Update #3
Hello everyone.
The poll has been taken down and asI glance at the results, I'm a bit surprised to see that only 15 people voted - but the results speaks for themselves.
13 people voted for see the story re-written completely, while only 2 wanted me to continue it as it was. I will let this story remain up for a while longer so followers, old and new, can be re-directed to the new version but I'll eventually delete this one.
Expect to see the new version uploaded in the very near future. Thank you everyone who voted and all of you who've followed the story so far!