A/N:: Thank you everyone. :) Things have been better lately, so far...Day two with no mean people. ;) hip hip, horray! Anyways, so far it seems no one minds the Macmanus brothers in this story, if you have any problem with them you can message me and tell me KINDLY...but really I don't think it'll change anything. ;) So deal with it...but so far all of you don't seem having problems with them...because they like...ROCK.
Ok I MUST thank Yazzy x, your AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING. WONDERFUL AMAZING. WONDERFUL COOL. AWESOME...You get the point...well let me say, you sure can make me crack up into laughing tears, our private messages make me smile soooo hard it hurts! not really though, you rock!
Anddd, to my older smutty AWESOME sister, Kaye (also known as SOA loving mom), YOU ROCK. YOU ROCK. YOU ROCK...and make me need to take cold showers every night since my fan isn't good enough. ;P You are the Queen of Smut...and if no one has read her stories, you SHOULD. totally...and word of advice, if you read 'Winter Heat', make sure to have a fan and to take cold showers afterwards ;P Intense.
Definetelywalkerbait, Ramblin rose, SOA loving mom (Kaye) - I support all of you, I love your stories and appreciate your support to me, stay strong, I got your backs and always will. I thank you deeply. Keep them chins up, we can beat these cruel haters. :D
**To the cruel haters who are giving us this bad support...Can you PLEASE just STOP bothering us, just LEAVE. US. ALONE. there is no reason to be bothering us with negative reviews and messages, no reason. If you got a reason, I would damn well like to hear it, if you don't...well simply, FUCK OFF you clueless bastards! :( Fuck all you cruel people and just leave us the fuck alone! Either stop bothering us or GO TO HELL. I hate what your doing to us writers and its GOT TO STOP. now...its NOT now or never, its NOW. Right now, right here. Just stop this shit, you have no reason to do what your doing! SO JUST STOP IT! Move on and GET A LIFE fucked-up lonely shitty faced idiots. :( URG. - If you think you can get away with doing this to us, you need to think again...doing this isn't proving ANYTHING, other than (like Kaye said) that your CHICKENSHIT fuckers, and for damn sake, if your going to review like that, atleast log in or give us your name/username! Damn! You cowards. Bravery is your least quality...HELL, it ain't even a quality of yours, if ya can't even log in. Fuckers...These grams are fucked up and need to STOP NOW. I'm serious now...I know by now i'm rambling, BUT this needs to stop. I hate it, i'm over my head about this shit and Please, just please, i'll be the nice one here...if you think my hurting us its helping you, then let me tell you this, by hurting us, your actually hurting yourselves, because by being fat bullies, your proving your mean bitches that are just plain STUPID...ok, i'm gonna stop rambling for now, but mark my word, I am gonna NEED to make another Author's Note chapter to let off steam because the nasty grams are starting up again...LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE YOU SICK PEOPLE! D: URG. #$ ^%!*& #&*&%$ ^^$# ^^&&$# Yourselves, because no one else will do it for you! dumb sluts...**
Anyways, enough of my talk, got a little fired up, ok let me cool down here...-sigh-...lets read chapter 20! 20 chapters...wow, ;P
Merle yawned, looking out at the treeline, he turned to Gunner and smirked, "damn fuckin' borin' out here. What ya been doin' with that new prick..the fucked up Irish one"
Gunner grinned, "he is such a pussy. So nervous and shit, hardly talked though. We heard some noises though, a sound like paper being messed up and like...slapping noises and whispering. You think someone is out there?"
Merle looked at him and the rescue team down at the treeline froze. Shit, that was them..Rick with his paper and Glenn, T-Dog and Maggie kitty fighting, they all held there breathe as Merle sighed, "shit. We do have two prisoners from that damn prison group..and one is my brother. Well I know both the fuckers, I think the rest of their pethetic group is out there, might be them. Who fuckin' cares, we'll check in the mornin'" He looked out at the trees, "ass hats"
Gunner grinned, "your brother is a pussy?"
"Fuck ya. Wouldn' come with me..live with me. Stayed with those prison fucks!" He growled, narrowing his eyes.
Rick looked at the three partners with him and sighed, they we're pretty pathetic right now...He turned his attention back to Merle who was trying to keep his cool.
Gunner sighed, "fuck. But that woman is fuckin' hot. Good tits on her, most likly a animal in bed" he licked his lips as Merle laughed,
"yeah, but it seems Daryl has a 'thing' with her. Fucked up pussy" He grinned evily.
Gunner smirked, "Martinez get to her yet?"
Merle nodded and Gunner's smirk widdened, "Fuck. He probally watched it all, hell yeah. Stupid fucks"
"Hey. That's my idiot brother ya talkin' 'bout" He pointed his finger at Gunner and Gunner backed up, putting his hands up,
"Sorry man" He shook his head innocently and Merle nodded, letting his hand drop,
"now, how 'bout them women" Merle grinned,
Gunner looked over at Merle and they both smirked, the thought made them go hard.
Carol groaned, her head was aching. Her hand went to her forehead on instinct as she opened her eyes and squinted at Daryl who was smirking at her, she tilted her head and grunted at him, clearly annoyed, "what are you smirking at Dixon?"
Daryl shrugged, trying to act innocent, "nothin'. Ya just look cute when ya pissed"
"Shut up" She hissed as the ache continued, she had a spliting headache, last night Daryl had 'accidently' pushed Carol over and she hit her head a little and now she had a headache, "it was your fault!"
'Atleast we havin' been gettin' tortured yet" He stated, and it was true, day two with no beatings.
Carol sighed, "yeah, don't jinks it"
Daryl just huffed, "someone's grumpy"
"you caused it!" She wailed, glaring daggers at him.
He just smirked, "poor baby"
She hissed vemon at him, "Daryl Dixon, your a asshole"
Daryl stared at her, "and your dirty when your pissed"
"You havn't seen the half of it" she smirked and his eyes widened as he cussed under his breath at the tease he set up.
She just laughed, "got you there Dixon, your turn!" She beamed with pride as he thought a storm up.
"Aww, fuck ya Carol. I don't think i wanna see the more of ya" He hissed, looking away.
"your just saying that because I got you cornered!" She teased, making him turn read and refuse, "not"
She just rolled her eyes and right when she was about to reply, the day went bad. The door opened and in stepped Merle. Merle grinned at Daryl then turned hos gaze to Carol, giving her a nod. He sighed and watched his brother fum around as Carol sat beside him.
Merle wasn't the best kid in the classroom, but he knew things and he knew his brother lied about him and Carol being lovers, they aren't. He knew it and Daryl only said that to save her from being raped, well its time for payback. He glared at his brother as Daryl stared back, no glare.
"Ya know baby bro, I was beginnin' to think ya actually got ya a chick" he growled, "ya lied. She ain't ya lover. Ya fucked up trash. Ya never knew what ya we're doin'. Always the sweet one, like what ya saved them kids and always took the beatin' for me from our Pa. Ya did it all, ya took the pain and sufferin' and time to help others, even ya fucked up brother. Ya ain't no chickenshit, for sure, but ya damn niceness can go over the line sometimes, ya need ta know what ta stop fuckin' around and let what happens, happen. I care 'bout ya...well, maybe, but anyways, ya need to pull ya shit together and get a hold of ya shit, ya can't be helpin' everyone, ya learned that. I mean look at ya scars, those we're from helpin' me from sufferin' them damn beatin'. Ya almost got killed once by our Pa, he took a damn knife to ya and tried to skin ya!" Merle suddently stopped his rambling, shivering as he remembered the night his brother almost got skinned by their pa trying to save Merle, then he sighed, looking at his boots, "bro, ya gonna get killed helpin' and it ain't gonna do ya no good"
Daryl looked at his feet, letting his brother's words sink in, he stayed silent. Carol was tensed beside him but he took no notice as Merle's words replayed in his head, he stared at his scars over and over. Maybe Merle was right...no that's bullshit, he isn't right...but maybe he is...shut up, he ain't...URG. Carol was breathing slow as she tried to keep her cool and Daryl seemed to be having a war with himself over what Merle said.
As if Merle knew Daryl couldn't decide, he growled and yanked Carol up a little too hard, motioning for Daryl to stay put on the ground and he did as told. Carol gulped as Merle looked her over, there was nothing in the room except for the Dixons and her, no tables or chairs. Nothing. She whimpered as he pushed her onto all fours, staring towards Daryl. Daryl knew instantly what Merle was planning on doing and so did Carol.
Daryl looked at Carol with wide eyes, full or terror and realization. She had silent tears falling down her face as Merle pulled her pants down to be at her mid-thigh, making Daryl un-able to see any of Carol he hadn't already seen, then she froze. Merle was un-zipping his pants and Daryl was shaking his head, his eyes wide as he stared into Carol's silently pleading eyes. She closed her eyes as she felt Merle's erection rub against her leg but she didn't fight back, she didn't whimper, didn't flinch, didn't tense, didn't resist, didn't do nothing as the oldest Dixon brother thrusted into her, filling her and bringing pain up her stomach. She bit her lip hard as she felt Merle stretch her, he was big, bigger than she was able to hold, so it hurt as he moved in her, he was smirking as Daryl trembled, watching helplessly. But what could he do? Hell, he could do ANYTHING to help her at this moment. He wasn't tied up, he wasn't held against his will, he was free to do what he wanted, but as he brother said...he needed to stop helping, let his old side back out. The one where he only cared about himself, where he was fowl and the redneck he use to be, cruel and dirty-mouthed. And he would listen to the Dixon brother because he knew he was right, hes had too many close calls because of his good side, and it was time for it to go. He narrowed his eyes as his brother withdrew from the whimpering Carol. He hadn't came, neither did she, but he knew he point was made to Daryl just by his younger brother's actions. He zipped his pants up as Carol quickly did hers, a little bit of blood fell on her thighs and on her pants as she did, but she didn't respond. Merle gave her one last look before closing the door.
Carol fell onto her back, her legs shaking and stiff as she breathed hard and started to sob. Sob harder than ever. Daryl just sat there, imaging her terrified face in his mind, flashing at him and he did NOTHING. why? Why didn't he help? WHY!? Carol sobbed harder, he didn't help her, he could have..but he let his brother get to him, he let his brother control him, tell him what was right and now she lay here, raped by his brother and he did NOTHING.
She sighed, where the hell is Daryl Dixon? Where the HELL is the Daryl Dixon she knew? Where is he?
Gunner was relieved from watch, leaving Connor taking night shift with Martinez who was smirking a storm. Shit, how was Connor going to get past Martinez to the bathroom...he surely wouldn't let him! The plan must be on delay, he sighed as the stronger man spoke up, "Merle fucked her. Fucked the woman and the redneck watched. Wish I saw it. It was fucking awesome, the shit holes will never doubt us again!"
Connor just nodded, that was horriable, "yeah. I guess so"
Martinez eyed him, "you feel bad for them?"
Connor shook his head quickly, averting his eyes, "no, I don't at all. They needed it"
Martinez nodded, "good. I'm starting to like you Irish. I am, but you better be on our side"
Connor gave him a curt nod and a serious face, "I am"
That seemed to be all the man needed and he just smirked, scanning the tree line. Connor let out a sigh and scanned the tree line himself, this was going to be harder than he thought.
A/N:: I HATE writing rape, I never usually do...but I just HAD to..it fit well with the minipulating Merle did to Daryl...sorry if you hate it, don't hate me. :( I hate myself already for doing it, but it had to be done...but I promise that will be the ONLY time it actually happens, there might be what the governor or Martinez did to her, like close calls to raping but not anymore of full rape...no, that I hate, hate writing it and feel bad for doing so...
So please, no mean reviews...I am NOT in the mood lately. Apprently my shoe is REALLY hard because I made this guy cry from hiting him with it...but it was only because he hit my sister with this foam thing, I don't know but I warned him not too and he still did it, he had it coming...i've just been on my last nerve lately and I feel like my boyfriend is gonna break up with me...so chins up and cross your fingers everything will be alright. :)
**OH AND SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE! not doing good lately. :(
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