galaxy, and great friend Jordan L. Thompson..
Is dead!
THE END?
Viewers: Well that's kind've an abrupt ending don't you think?
MedicineMan: IK. But I need to move onto MVM and get it done soon, so for now, this is the ending to OFA (Redux) ;). That just leaves me with one question to you viewers...
SEQUEL?
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